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Mahobbat apni kabar me chhod aau kaise - 3rd December 2006, 01:10 AM

Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji


Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...


JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

aapki dost
pooja


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3rd December 2006, 08:31 AM

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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji


Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...


JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

aapki dost
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nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

hi pooja
kaisi ho yaar
aaj bahut lambe intzar ke baad tumhara koi kalam padne ko mila. hamesha ki tarah bade hi gahre ehsas bayaa.n kiye hain tumne. or is sher ki gaharii pr to main kurwab jaoo.n. kya soch hai waah.....................
pooja ab lagta hai tumhare jo ehsas hai.n wo bahut gahre hote ja rahe hain. aur ab bus jara sa wazan ( behar)main likha or seekh lo maza aajayega.
is behtren peshkas per meri daad kabool farmao yaar
shukriya
tumhara dost
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3rd December 2006, 09:50 AM

my dearest pooja

ab kya kahu main aur kuch maine to tumhari ghazal ekpehle to sirf do hi sher dekhe the aajto puri ghazal yaha dekhne ko mili sach me bahot hi dilkash ghazal lihi hai aapne har lafz iska dil ko chhu gaya bahot din bad hi sahi par likha to sahi!!!!!!!! ehsas bahot hi pyaar hain aur mujhe ek sher bahot hi pasand aaya

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...


bas yuhi likha kijiye hum tumhe yuhi padhte rahenge


dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenga khus rahiye

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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji


Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...


JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

aapki dost
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very nice written

special this one


Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

keep writting like this
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nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

hi pooja
kaisi ho yaar
aaj bahut lambe intzar ke baad tumhara koi kalam padne ko mila. hamesha ki tarah bade hi gahre ehsas bayaa.n kiye hain tumne. or is sher ki gaharii pr to main kurwab jaoo.n. kya soch hai waah.....................
pooja ab lagta hai tumhare jo ehsas hai.n wo bahut gahre hote ja rahe hain. aur ab bus jara sa wazan ( behar)main likha or seekh lo maza aajayega.
is behtren peshkas per meri daad kabool farmao yaar
shukriya
tumhara dost
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hi dost

mein to thik hi aap kaise ho? ji mujhe kuch likhne ke liye khayal ki jaroorat hoti hai aur ye khayal bade dino baad aya mujhe so isi pe likha itne arse baad. khayal apko pasand aye shukriya.

jijaroor mein behar pe ab se dhyan dungi. apki daad sar'ankho par dost.
be happy all'ways.

grazie

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my dearest pooja

haan ji my dearest dhaval

ab kya kahu main aur kuch
mat kaho ji kisne kaha hai kuch kehane ko.......hehehe

maine to tumhari ghazal ekpehle to sirf do hi sher dekhe the aajto puri ghazal yaha dekhne ko mili sach me bahot hi dilkash ghazal lihi hai aapne
sir ji ye to apki beharbani jo apne puuri gazal pasand kki hai....shukriya ji

har lafz iska dil ko chhu gaya bahot din bad hi sahi par likha to sahi!!!!!!!!
hmmmm aap kahen to likhna chhod duuuu.................hehehe....just kidding

ehsas bahot hi pyaar hain aur mujhe ek sher bahot hi pasand aaya

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

shukriya 1ns again

bas yuhi likha kijiye hum tumhe yuhi padhte rahenge
ji be'shaqq

dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenga khus rahiye
huuzuuuur apki daad sar'aankho pe humare

aapka dost
dhvaal
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hello ji..........

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very nice written

special this one


Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

keep writting like this
thumara dost

nadeem kazi
namskaar ji,

ji shukriya 4 coming and liking....thanku so much...plz ate rahiyega....ok ji

grazie

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22nd December 2006, 12:31 AM

thanku sandhya ji, aapko yahan dekh ke bahot khushi hoti hai. yn hi saath deti rahyega apni iss dost ka.. shukriya ji...

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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji


Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...


JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

aapki dost
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meri pyari matko....!

teri yeh rachna bahut pasand aaye.....sach mai.n clap karne ko dil cha raha hai....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye....bahut badiya....har sher bahut khoobsurti se likha hai tumne, nice............!

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Thumbs up for pooja - 22nd December 2006, 10:32 AM

hi pooja ji
bahut achcha likha hai.

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....


these three quotes are relly good
nice always write like thisone.
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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji


Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...


JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

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Pooja...

Aaj tumhe pad ke jo khushi ka ehsaas hua woh bayaan nahi kar sakti.. aur dard dil ko choo gaya use bhi bayaan na kiya jaayega..

Saari hi rachna mujhe behad pasand aayi.. ek ek shab aur ek ek sher.. sab hi kaatil the..

Aise hi mehfil me rang sajaati raho..

Khush raho..

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meri pyari matko....!

teri yeh rachna bahut pasand aaye.....sach mai.n clap karne ko dil cha raha hai....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye....bahut badiya....har sher bahut khoobsurti se likha hai tumne, nice............!

