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hamaaraa aaj ka she'r
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तुमको देखा यहां तो मुक़द्दर बदल गया
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mera aaj ke she'r....
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Shaad..
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jo aankhen mund li duniya se to dil ko qaraar aa gaya
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waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh............ bahot khoob
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sher of the day 18/2/14
Aa jaao kisii roz shabe-hijr ye beete,
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18th February 2014, 01:48 PM
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sher of the day 18/2/14
Aa jaao kisii roz shabe-hijr ye beete,
barsoN guzar gaye haiN hame zindagee dekhe...
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waah.... waah.... waah....
Bahot khub, Sameerbhai...........
Aate rahiyega. Aapse to ye mehfil banee rahtee hai.........
Adil ka salaam................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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Miltaa hai lutf mujhko tere gham se sitamgar,
Koii bhi khushi aa na sakii raas abhi tak...
Shaad....
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bahot khub...............
Laajawaab sher pesh kiya hai aapne, Sameerbhai.............
Daad qbul kijiye............
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18th February 2014, 01:53 PM
mera aaj ka sher.............
hai baad-e-nau bahaar si ye zindagee udhaar ki
kyun ummeeden banaaee phir tune haseen bahaar ki
~"Safeer" Adil
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ek sher..
Guzree hai is kadar terii chaahat meiN zindagee,
jaise ke baarishoN meiN shabe-gham guzartee hai...!!
Shaad...
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bahot khub..............
qabil-e-daad hai ye sher, Sameerbhai..............
Salaam........
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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bahot mashkoor hoon aapki inaayatoN se Aadeil bhai.....
aur aapka sher to uff Allaah kyaa kehne...
hai baad-e-nau bahaar si ye zindagee udhaar ki
kyun ummeeden banaaee phir tune haseen bahaar ki
~"Safeer" Adil
laajawaab........ salaamat raheN
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18th February 2014, 03:45 PM
isko bhii hamarii ibaddat ki inteha hii samjhiye,
usko hii khuda maan liya jisko dekha hii na thaa......(Raj)
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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19th February 2014, 12:13 PM
marte waqt bhii yun mujhse liptii thii yaadain teri
mere yaaron ne mujhe bina kafan ke hii jala dalaa.......(Raj)
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marte waqt bhii yun mujhse liptii thii yaadain teri
mere yaaron ne mujhe bina kafan ke hii jala dalaa.......(Raj)
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Rajveerji,
Bahot hi aala she'r pesh kiya hai apne...............
Hamaari daad........... qbul karen.............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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Aaj ka sher...
Ab wo chehraa hi bhool baithaa hoon,
ke jisko dhundhne me umr guzree hai..
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waah.... waah...
Bahot khub...............
shaad... shaad rahiye.................
Adil...............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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hamaaraa aaj ka she'r...........
phool tujhe haathon se masalte dekhataa rahaa sadaa
phir bhee tere qadmon me yeh dil rakhataa rahaa sadaa
~ 'Safeer' Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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hamaaraa aaj ka she'r...........
phool tujhe haathon se masalte dekhataa rahaa sadaa
phir bhee tere qadmon me yeh dil rakhataa rahaa sadaa
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wah wah bhai kyaa baat hai bhut khoob....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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Aaj ka sher...
Ab wo chehraa hi bhool baithaa hoon,
ke jisko dhundhne me umr guzree hai..
Shaad....
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sameer bhai ko raj ka namskaar....bhut umdah share kaha ....keep ahead...
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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wah wah bhai kyaa baat hai bhut khoob....
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Aate rahiyega..............................
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21st February 2014, 05:23 PM
aaj ka sher
दर-ए-हाव्या से एक दाद लाया हूं
दोस्त तेरे खातिर इनाद लाया हूं
Dar-e-haawyaa se ek daad laayaa hoon
dost tere khaatir inaad laayaa hoon
haawyaa = hell; daad = revenge; inaad = enmity
~ 'Safeer' Adil
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aaj ka sher
दर-ए-हाव्या से एक दाद लाया हूं
दोस्त तेरे खातिर इनाद लाया हूं
Dar-e-haawyaa se ek daad laayaa hoon
dost tere khaatir inaad laayaa hoon
haawyaa = hell; daad = revenge; inaad = enmity
~ 'Safeer' Adil
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Wahahhhhh wahhhhh kyaa baat hai Aadeil saahab.... khoob sher hai..
Shaad....
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26th February 2014, 04:41 PM
Aaj kaa sher...
Gul ki soorat me wo kaa.nTe hii huaa karte hain,
ke jinke chehare pe dil apnaa aTak jaataa hai..
ग़ुल कि सूरत मे वो कांटे ही हुआ करते हैं,
के जिनके चेहरे पे दिल अपना अटक जाता है
Shaad.
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Aaj ka sher....
Duaa ke haaNth me.n Zanjeer pinhaa dete haiN,
ye wahi log hain zakhmo.n ko hawaa dete haiN..!!
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Aaj kaa sher...
Gul ki soorat me wo kaa.nTe hii huaa karte hain,
ke jinke chehare pe dil apnaa aTak jaataa hai..
ग़ुल कि सूरत मे वो कांटे ही हुआ करते हैं,
के जिनके चेहरे पे दिल अपना अटक जाता है
Shaad.
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dil ki naa puchh zaalim, dil mera subuk hai
chand ko dekh ke bhee wo bhatak jaataa hai..
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5th March 2014, 10:15 AM
Aaj ka sher..
Zakhm unko hi dikhaane me mazaa aataa hai,
Wo jo usey dekh ke Wah karte haiN.
Shaad...
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Aaj ka sher..
Zakhm unko hi dikhaane me mazaa aataa hai,
Wo jo usey dekh ke Wah karte haiN.
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bahot khub, Sameerbhai...............................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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5th March 2014, 11:50 AM
hamaaraa aaj ka she'r...........
aansoo na bahaate hain hothon pe hai muskaanen
phir kaise kahenge hum waah men bhee koee gham hai
Adil "Safeer"
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th March 2014, 01:16 PM
Bewafa ko bewafa kehne waale,
Tere housle ki daad deta hoon.....(Raj)
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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waahhhhhh janaaab.... maar daalaa..... kyaa khoob sher chhodaa hai aapne... wallaahhhhh
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8th March 2014, 09:50 AM
hawa se ud gaya ghosalaa parindon ka,
Tufaan ko maloom kya ye ghar kaise bana tha parveen shakir..
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hawa se ud gaya ghosalaa parindon ka,
Tufaan ko maloom kya ye ghar kaise bana tha parveen shakir..
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very nice........................................ tfs
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14th March 2014, 12:40 PM
Taarikhiya.n zeest ki is qadar gehrii thii.n,
Ta umar bahaye aansu phir bhii kam na huii.n...(Raj)
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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