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Door Jaa Kar Wo Yaad Bahot Aayegi - 6th November 2003, 03:30 PM

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI.

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6th November 2003, 03:46 PM

bhut bhut bhut acha hai ye sher such.

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI.


mein kya khun bas yahi yaad aya hai-------


na dekho aab idar udar
paaoge unhe har taraf
woh to har soo mein nazar ayenge
jidar bhi hum nazar ghumayenge.

aap anshomein nahi unko har taraf paa sakte ho jara nazar to uthao na plssssss

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hello - 6th November 2003, 03:57 PM

waah bhai waah manoj ji..kya sher likha hai aapne!!! bahut pasand aaya..


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6th November 2003, 04:03 PM

na dekho aab idar udar
paaoge unhe har taraf
woh to har soo mein nazar ayenge
jidar bhi hum nazar ghumayenge.

priye sakhi ji
hamesha ki hi tarah bahot acha likha hai aapne....aap ka sher bahoot kuch keh gaya hai....dil ki gehraiyon se aap ka shukarguzar hoon.likhte rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiyega.
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6th November 2003, 04:22 PM

waah bhai waah,


yuN hi likh likh ke jagaate rahiye,
dil ki dhadkano ko badhate rahiye,
banjer mein bhi phul khilate rahiye,
kuchh naker sake to muskurate rahiye




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6th November 2003, 04:55 PM

Are wah, bohot khub. Short & sweet. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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6th November 2003, 06:39 PM

hallo manoj ji apko sher pasand aaya thanx a lots.
ye apke sher ka hgi ans tha meri side se apko .
aapko bhi shukriya reply ke liye aur pyaare se sher ke liye
urs
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akant ji apka reply bhi bhut khub hai janab
bhut acha shere likha hai apne daad kubul kare sakhi ki.
apke sher ne aur manoj ji ke sher ne mil ke dadhkan to bada hi dii hai janab.just kidding
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6th November 2003, 08:21 PM

yuN hi likh likh ke jagaate rahiye,
dil ki dhadkano ko badhate rahiye,
banjer mein bhi phul khilate rahiye,
kuchh naker sake to muskurate rahiye

AKANT BHAI
aap ki hauslaafzai ke liye shukriya....behad acha sher likha hai aapne...ham muskurate rahenge yeh wada hai aapse,,,aap bhi sada yun hi shayri ke naye naye gul khilate rahiye....
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6th November 2003, 08:35 PM

shimul ji
kaisi hai aap...behad acha laga aap ki hauslaafzai paa kar...aap ka tahe dil se shukriya kehta hoon...apna khayal rakhiyega
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6th November 2003, 08:42 PM

priye sakhi ji
bahoot bahoot shukriya....aap ke reply ke bina meri har rachna adhoori hai....aapne mere liye sher kaha mein is izzat afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya kahta hoon...bas yehi chahunga mein ki aap sada isi khubsurti se likhte rahein....apna khayal rakhiyega..
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7th November 2003, 03:16 AM

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI.


ab kya kahen bahut acha hai.jane vale laut kar to ate nahin hain.but it's really sweet
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7th November 2003, 04:32 PM

puunu ji
dil se shukrguzar hoon mein aap ki izzat afjai ka...magar aap plzz yeh na kahiye ki jane wale laut ke nahin aate,,,,KYUN KI unke laut ke aane ki umeed mein hi to ham jiye ja rahe hai...
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8th November 2003, 05:37 PM

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI.

Manoj bhai,

Humesha ki tarah iss baar bhi bahut achha llikha hai. Hume kisi chiz ki kimat tabhi maloom chalti hai jab wo humse door chali jati hai. Thoda gustakhi karna chahtaa hoon aap ki saan mai, ek dost samjh kar maaf kar dena.

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
CHAND MAI USS KI SURAT HI JHILMILAIEGI.

Umeed karta hoon ki aap humari khataa ko nazar andaaz karengey. Dil ne nahi maana to likh diya. Aap ne khud hi to likha tha ki nisha ji ki kalam par ansoon to anmol hai. Use ankhon ke andar hi rahne dijiye.

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8th November 2003, 06:09 PM

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI.

MANOJ saahib, kya khoob likha hai aapne...in chand words mein...bahut hee sundar...wo yaad rehne waale har waqt zehan mein rehte hain...mitaye se mit ti nahin unki yaad...bashir badr sahab kee do lines yaad aati hain...

yaad kisii kii chaa.Ndanii ban kar koThe koThe utarii hai
yaad kisii kii dhuup hu_ii hai ziinaa ziinaa utarii hai

phir yaadon ke siwa rehta hee kya hai...yeh bhi phisal jaayein to bus...yoon hi likhte rahiye...khayal rakhein apna...ab chalti hoon


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8th November 2003, 06:26 PM

DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
CHAND MAI USS KI SURAT HI JHILMILAIEGI.

Manish bhai
behaad acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar,,,aur plzzzz "muafi" jaise shabd ka istemaal kar ke mujhe sharminda na kijiye....yeh to meri khushkismati hai ki aap ne yahan apne jazbaat kahe,,,mein aap ki bhavnaon ki behad qadar karta hoon,,,,aap ne bilkool sahi kahan ki nisha ji ke page par hamne hi yeh kaha tha ki aasoo anmol hai..sach hai....
ek baar fir aap ki hauslaafzai ka dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar rahunga
likhte rahiye
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hi - 8th November 2003, 06:27 PM

hi manoj ji
"DOOR JAA KAR WO YAAD BAHOT AAYEGI
WO DILKASH AAWAZ REH REH KE TADPAYEGI
JAB BHI DEKENGE HAM CHAAND KO TANHAIYON MEIN
AANSUON MEIN WO SURAT JHILMILAYEGI."

aap hum kya bole aap ke shyer ko lakar....aap ka shyer kise ke tareef ka mohtaj nahi hai...
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8th November 2003, 06:31 PM

yaad kisii kii chaa.Ndanii ban kar koThe koThe utarii hai
yaad kisii kii dhuup hu_ii hai ziinaa ziinaa utarii hai

Parastaar ji
behad shukarguzar hoon mein ki aap ne apna waqt nikaal kar hamare sher ko padha aur yahan aa kar hamari hausla afzai ki....aap ne sach farmaya hai ki dil mein rehne wale yaad bahoot aate hai,,kyun ki dil unki yaadon ke saaye mein pahunch kar hi sukoon pata hai....keh sakte hai ki yaadein hi hai jeene ka sahara..
bashir badr saheb ka sher keh kar aapne hamari adhoori baat ko pura kar diya ho mano....aap ki hauslaafzai ka ek baar phir shukriya kehta hoon...apna khayal rakhiyega...
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ARVIND SAHEB
aap ne kam shabdon mein hi bahoot kuch keh diya,,,behad acha laga aap ko yahn dekh kar....aap ki hauslaafzai ka dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar hoon....
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