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sabse pahale thanku apne ise pasand kiya. di apki gudiya bahot udaas hai aaj. koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta. bilkul tanha hu. sab apne kamo me uljhe rehate hai. kisiko fikar nahi meri......mein kya bol rahi hu uska kisipe asar hi nahi hota. mujhe sab ne sach me ek gudiya hi samajh liye. ek bejaan gudiya. jo jaise chahe waise suluuk kar ke chala jaata hai. ye bhi nahi sochta ki uske ruff an tuff hone se mujhpe kya biit'ti hogi. meri baate kisi pe koi asar nahi daalti. koi baat nahi. yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. bahot khushi hui ye sab bardash kar ke......

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Angry pyaar - 23rd December 2006, 02:21 AM

Pyaar kya hai,ke lamha ya zindagi,ek sapna ya haqueqat,pyaar ek aina hai,sapna nahi,jo dikhta to hai par mehsus kiya nahi ja sakta,bus jod raha hue us toote aine ko,jo mere dil ki tarah hai,toota to hai par juda nahin ja sakta
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hi pooja ji
bahut achcha likha hai.

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....


these three quotes are relly good
nice always write like thisone.
have a nice day
bye

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ji aapne iss kadar pasand kiya, bahot achha laga. ynhi saath dete rahiyega humara....to hum ynhi likhte raheng.....
ok ji

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Har Dhadkan Main Ek Raaz hota hai - 27th December 2006, 04:57 PM

Dear Pooja ji,
Aap ki Gazal Achi Lagi . Keep going on ---

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27th December 2006, 05:19 PM

thanku priya di.....

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27th December 2006, 05:21 PM

sumeet ji shukriya

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27th December 2006, 05:28 PM

ashok ji sabse pahale shukriya ise pasand karne k liye.....

apka sher haqikat bhi lagta hai aur fasana bhi....kya kahu ab age..

SHAMA KE PYAR ME JALNA YE PAGAL PARVANE JANTE HAI,
MAHOBBAT ME UTHH KAR GIRNA SIRF DINVANE JANTE HAI....

ok ji saath dete rahiyega...

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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji

Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...

JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

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wah di apki gazal ab me ek ek karke saari padh raha hu bahut achi gazal likhte ho app aur in gazal me apka ye share to di bahut acha hai
nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...


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Smile frnd 4 ever - 2nd April 2008, 04:15 PM

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Badon ko pranaam dosto ko namskaar,
aaj mein apni ek nai gazal ke saath yahan haazir hu. ummid hai apka saath milega sada ki tarha....gour kijiye ji

Khaak me mil jayegi shaksiyat meri gar tu chala gaya, jiite ji mar jayegi JAAN ye teri gar tu chala gaya, NAA JANA CHHOD KE MUJHE KABHI...SAVAAL KARUNGI BAHOT GAR TU CHALA GAYA...HAA GAR TU CHALA GAYA

Bichad gai saanse meri, bina ruh tan chalu kaise,
khuda ne milaya tujhse, khuda se gila jatau kaise...

kured kured ke likha thha naam tera apne dil pe,
ab dil se naam mitau to akhir mitau kaise...

nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...

jin raaton me shadiiik mahhobbat kii thhi tuune,
aaj un suunii raaton ko mein sulaau kaise...

panaahon me teri din biite umar guuzari,
fiir teri yaadon ko dil se bhuulau kaise...

in nigaaho me tassavur hai tera aaj bhi,
banaake ashq tujhe nigaho se giraau kaise...

bachaati rahi jiss chaman ko fiizao ke rukh se,
aaj usi chaman ko sehara me bahau kaise....

ba'basta rahi "POOJA" ki khushiya sadaa tujhse,
ab tu hi bataa zindagi pe apni kaffan bichhau kaise...

JAVAAB DE, AAKHIR MAHOBBAT APNI KABAR ME CHHOD AAU KAISE

**=====---(((((<<<<<<SILENT TEARS>>>>>)))))---=====**

grazie

aapki dost
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Aadab pooja ji,
kaise hai aap?

maafi chahte hain bohot der se aapki ghazal se ru_ba_ru ho sake,

sach dil khush ho gaya aapki ghazal padh kar,bohot hi achhi koshish ki hai aapne
aapki ghazal ka ek ek ashaar kabile tarif hai,
is mukammal koshish k liye dili daad kabul kijiye.

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wah di apki gazal ab me ek ek karke saari padh raha hu bahut achi gazal likhte ho app aur in gazal me apka ye share to di bahut acha hai
nishan baki hai ab bhi tere labo ke mere gaalo pe,
lahu bahake palkon se in galo ko neh'lau kaise...
thanku bhaai jaan......

apni is puraani post ko fir se dekhke achha laga....ise likhne me mere bahot pyaare dost Dilip ji ne madad ki thhi.....sach unko bahot miss karti hu.....whatever thanku once again..

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kya baat hai pooja ji kya baat hai,bahut hi bahut hi accha likha hai apne,likhte rahe,sukriya,apka....baagi....


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Aadab pooja ji,
kaise hai aap?

maafi chahte hain bohot der se aapki ghazal se ru_ba_ru ho sake,

sach dil khush ho gaya aapki ghazal padh kar,bohot hi achhi koshish ki hai aapne
aapki ghazal ka ek ek ashaar kabile tarif hai,
is mukammal koshish k liye dili daad kabul kijiye.

khush rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ
Bahot bahot shukriya saraahne ke liye...

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