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Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! umda peshkash.......

Garq na kar dey merii deewaangii mujhe
Chalo hum tum faasley badhaa letey haiN

Waaaahhhh!!!bohat khoob


kaash k humari mohabbat main itna asar hota

aati jo yaad unki,humari bechainyon ka unko khabar hota

na hote grr ye sarhaddon ki dooriyan aur waqt k faasle 'pak'

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Garq na kar dey merii deewaangii mujhe
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Waaaahhhhhh! simply outstanding & very romantic


FaQt ek pal terii qurbat kar luN haasil kabhii
Maut ko khushi sey keh duNgii khush-aamdeed
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re - 4th September 2014, 10:32 AM

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh! Ashwani jee .. bohat khoob...

aap se mohabbat hum baDay shoQ se karte haiN!
yaad aaye to hum aap ko yaad zoQ se karte haiN...

Wahhhh bahut behtreen Lines Hassan sahab

तेरा ख़याल न आये तो दिन नहीं होता

तेरी मिसाल न लाऊँ तो शाइरी क्या हो

Tera Khayal na Aaye to Din nahi hota
teri misaal na laau to shayri kya ho ....
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4th September 2014, 10:43 AM

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Wahhhh bahut behtreen Lines Hassan sahab

तेरा ख़याल न आये तो दिन नहीं होता

तेरी मिसाल न लाऊँ तो शाइरी क्या हो

Tera Khayal na Aaye to Din nahi hota
teri misaal na laau to shayri kya ho ....
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waaaahhhhhhh! bohat bohat khoob Ashwani jee....

wafa ki laaj meiN us ko manaa lete to achaa tha
anaa ki jang meiN aksar judayi jeet jaati hai...

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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waaaahhhhhhh! bohat bohat khoob Ashwani jee....

wafa ki laaj meiN us ko manaa lete to achaa tha
anaa ki jang meiN aksar judayi jeet jaati hai...

-nm

baHUT HE UMDA LINES HASSAN BHAI
Mera Dil Hi Jaanta Hai Dono Manzar Maine Dekhe Hain....!!
Tere Aane Pe Kya Guzri Tere Jaane Pe Kya Guzri....!!
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DUAO K SATH AAPKA
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4th September 2014, 12:05 PM

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Mera Dil Hi Jaanta Hai Dono Manzar Maine Dekhe Hain....!!
Tere Aane Pe Kya Guzri Tere Jaane Pe Kya Guzri....!!
NOT Mine
DUAO K SATH AAPKA
ASHWANI
waaahhh.... wahhh! bohat khooob Ahwani jee...

kahaaN kisi ko naseeb huaa hai baagh-e-jinaan
ek saraab ke peechey kyuN waQt ganwaayeN hum


baaghay jinaan : jannat
saraab : mirage


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Mera Dil Hi Jaanta Hai Dono Manzar Maine Dekhe Hain....!!
Tere Aane Pe Kya Guzri Tere Jaane Pe Kya Guzri....!!
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DUAO K SATH AAPKA
ASHWANI

Bahut khoob Ashwani Ji...
Jawab arz karta hu...


Tere aane se tab, roshan sa lagta tha jahaa'n mujhko...
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Tere jane pe main, jannat ko bhi veeran likhta hu...


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Re -sher ka jawab sher me - 4th September 2014, 12:16 PM

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Bahut khoob Ashwani Ji...
Jawab arz karta hu...


Tere aane se tab, roshan sa lagta tha jahaa'n mujhko...
:
Tere jane pe main, jannat ko bhi veeran likhta hu...
BAhut He achhe Lekhraaz bhai .... Aapke sab sher kabil e tarif hote hai...

JAwab ki koshish karte hai ham bhi

Tumhara Naam Likhne Ki Ijazat Chen Gayi Jab Se..
Koi Bhi Lafz Likhta Hon Tu Ankheen Bheeg Jati Hai..

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BAhut He achhe Lekhraaz bhai .... Aapke sab sher kabil e tarif hote hai...

JAwab ki koshish karte hai ham bhi

Tumhara Naam Likhne Ki Ijazat Chen Gayi Jab Se..
Koi Bhi Lafz Likhta Hon Tu Ankheen Bheeg Jati Hai..

NOT MINE

Housala badhane k liye bahut bahut shukriya Ashwani Ji...

Jo mera naam likkho to, bas apne dil pe likh lena...
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Mujhe mash'hoor mat karna,
mahaj kajaz k tukdo se...


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Re -sher ka jawab sher me - 4th September 2014, 06:27 PM

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Housala badhane k liye bahut bahut shukriya Ashwani Ji...

Jo mera naam likkho to, bas apne dil pe likh lena...
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Mujhe mash'hoor mat karna,
mahaj kajaz k tukdo se...
bahut he aala janab

किसको फुर्सत है सुने शेर में गहरी बातें ,अपने अशआर के मेयार से डर लगता है
Kisko Fursat hai sune sher me gehri baatien,apne ashaar k meyar se dar lagta hai

जाने क्या छाप दें ,ख़बरों की तिजारत के लिए हमको हर सुब्ह के अखबार से डर लगता है
Jaane kya chaap de khabro ki tijarat k liye hamko har subha k akhbaar se dar lagta hai

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Bahot khoob SH.....awesome sharing touched my heart......


