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Unke aane ki na ho khabar aaj ki raat -
19th March 2006, 06:51 PM
zakhm dukhne lage be-mehar aaj ki raat
unke aane ki na ho khabar aaj ki raat unse kehna ki mudh ke na dekhein mujhko chura na le unko meri yeh nazar aaj ki raat chupa ke tees mehekna, muskurate phirna dekhna phir se pee leinge yeh zehar aaj ki raat meri haalat pe pashemaan hai shab bhi mujhse Khuda keh de ki hogi meri bhi sehar, aaj ki raat unke deedaar ko chali ho tau sambhal ke 'paras' hans de na koyi be-rahm thokar aaj ki raat chalo mita daalein naam-o-nishaan hi apna taarikiion ko ho na jaaye khabar aaj ki raat kahin ishara na ho waqt-e-rukhsati ka yaarab dekhta hai falak ki or chaaraagar aaj ki raat be-mehar = unkind pashemaan = ashamed taarikiion = darkness falak = skies chaaraagar = doctor yaarab = O God gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th March 2006, 07:02 PM
paras ji
aapki ek aur rachna bhaut hi umda rachna aur bhaut kuch seekhne ko mila hai aaj aaj iske baad se aap dil ke bhaut kareeb hui hai kahi na kahi mere dard mai shamil aaj se aapko paras ji nahi sirf di kahungi loue u shrdh 
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19th March 2006, 08:03 PM
hi di
kaise ho aap? ik ik sher umda likkha hai... "unke deedaar ko chali ho tau sambhal ke hans de na koyi be-rahm thokar aaj ki raat" ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya di... aap bas aise hi khoobsoorat kalaam likhte rahiye... tc  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Re: Unke aane ki na ho khabar aaj ki raat -
19th March 2006, 10:04 PM
Dear Paras ji
bohat hi pyara laga apka ye kalaam...jabse se shayri ya urdu ya kuch-2 samjha hai to aapko hi padhkar... bohat acha laga aapko padhkar...vaise hamesha hi lagta hai shukriya Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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Re: Unke aane ki na ho khabar aaj ki raat -
19th March 2006, 10:10 PM
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Aadaab, kya baat keh di hai aapne, bahaut behtareenb baat kahi aapne is nazm mein. yunhi likhtey rahiyega aur hume padatey rahiyega. Saathi |
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19th March 2006, 11:22 PM
Guddo didi,...
Ye raat behad khoob soorat hai .. jisme aapke likhe taraane ka nasa failta hi jaa raha hai .. us par ye meri haalat pe pashemaan hai shab bhi mujhse Khuda keh de ki hogi meri bhi sehar, aaj ki raat kash is rat ki subah ho hi n .... sach kahuN to ab ujaale se dar hi lagta hai ... aapka likha ek ek alfaaz dil cheer hi gaya aapka bhai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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20th March 2006, 08:09 AM
ooohhhhhhhh
Paras dd, chupa ke tees mehekna, muskurate phirna dekhna phir se pee leinge yeh zehar aaj ki raat meri haalat pe pashemaan hai shab bhi mujhse Khuda keh de ki hogi meri bhi sehar, aaj ki raat chalo mita daalein naam-o-nishaan hi apna taarikiion ko ho na jaaye khabar aaj ki raat Bahut badhiyaa likhaa hain aapne, aur khaas ke yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye, daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhte rehna. take care! Your fan, Parul. |
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20th March 2006, 08:16 AM
Shukriya Shradhaa! I'll be honored....
Shweta.... haan mohabbat mein aankhon se nahin dil se dekhte hain na.... Diggaj.... How very sweet....mujhe padhte ho sun kar bahut achha laga... Saathi dear.... welcome to this forum...aur apna kalaam bhi hamein sunate rehna... Kunnu kaise ho? itni nirasha se bharpoor baat...chi nahin kehte aaise....tumhari raah mein sehar hi sehar ho...gar nahin tau raushani hi raushani.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th March 2006, 08:27 AM
chalo mita daalein naam-o-nishaan hi apna
taarikiion ko ho na jaaye khabar aaj ki raat kahin ishara na ho waqt-e-rukhsati ka yaarab dekhta hai falak ki or chaaraagar aaj ki raat |
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20th March 2006, 11:05 AM
meri behan
meri haalat pe pashemaan hai shab bhi mujhse Khuda keh de ki hogi meri bhi sehar, aaj ki raat ab ager behaisiyet shayer mein is tarah ke shayr parhoon to be-ikhtiyaar daad deno ko dil kerta hai, bohat behtreen ghazel takhleeq ki hai tum ne. mager jab behaisiyet ek bhai ke mein tumhare is ghazel ke ek ek shayr per ghaur kerta hoon to dil bohat der sa jaata hai, ke Yah Allah meri yeh behna kis kaifiyet mein yeh ashaar likh rahi hia, aur dil dua kerta hai ke meri behna hamesha khush rahe, aur zindagi ki tamaam taimatoan se mustafeez hoti rahe. musharrafhusain |
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20th March 2006, 08:00 PM
zakhm dukhne lage be-mehar aaj ki raat
unke aane ki na ho khabar aaj ki raat unse kehna ki mudh ke na dekhein mujhko chura na le unko meri yeh nazar aaj ki raat Dear Paras Ji Aapkey yeh Rachna dil ko chuu gayi......kya kuch keh gayi yeh Rachna...daad hazir hay......Beautiful words.....bahut acha laga aaj aapki yeh rachna padhkar......this is poetry for love with love...to kyun nahin khoobsurat hogi yuun hi likhtey rahiyeSada muskuratey rahiye |
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20th March 2006, 08:25 PM
Meri HB Behna..........
nazar dhoondh rahi thi tumhara kalaam...... mila ek tohfa humein, aaj ki raat........... Behad asardaar kalaam.......har ashaar jaise gam ki parshaayion se ghira ho......... ek mood, ek kaifyet....mein gujar ke ye thereer aayi hai......aur is takhleeq pe apne is bhai ki daad kabool farmayein............ aapka apna............. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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16th April 2006, 02:22 AM
Bahut khoob......
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17th April 2006, 12:31 PM
Parul...
sorry badi der se aayi jawaab dene...muaaf karna...tumhein kuch sher achhe lage...mujhe bhi khushi huyi...thanks for coming Meena ji... shukriya hausla afzaayi ke liye...yoonhi kabh kabaar aa jaaya karo Bhayyia... aapka jawaab hamesha dil ko chuu jaata hai aur aankhein nam kar jaata hai... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th April 2006, 12:35 PM
Sukanyaa ji...
this is poetry for love with love...ji bilkul sahi farmaaya aapne...pyaar kitna zaroori hai yeh koyi pyaar se mehroom hi bata sakta hai...khayaal rakhieyga apna .... Arre Waah Aman Veer... Shukriya is tarah se daad dene ka...aate rehna...take care Thanks Sahil... Any reply on my post is a trophy to me...to be treasured forever... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Paras diii...aapki poetry kisi tareef ki mohtaz nahi hai...aik aik lafz apni baat bayaan kar rha hai...bahut khoobsurati se aap lafzoN ko kagaz par pesh karti hai...dii bazm meiN aapka intezaar ho rha hai aapki apni .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Paras diii...aapki poetry kisi tareef ki mohtaz nahi hai...aik aik lafz apni baat bayaan kar rha hai...bahut khoobsurati se aap lafzoN ko kagaz par pesh karti hai...dii bazm meiN aapka intezaar ho rha hai aapki apni .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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