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18th November 2013, 12:32 PM
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Waahhh!! Saakir bhai. Bahot hi khub. daad aapko iss sheyr par.
kya khubsurat andaaz me aapne dilki baat keh di.
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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18th November 2013, 04:45 PM
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shehar hai tera zabta bhi tera hai ( ZABTA ? KANOON)
mujrim hai ishq ye gunaah mera hai
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Mera aaj ka sheyr!
nazar uTHaane kii kaushish me nazaaraa chhuT gayaa hamse
kaash pehle maloom hota ke deedaa-e-gham betaasiir hai
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waahhhhhhhhhh..................... khoob se khoob sher kahe hain aap dono ne, janaab Shakir saahab aur janaab Aadeil.......... mehfil ko raushan karte raheN.. likhte raheN.......
Shaad.....
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18th November 2013, 04:46 PM
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nice sher janaab............................................ .
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18th November 2013, 04:47 PM
Andaaz apne dekhte haiN Aaine meiN woh,
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19th November 2013, 08:39 PM
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shehar hai tera zabta bhi tera hai ( ZABTA ? KANOON)
mujrim hai ishq ye gunaah mera hai
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Bahut khoob.. daad qabul ho shakir ji..
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19th November 2013, 08:40 PM
Sikka Banaa Ke Jab Uchhala Gaya Mujhe,
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20th November 2013, 11:38 AM
tanha hi guzari zindgi koi sahara na hua
hum to sab ke the koi hamara na hua
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21st November 2013, 05:19 PM
Aaj ka sher.
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lehreN to kaaT'tee haiN saahil ko...!!
Shaad...
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22nd November 2013, 12:17 PM
aaftab jo nikla hai to sham kyun udaas hai
dekh rahe hai kya aap bhi tanha khade ho kar
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22nd November 2013, 11:38 PM
Wo Mil Jaye Mujhe to Youn Samjhon Ga!
Jannat Ka Ilaan Ho Kisi Gunah-Gar Ke Liye..!
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Wo Mil Jaye Mujhe to Youn Samjhon Ga!
Jannat Ka Ilaan Ho Kisi Gunah-Gar Ke Liye..!
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waaahhhh kyaa baat hai..............................................
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25th November 2013, 12:56 PM
lahoo wo jo qatraa qatraa sehtaa rahe
sharaab wo jo qatraa qatraa behtaa rahe
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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26th November 2013, 02:56 PM
Meri fitrat mein nahi apna ghum bayan karna,
Ger tere wajood ka hissa hu to mehsus kar..
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26th November 2013, 03:18 PM
charagon se ragbat thi usko
dil hi bujha tha kya karta
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26th November 2013, 03:22 PM
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charagon se ragbat thi usko
dil hi bujha tha kya karta
(Amaan by SDC)
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........................ bahot khoob janaab ,kyaa kehne....
Shaad.....
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26th November 2013, 03:26 PM
Meraa aaj ka sher...
Aaj chilman uThegee mehfil meiN,
Aaj parwaane phir Fidaa hoNge..!!
Shaad...
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26th November 2013, 05:23 PM
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Meraa aaj ka sher...
Aaj chilman uThegee mehfil meiN,
Aaj parwaane phir Fidaa hoNge..!!
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Bahot khub Shaad ji...
Meraa aaj ka sheyr...
“Safeer” kyun tu karta hai dusro'n pe itnaa reham
Dekh tere apno'n ne hi tujhse faut* maangee hai (escape)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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27th November 2013, 11:09 AM
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Meraa aaj ka sher...
Aaj chilman uThegee mehfil meiN,
Aaj parwaane phir Fidaa hoNge..!!
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Mera aaj ka sheyr.....
chilman ko uThane do kehte haiN parwaane
gar hum naa hote fidaa to uski kya ahmyat yahaaN
~ Safeer
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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27th November 2013, 01:56 PM
Chilman na hotee ishaare na hotey,
jo hum na hote, nazaare na hotey..
Shaad...
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27th November 2013, 01:57 PM
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Mera aaj ka sheyr.....
chilman ko uThane do kehte haiN parwaane
gar hum naa hote fidaa to uski kya ahmyat yahaaN
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waaaahhhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat kya baat kya baat.................
