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Love Kyaa ye sach mei sach hua - 11th June 2009, 12:26 PM

Jaane aaj kyaa hua
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11th June 2009, 12:30 PM

aapne ek muktak writing style hi chun liya hai, yakeeN maaniye mujhe ye style bilkul v pasand nahin hai, par ehsash bahut hi innocent the, au pyare se, bas yuNhi apne ehsashoN ko jubaani deti rahiye...!!

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11th June 2009, 12:33 PM

sory ghayal........... mujhe itni mast hindi nahi aati.... mai shayar nahi... jo dil mei baat aati hai apne shabdo mei yaha bayan kar deti hoo.... aapne reply kiya uske liye shukriyaaa.... par ek baat bataiye plzz.... ye muktak matlab kyaa hota hai?????
   
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aap kabhi Suryakant Tripathi "Nirala" ji ki kavitaayeN padhna, unhone hi likhne ki ye paddhati prarambh ki thi, isme na koi rhyming sceme hoti na aur koi rules, na flow ke koi niyam, iska seedha sa matlab hota hai mukt ya aazaad, ek kahaani ki tarah aage badhti hai apne hi andaaz me. Umeed karta huN ab aapko samajh aa gaya hoga, agar ab bhi koi sandeh ho to hum aapki sewa me tatpar haiN.

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11th June 2009, 12:39 PM

arre yaar............. ab toh mai aur confuse ho gayi hoo..........
   
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ab kya confusion hai ji..........................................??



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ab kya confusion hai ji..........................................??
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11th June 2009, 12:47 PM

short me a poem widout ne fixe writing sceme, dat is no fixed paragraph scheme or rhyming sceme nthin as such, it juz goes on lyk a story, its free the general poetic rules....!!

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short me a poem widout ne fixe writing sceme, dat is no fixed paragraph scheme or rhyming sceme nthin as such, it juz goes on lyk a story, its free the general poetic rules....!!

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11th June 2009, 02:59 PM

Hi khanak.. To aaj kal muktak seekh rahi ho.. Ha ha, accha hai, kabhie kabhie hum kya likh jate hain khud hame hee nahin pata hota.
I like it, a nice one.



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Hi khanak.. To aaj kal muktak seekh rahi ho.. Ha ha, accha hai, kabhie kabhie hum kya likh jate hain khud hame hee nahin pata hota.
I like it, a nice one.

thanks aru........... hehe.... maine toh ye naam hi first time suna... ghayal ke muh se........ but he explained me welll............. thanks again sweety
   
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