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yeh rishta bhi koi rishta hai!!
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Sad yeh rishta bhi koi rishta hai!! - 5th November 2003, 01:30 PM

salaam doston,

ummeed karti hun aap sabhi khairiyat se honge. aaj phir kuch likkha hai, aap sabhi ke beech apne dard baatne aayi hu.apni raye aur mashwarhe se mujhe waqif aap sabhi karayenge iski umeed karti hun.

shaam ki surmayi ankhon ko jis tarah chand ka intezaar hota hai,
us bewafa yaar ki yaad mein phir mera yeh bebas dil rota hai.

chaand ke aate hi jis tarah yeh aasmaan phirse roshan hota hai,
asuon ke aate hi ankhon me ek ajab sa dhundhla pan hota hai.

timtimati sitaaron ki chamak mein jab yeh sara jahaan sotaa hai,
tab unke paas na hone ka mujhe phir ghame ehsaas hota hai.

wo laut ayenge mere paas phir yeh dil ko jhuta ehsaas hota hai,
is matlab ki duniya mein aye farhana kaun yaha kiska hota hai.

aye duniya waalon kya yeh rishtaa bhi bhala koi rishtaa hota hai,
jisme kabhi na paakar yeh dil har pal bas khota ho khota hai !!


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hi - 5th November 2003, 04:22 PM


timtimati sitaaron ki chamak mein jab yeh sara jahaan sotaa hai,
tab unke paas na hone ka mujhe phir ghame ehsaas hota hai.


Ferhana ji,

aapki yah line bahut achhhi lagi. sari line mein dard ki chubhan mhsoos ho rahi hai. achchha likhati hain aap.



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Love hi there - 5th November 2003, 11:25 PM

hi akant,

thanx for replying my dear.mujhe khhushi hai is baat ki ke aapne mera likkha pasand kiya. tareef ke liye shukriya.keep in touch.take care and bye


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7th November 2003, 04:23 PM

Dard ..Tanhayi ..bebasi..In jazbaaton se vabasta kara jaate hai tumhaare kalaam..

Aapke har lafz ki kadar karte hai hum..

keep writing

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Love hi - 8th November 2003, 03:02 PM

hi varinder,

nice to have ur views..well thanx so much for liking my presentation.thanx and ragards.take care and bye


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Re: yeh rishta bhi koi rishta hai!! - 8th November 2003, 04:45 PM

farhana ji
bahooot khoob likha hai aapne,...apne dil ke jazbaaton ko bakhoobi bayan kiya hai aapne....likhte rahiye,,,,,

kisi ki yaad mein dunia bhulaye baithe hai
intezaar mein unke palkein bichaye baithe hai
wo aaye na aaye unki marzi...
ham to hasraton ke khandhar sajaye baithe hai

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8th November 2003, 08:47 PM

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9th November 2003, 02:58 PM

hi manoj,

kaise hain aap.....pehli baat toh yahi kahungi ke aapke sher ne dil ko choo liya.aapki tareef ke liye mein tahe dil se shukriya ada karn chahungi manoj.thanx n keep in touch.bye


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9th November 2003, 03:03 PM

hi mango,

hey is mango ur name??if it is then its a damn cute one. mujhe khushi hai aapne meri ghazal ko tareefe kabil samjha.isi tarah mujhe hamesha apni raye batate rahiyega.thanx again and take care.


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9th November 2003, 06:01 PM

Assalam u alaikum
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nahin Mango mera naam nahin hai par mere kuchh friends mujhe isi naam se bulate hain so its my nick
   
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hi - 9th November 2003, 09:44 PM

hi farhana g
how r u?
pahle to tarif qabool kije ga..
itna acha klaam likhen ka
umeed hay k ainda bhi isi tarah
aap k klaam parhne ko milte rahain gain..
magar aik bat jo ham ne feel ki hay woh yeh k
aap ne jo behar use ki hay ..woh bohat lambi hay
parhne wala yeh samajhta hay k shayad bewajah
itni lambi behar ka istamal kiya gya hay...
its just a coment..i hope u dont mind..
sorry if so...
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Love hello - 10th November 2003, 01:11 PM

hi banjaraji,

bahaut dino baad aapne hamare kalaam pe nazar daali.der se aaye par durust aaye. meine aapke sujhav par gaur kiya hai aur inshallah ise sudharne ki koshish bhi karungi....par tab tak inhi galtiyon ka mazaa uthaiyega!!hehehe. anywaz take care and have a nice time.bye.


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