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27th November 2013, 02:43 PM
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Chilman na hotee ishaare na hotey,
jo hum na hote, nazaare na hotey..
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waaah waaah! bahot khub.....
nazaare dikhaa ke chal to diye lekin
nazar ek naa kee hamaaree taraf?
~ Safeer
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th November 2013, 12:16 AM
Aur bhi kar deta hai dard mein izaafa,
Tere hote huye sab ka dilaasa dena..
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1st December 2013, 12:28 PM
khud pe hanste hanste ek aadat si ban gai h..
andaza hi nahi lagta ab kab khusi mili or kab dard..
~: SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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2nd December 2013, 11:02 AM
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khud pe hanste hanste ek aadat si ban gai h..
andaza hi nahi lagta ab kab khusi mili or kab dard..
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Bahut achi lagi aapki ye kosish hume sultaan ji.. dard se bharpoor..
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4th December 2013, 02:10 PM
Doston se iss qadar sadme uthaaye jaan per,
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5th December 2013, 01:29 PM
kuch bikhre huve lamhe sajane laga hun
aaj bphir dil jala to unhe bhulane laga hun
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5th December 2013, 01:40 PM
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hosla hafzai ke liye behad sukriya aise hi sath dete rhe
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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7th December 2013, 05:40 PM
jra sa pher ka masla hai shahb smjho to sahi..
bgawat jha se humdono ne hi ki fakat ek sath nhi ki..
~ : SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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9th December 2013, 11:16 AM
khuda kare sehar ka suna pan kisi ka naseeb na ho
sataya hai jis qadar tumne aeisa kisi ka raqib na ho
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apne riste ko sise se bane dil main sabse chhupa rkha tha..
galti ek hue toufa hath se fisala or tut bikar sab gya tha..
~ : SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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20th December 2013, 02:25 PM
Wo rakh le mujhe apne pass kahi qaid karke,
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zindagi ek masum dard hai jiye ja rha hu..
maut ke kitne rup hai sang gine ja rha hu..
~ : SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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28th December 2013, 06:17 PM
जब भी टूट कर बिखरता हूँ मैं
दुगना होकर निखरता हूँ मैं !!
It is true that Love is Magic...
But Magic may sometimes just be an Illusion...
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4th January 2014, 06:50 PM
kis kadar pagal kiya ishq ne uske,
bhool jane ki koshish karta hoo yaad karke use
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5th January 2014, 10:42 AM
Aaj ka sher....
Shauq kehtaa hai ke duniyaa ko khabar ho jaaye,
Zabt ko Zidd hai ke Chup-chaap basar ho jaaye.....!!
Shaad...
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6th January 2014, 10:30 AM
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Aaj ka sher....
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Waah... Waah... Sameerbhai...... Bahot khub....
hum to tere sahaare jee lete zindagee
dil hi zaalim chup chaap ro leta hai
Safeer 'Adil'
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6th January 2014, 05:42 PM
adeil mai aapka bahut bada fan hoo
aapko dekh ke maine bhi kuchh try kiya h comment zaroor kare aur please sach kahe agar aapko lagta h ki mai shayri kabhi kar hi nahi sakta to please mujhe bata de-
"maine to chaha tha use jan se bhi jyada
us bewafa ne mujhko khilona bana diya"
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16th January 2014, 06:18 PM
Humne To Apne Khuda Se Poocha Hi Nahi Kya Likha Hai Mukadar Me
Usi Ko Mukadar Bana Baithe Jo Khud aaya Tha Raah Ki Talaash Me..
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20th January 2014, 12:41 PM
Aaj ka sher...
Aashiqui meiN berukhii ka silsilaa rahne diyaa,
Band kar li khiDkiyaaN pardaa khulaa rahne diyaa....
Shaad...
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20th January 2014, 01:59 PM
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Aaj ka sher...
Aashiqui meiN berukhii ka silsilaa rahne diyaa,
Band kar li khiDkiyaaN pardaa khulaa rahne diyaa....
Shaad...
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Waah.. Waah.., Shaadbhai........
Kya khub kahee...........
hamaaraa aaj ka sher....
yeh hawaa kya keh gayee humne kuch sunaa nahin,
sab sukha ke chal dee ye bas bulbulaa rehne diyaa....
Adil ka salaam...................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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