Aahdee huN majmoN kii mujhe kahkashaaoN meiN dhundnaa
Jo na miluN to phir mujhe khalaaoN meiN dhundnaa
Yu'n mohabbat se na hum Ahbaabo.n ko pukaar,
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!! Shaan saheb.. bohat khoob!
bohat hi aala-darjay ka khayaal pesh kiya hai aap ne..

aadmi aadmi se milta hai
dil magar kam kisi se milta hai

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!! Shaan saheb.. bohat khoob!
bohat hi aala-darjay ka khayaal pesh kiya hai aap ne..

aadmi aadmi se milta hai
dil magar kam kisi se milta hai

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rog dushman ko bhi Ya Rab na lagaana dil ka


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Bahut khub n@zneen sahiba umda sher

Ye muhabbat ki kahani nahin marti lakin.....
Log kirdar nibhate hoe mar jate hain..........

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Bahot khoob sharing ashwani ji


JaaN nikalney ki kya wajaH hogi
Roothey yaar kii berukhi hogi
Khuda jane kya wajah hogi is berukhi ki,
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Tum to galey hi pad gaye bhari baazaar meiN
hahahaha..... bahot khoob


now a serious one

Uuff ye Nakhat aur teri fitrat-o-tabaa
Uspe mera Ishq... jo kabhi Dereena nahi hota


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small correction......


Uff..… ye Nakhat aur teri fitrat-e-taabaaN
Uspe mera Ishq... jo kabhi DereenaH nahi hota


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I just cant believe it this is sooooooooo romantic SH....

Tu shayar to nahiN.....magar tujhe shayari aagai

Seeney meiN dafaN hajr ko jumbish de gaya
BarsoN ki terii mashaqqat karamat kar gayiN


IshQ hai tumse... mashaqqat kii parwaH nahiN,
Tumhe chaha tha, chahengey, aur koi armaaN nahiN


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IshQ hai tumse... mashaqqat kii parwaH nahiN,
Tumhe chaha tha, chahengey, aur koi armaaN nahiN

aadaab !

moHteram yeh ager maqta'h hai to qaafia bandee theek nahi lag rahi mujhy ... baaqi app behter jaaty haiN


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aadaab !

moHteram yeh ager maqta'h hai to qaafia bandee theek nahi lag rahi mujhy ... baaqi app behter jaaty haiN


Muhabbat ki khatir, zamane se ladna,
Zamane ki khatir, muhabbat bhulana

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Janab Hume Shayri ka 'S' bhi nahin aata, your suggestions are most welcome in this regard....

Lehja yaar me zeher hai bichoo ki tarah,
woh mujhe AAP to kehta hai.... Par TU Ki tarah

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app to khafaa ho gaey haiN shayad ... ma'zrat khuwaa hoN moHteram . bus arz mujhy laga shayad maqtaa'hai is liye parwah or armaaN ka qaafia theek nahieeN hai ... intehaai ma'zrat khuwaa hoN moHteram

Belaus dhar rahe hain wo ilzam mere sar,
Chahe nazar milane ki auqat ho na ho.


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Mujeebji i think you mean to say 'matlaa' shayad galtise 'maqta' likh diya aapne




Bahot khoob SH very touching i am impressed


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Sayyad tune kiya muhabbat kii qafas meiN qaid
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Sayyad tune kiya muhabbat kii qafas meiN qaid
Waahh..Waaahh...

Muhabbat k qafas me qaid hokar humne jana ki...
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Be-ishq aazadi, badi be-rang hoti hai...
waaahhhh wahhhhhhh Lekhraj jee.. bohat bohat khoob..
daad hi daad is ba-kamaal sher ke liye....


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Roya karein gay aap bhi pahron issi tarhan....!!!
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Bahut khoob Ashwani ji...


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Dil jalaa kar roshan teri raaheiN kar duN
IshQ-e-junooN ki daleel aur kya duN

Waahh waahh...Bahut khoob Nazneen ji...

Usne dil jalake, raah to roshan kar di...Lekin...
Tanha manzil pe pahuchkar, bas andhera naseeb tha...


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Waahh waahh...Bahut khoob Nazneen ji...

Usne dil jalake, raah to roshan kar di...Lekin...
Tanha manzil pe pahuchkar, bas andhera naseeb tha...
bahut achhe lekhraaz ji daad kabul kare

Andhera Ho gaya Hai...!
Chalo Ab Dil Jalate Hain...

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Hum hum hi rehtey, na paraye hotey
waahh! waahh!.. bohat khoob.. bohat umdaH...


mohabbat karna sikhaaya KhaaliQ ne.!
pyar hi pyar bharra hai dil meiN Maalik ne..
koi chah ke bhi door bhaag nahi sakta
ishQ toH karna hai zeest ke saalik ne..


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dil-o-jaaN ko to baich hi daala.....!
ab mujhe baichni hai laash, apni.....!



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Zinda insaan ki keemat nahi bazaar-e-ishq me...
ek be-jaan se putle ko koi kya dekhega...


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ek be-jaan se putle ko koi kya dekhega...
wwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh! Lekhraj jee..
bohat khoob... janab... kia kehne aap ke..


ab iss se bhaD kar kia ho ehtiyaat-e-wafaa!
apna haal tabaaH hai lekin laboN per hansi hai..


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bohat khoob... janab... kia kehne aap ke..


ab iss se bhaD kar kia ho ehtiyaat-e-wafaa!
apna haal tabaaH hai lekin laboN per hansi hai..
Shukriya Hassan saheb....bahut bahut shukriya...

Zamane se ishq ki asal surat chhupati hai...
Ye aashiqo'n ki hasi bhi to, badi jaal-saaz hai...



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Shukriya Hassan saheb....bahut bahut shukriya...

Zamane se ishq ki asal surat chhupati hai...
Ye aashiqo'n ki hasi bhi to, badi jaal-saaz hai...

wah..bohat khoob


Idhar aa sitamgar hunar azmayeiN,
Tu teer aazma hum jigar azmayeiN.

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