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~.. मेरे अन्दर ठहरी जो अना - 10th March 2009, 09:52 AM

मेरे अन्दर ठहरी जो अना
करेगी इक दिन मुझे फना


mere andar thahri jo anaa
karegi ik din mujhe fana

आंबला सुखा के मर्तबान में
मौसी ने भेजी है दवा


amblaa sukha ke martbaan mai
mousi ne bheji hai dava


उसने मुझको चूमा और
मैं छाले सा फूट पड़ा


usne mujhko chooma aur
mai chaale sa foot pada


तेरे हिज्र की पहली रात
चाँद भी मुझसे लड़ पड़ा


tere hizr ki pahli raat
chand bhi mujhse lad pada

आ बाँट के झगडा ख़त्म करे
इतना तेरा बाकि मेरा खुदा


aa baant ke jhagda khatm kare
itna tera baki mera khuda

भला तो मेरा सब चाहे
करे न कोई मेरा भला


bhala to mera sab chahe
kare na koe mera bhala

सोते हुए भी जागा किये
फिराक है सच बुरी बाला


sote hue bhi jaga kiye
firaak hai sach buri bala

मेरी सोच भी दलदल है
कोई न डूबे मेरी तरह


meri soch bhi daldal hai
koe na doobe meri tarah

तू अपने मायके मे होगी
हाय कैसे रहूँगा मै भला


tu apne mayke mai hogi
haye ! kaise rahunga mai bhala

साया मेरे सर चढ़ के
बोले बता कौन बड़ा


saya mere sar chad ke
bole bata kuan bada
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kya baat hai janumanu ji, bohot khoob kaha hai

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12th March 2009, 10:55 PM

Masha-allah............kya khoob kaha hai aapne.......khoobsurat poetry par dil se daad hazir hai, kabool farmaiye.

kush rahiye


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Masha-allah............kya khoob kaha hai aapne.......khoobsurat poetry par dil se daad hazir hai, kabool farmaiye.

kush rahiye
ji aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa

padhne aur sarahne ke liye
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मेरे अन्दर ठहरी जो अना
करेगी इक दिन मुझे फना


mere andar thahri jo anaa
karegi ik din mujhe fana

आंबला सुखा के मर्तबान में
मौसी ने भेजी है दवा


amblaa sukha ke martbaan mai
mousi ne bheji hai dava


उसने मुझको चूमा और
मैं छाले सा फूट पड़ा


usne mujhko chooma aur
mai chaale sa foot pada


तेरे हिज्र की पहली रात
चाँद भी मुझसे लड़ पड़ा


tere hizr ki pahli raat
chand bhi mujhse lad pada

आ बाँट के झगडा ख़त्म करे
इतना तेरा बाकि मेरा खुदा


aa baant ke jhagda khatm kare
itna tera baki mera khuda

भला तो मेरा सब चाहे
करे न कोई मेरा भला


bhala to mera sab chahe
kare na koe mera bhala

सोते हुए भी जागा किये
फिराक है सच बुरी बाला


sote hue bhi jaga kiye
firaak hai sach buri bala

मेरी सोच भी दलदल है
कोई न डूबे मेरी तरह


meri soch bhi daldal hai
koe na doobe meri tarah

तू अपने मायके मे होगी
हाय कैसे रहूँगा मै भला


tu apne mayke mai hogi
haye ! kaise rahunga mai bhala

साया मेरे सर चढ़ के
बोले बता कौन बड़ा


saya mere sar chad ke
bole bata kuan bada

JITNE tareef karu utini kam hai,bahut khoob


shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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मेरे अन्दर ठहरी जो अना
करेगी इक दिन मुझे फना


mere andar thahri jo anaa
karegi ik din mujhe fana

आंबला सुखा के मर्तबान में
मौसी ने भेजी है दवा


amblaa sukha ke martbaan mai
mousi ne bheji hai dava


उसने मुझको चूमा और
मैं छाले सा फूट पड़ा


usne mujhko chooma aur
mai chaale sa foot pada


तेरे हिज्र की पहली रात
चाँद भी मुझसे लड़ पड़ा


tere hizr ki pahli raat
chand bhi mujhse lad pada

आ बाँट के झगडा ख़त्म करे
इतना तेरा बाकि मेरा खुदा


aa baant ke jhagda khatm kare
itna tera baki mera khuda

भला तो मेरा सब चाहे
करे न कोई मेरा भला


bhala to mera sab chahe
kare na koe mera bhala

सोते हुए भी जागा किये
फिराक है सच बुरी बाला


sote hue bhi jaga kiye
firaak hai sach buri bala

मेरी सोच भी दलदल है
कोई न डूबे मेरी तरह


meri soch bhi daldal hai
koe na doobe meri tarah

तू अपने मायके मे होगी
हाय कैसे रहूँगा मै भला


tu apne mayke mai hogi
haye ! kaise rahunga mai bhala

साया मेरे सर चढ़ के
बोले बता कौन बड़ा


saya mere sar chad ke
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Masha Allah


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