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Post Tum se milkar - 6th March 2003, 12:05 AM
Doston,
Shayri_e_ishq mein meri yeh pehli soch hai. Quaabil na hui tow muaaf kar dijeyega.
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Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko dekha paas se yun
aaina mil gaya hai.

Kho gaye tthey sur hamare
rang feeke ho gaye tthey.
Pankh jaise tthak gaye tthey
khwaab saare so gaye tthey.
Saansh mein bhi kuch kami thi
aankh mein bhi kuch nami thi.
Narm si ek khusbu si
kar gayi hai jadu si.
Dhoop bankar chaa gayi ho
paas aise aagayi ho.

Manzilen hain door ab
raatsa mil gaya hai.
Tumhse milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.

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6th March 2003, 12:06 AM
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sir kia kehna ap ka
pehli sooch
or itni payare
ap na to kamal kar dee
bohat pasnd ayee hum ko
ab is par be likhte rehna

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Post 6th March 2003, 12:14 AM
Imam ji,

Khusi hui ki aapko yeh lines pasand aayi.......Dhanyavaad

Vipin
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wah - 6th March 2003, 01:05 AM
wah vipin ji jitni tarif karu utni kam hai.....i am waiting for that someone spl in life..so that i can say the same wordings to that person ki ab zindagi jeene ka mayina mil gya hai varna aaj kal zindagi ka kuch mayina hi nahi lagta mujhey

bahut khoob
Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko dekha paas se yun
aaina mil gaya hai.

Kho gaye tthey sur hamare
rang feeke ho gaye tthey.
Pankh jaise tthak gaye tthey
khwaab saare so gaye tthey.
Saansh mein bhi kuch kami thi
aankh mein bhi kuch nami thi.
Narm si ek khusbu si
kar gayi hai jadu si.
Dhoop bankar chaa gayi ho
paas aise aagayi ho.

Manzilen hain door ab
raatsa mil gaya hai.
Tumhse milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.

luv priya

Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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Namashkaar - 6th March 2003, 04:08 PM
bahut hi umda shayari likhee hai, itne kam lafzon mein itne gehraayee. Well done keep it up.

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hi - 6th March 2003, 04:44 PM
wah vipin ji aap ki sahyri ki tareef ke liye alfaaz nahein mil rahe hain bhut hiacha likha hain aap ne

keep it up humaari duvain aapke saath hain

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Post 7th March 2003, 12:13 AM
Meri rachna padne ka aap sab ko dhanyavaad. Koshish karunga ki kuch accha likh sakun.


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I really like it Vipin.
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I really like it Vipin. - 7th March 2003, 12:17 AM
Really aapne bahaut acaha likha hai, likhte to hum bhi hain par tumhaare jaisa itna acaccha nahi, waise hum naye hain iss site par, really hume aapki first poem bahaut bahaut acachi lagi. humne apaki aur bhi pomes padhi hai lekin kabhi comments nahi diye becoz aapko comments to sab hi dete honge isiliye aur agar phir hum dete to kaunsa bara kaam ho jata hai, aap likhte hi itna accaha hai ki sab acache hi comment dete hain.

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Post 7th March 2003, 12:22 AM
Rimjhim sahab....Namaskaar

Aapne jo meri rachna pe nazar daali uska bahut bahut dhanyavaad. Aapki tareef mere liye ek Honour hai.

Dhanyavaad

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Re: Tum se milkar - 7th April 2006, 05:59 PM
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Doston,
Shayri_e_ishq mein meri yeh pehli soch hai. Quaabil na hui tow muaaf kar dijeyega.
====================

Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko dekha paas se yun
aaina mil gaya hai.

Kho gaye tthey sur hamare
rang feeke ho gaye tthey.
Pankh jaise tthak gaye tthey
khwaab saare so gaye tthey.
Saansh mein bhi kuch kami thi
aankh mein bhi kuch nami thi.
Narm si ek khusbu si
kar gayi hai jadu si.
Dhoop bankar chaa gayi ho
paas aise aagayi ho.

Manzilen hain door ab
raatsa mil gaya hai.
Tumhse milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Adaab Vipin Saheb
main ye soch rah hoon ki aapka ye andaaz main pehle kyu nahin padpaya. Kya baat hai janaab, bas dil khush ho gaya hai.

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Saathi

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Hi - 8th April 2006, 09:57 AM
Hi Vipin

Kiya Likha Hai Dost ?

Gazab. Maja aa gaya . ab tak kaha the aap ?
bahuuuuut achcha likhte ho. next poem ka wait karunga.

Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko dekha paas se yun
aaina mil gaya hai.


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hi vipin - 8th April 2006, 11:39 AM
hi vipin bohat khoob

bahat achcha likhte ho.

keep it up and do post more like this .......

i felt gud while reading ur wonderful........ keep posting gud post

may god bless u 2 write more n much better poetry...


bye n take care/... ur friend faiq

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Re: Tum se milkar - 12th April 2006, 06:46 PM
Doston,
Tum se milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.
Khud ko dekha paas se yun
aaina mil gaya hai.

Kho gaye tthey sur hamare
rang feeke ho gaye tthey.
Pankh jaise tthak gaye tthey
khwaab saare so gaye tthey.
Saansh mein bhi kuch kami thi
aankh mein bhi kuch nami thi.
Narm si ek khusbu si
kar gayi hai jadu si.
Dhoop bankar chaa gayi ho
paas aise aagayi ho.

Manzilen hain door ab
raatsa mil gaya hai.
Tumhse milkar zindagi ko
maayna mil gaya hai.

Dear Vipin ji,

Tumse milke jindagi ko ek mayana mil gaya hai.. pankityo mein khoya pyar aur unmein chhupi sadagi ki lahar, ek lekhak ki premika ko bakhubi bayan ker rahi hai...

sare sure kho gaye hain.. aur ek naye sur ka sutrpat hua hai.. jindigi rangili ho chali hai.. ya kahu ki ssare rang aan pade hain jeevan mein.. bahut khub vipin ji.. bahut achchhi lagi aapki yah peshakash..

Akant...

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12th April 2006, 07:55 PM
Kho gaye tthey sur hamare
rang feeke ho gaye tthey.
Pankh jaise tthak gaye tthey
khwaab saare so gaye tthey.
Saansh mein bhi kuch kami thi
aankh mein bhi kuch nami thi.
Narm si ek khusbu si
kar gayi hai jadu si.
Dhoop bankar chaa gayi ho
paas aise aagayi ho.

wah VIPIN JI bahut sundar rachna hai yeh aapki...........

with best wishes

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14th April 2006, 07:56 PM
Saathi ji
Mujhe bahaut khushi hui hai ki aapne is puraani rachna ko roshni di hai. aapka dhanyavaad.

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Vikram Ji
Accha laga ki aapne mujhe parha aur saraaha. Koshish karunga ki kabhi accha likh sakun.

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Faiq Ji
mujhe parhney ke liye main aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon. yuhi hee hausal detey rahiyega

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Akant bhai aapko mera Namaskaar,
Koshsish kari thi kuch kehney ki, jisse aapne bhali-bhaanti samjha hai. In koshishon mein aapka saath milna mere liye bahaut mehtvapoorna rehta hai. Isi traha samarthan dete rahiyega.

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Ranju ji
namaskaar, aapne fir is shoonya ko parha tow bahaut accha laga, aapka dhanyavaad.
Aapko Janmdiwas ki haardik shubkaamnain. 14 April

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