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Post Sach hum nahin, sach tum nahin..sach sirf ek sangarsh hai. - 16th January 2003, 11:23 PM

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Sach hum nahin, sach tum nahin..sach sirf ek sangarsh hai.

Aisa karo jis-se jeevan kahin bhi na marta rahe
Jo hai jahan chupchaap apne aap se ladta rahe.
Haare nahin insaan...hai jeevan ka sandesh yahi
Taqdeer likh khud haathon se sar utha ke jeeta rahe.

Sach hum nahin, sach tum nahin..sach sirf ek sangarsh hai.

Humne racha Aao hami ab tod dein iss pyar ko
Yeh kya milan, milna wahi jo mod de majhdhaar ko.
Yeh zindagi kya zindagi jo sirf paani si bahi
Aao chalen ab janm dein nayee ek misaal ko.

Sach hum nahin, sach tum nahin..sach sirf ek sangarsh hai.

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17th January 2003, 01:42 AM

Bahot khoob Vipin sahab!
Yeh bhi lehk har lehk ki taraH pasand aaya

Yeh zindagi kya zindagi jo sirf paani si bahi
Aao chalen ab janm dein nayee ek misaal ko.


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Post 17th January 2003, 10:12 PM

Aman ji,

Mujhe bahut khusi hui ki aapko yeh rachna bhi acchi lagi. Aapka bahut-bahut dhanyavaad.

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18th January 2003, 10:37 AM

Vipin jee...aapki shayri mein hamesha ik sandesh chuppa hota hai..sach maaniye aapki is rachna se hum bahut inspire hue hai..

Hamne racha Aao hum hi Tod de is pyaar ko
Yeh kya milan,milan woh jo mod de majhdaar ko

kya khoob likha hai aapne..aise hi likhte rahiye
aapka sada..


kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
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18th January 2003, 10:43 AM

YooN jaari rakh ye koshisheiN
Teri mehnat rang laaegi,
Kuchh mai bhi seekhta hooN tujhse
Ye duniya bhi ek roj seekh jaaegi.

Aapka ek prashanshak,

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Post 19th January 2003, 12:11 AM

Chaand ji,

Jo baat aapne likhi hai woh sach mein mere liye ek bahut bada Honour hai, jise main shayad hee kabhi bhool paoonga. Main sar jhuka kar aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon.

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Ghayal ji,

Namaskaar

Sir, aapne iss chote se lekhak ki rachna ko pasand kiya, jiska main dil se dhanyavaad karta hoon. Aap doston ka saath raha tow main likhne ki koshish karta rahunga.

Dhanyavaad sir

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wah wah - 19th January 2003, 12:30 AM

Sach hum nahin, sach tum nahin..sach sirf ek sangarsh hai.

kya baat kahi hai aap ne sab kuch is duniya mai waham hi to hai sach kuch bhi nahi....

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Post 19th January 2003, 12:39 AM

Zeba ji

Aapne sahi kaha hai, magar sach humare haathon mein bannd hai aur hume sirf haathon ko kholne ki zarurat hai.

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