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Smile A Request - 12th May 2004, 09:43 AM

Hi! Main iss forum mein nayee hoon aur mujhey shayri mein bahut dilchaspi hai lakin mujhey khud shayri likhne nahin aatee. Meri ek bahut hi close friend ki death hogayee hai aur iss waqt ek ajeeb si feeling horahi hai. My request is if one of you talented people could write a shair expressing emotions toward the loss of someone very special because I can not write at all ...so if someone is kind to do this, I'd really appreciate it.

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12th May 2004, 10:55 AM

akeli.....apne itne hasste huve request kari hai tao....yaha shayri kai jankaR bade baithe hai..zarur apki madad karenge....waise akelii koyii aur likhe aur woh jassbat paida kar de jo ap kai Zehan mai hai....shayad mujhe tao bada mushkil lagta hai..iss liye joo bhi jaisa bhii ap hii likh paye tao....achha hoga....nahi tao koyii baat nahi yaha par ap ki samsyaa ka hal zarur niklegaa..issi ummidkai saath..vida sanju ko!!!


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muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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Re: A Request - 12th May 2004, 02:42 PM

madam aap kisi ki mayait par ja rahi hai ya mushaire mein ja rahi hai. waise mein bhi akela hoon.aap bura na mane to ham bhi saath chale kya tab aap akeli nahin rahengi
sirf aapka................raj


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