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Exclamation Tumse hi main hun - 17th March 2006, 06:56 PM
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yeh seedi-sadi si rachna likney ki prerna muje kisi se mili hei, jinki rachna / nazm / geet ko mei bohat pasand karti hun. yeh rachna unhi ke kadmo mei rak rahi hun.

Tum ho to main hun
gar tum nahi to
meri bhi khabar kahan.
Surya ki kiran se adhik
muje awasyakta hai
tumari nazron ki.
Muje tab bhi chalna hai
jab surya nahi hota
Tab bhi dekhne hein sapney
jab chaand bhi sojaya karta hei.
Muje tab bhi sach bolna hai
jab jhoot ka bolbala ho
Tab bhi banani hei roti
jab chula ujad jaye kabhi.
Gungunana chahti hun tab bhi
jab koyal ki awaz nahi ati.
Geet tab bi likna chahti hun
basuri ka jab sath mil nahi pata.
Mein tab bi jeena chahti hun
jab chitaa awaz deti hei,
Rehna tab bhi chahungi mein
jab rooh nikal jati hei.


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Re: Tumse hi main hun - 17th March 2006, 08:17 PM
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Doston
yeh seedi-sadi si rachna likney ki prerna muje kisi se mili hei, jinki rachna / nazm / geet ko mei bohat pasand karti hun. yeh rachna unhi ke kadmo mei rak rahi hun.

Tum ho to main hun
gar tum nahi to
meri bhi khabar kahan.
Surya ki kiran se adhik
muje awasyakta hai
tumari nazron ki.
Muje tab bhi chalna hai
jab surya nahi hota
Tab bhi dekhne hein sapney
jab chaand bhi sojaya karta hei.
Muje tab bhi sach bolna hai
jab jhoot ka bolbala ho
Tab bhi banani hei roti
jab chula ujad jaye kabhi.
Gungunana chahti hun tab bhi
jab koyal ki awaz nahi ati.
Geet tab bi likna chahti hun
basuri ka jab sath mil nahi pata.
Mein tab bi jeena chahti hun
jab chitaa awaz deti hei,
Rehna tab bhi chahungi mein
jab rooh nikal jati hei.


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17th March 2006, 08:19 PM
bahut accha likha hai kanchan ji aapne sacchi behad pasand aaya yuhi likhte raho....................................

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
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17th March 2006, 10:13 PM
kanchan ji ..

differently expressed but very nicely expressed
i like it

keep writing
bye TC

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18th March 2006, 09:35 AM
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aapki ye rachna bilkul sach kahe rahi hai suran nahi na sahi unka saath chahiye chand ki seetlata mahsoosh karne ke liye unka pyar chahiye

pyar mai adhikar se managna
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Re: Tumse hi main hun - 18th March 2006, 11:06 AM
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bhale hi aapki rachna sidhe-sadi hoti hogi par fir bhi mujhe to bohat pyari lagti hai...isliye hamesha hi padhne chale aate hai

bohat acha likha hai aapne...likhti rahiyega hamein acha padhne ko milta rahega


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Doston
yeh seedi-sadi si rachna likney ki prerna muje kisi se mili hei, jinki rachna / nazm / geet ko mei bohat pasand karti hun. yeh rachna unhi ke kadmo mei rak rahi hun.

Tum ho to main hun
gar tum nahi to
meri bhi khabar kahan.
Surya ki kiran se adhik
muje awasyakta hai
tumari nazron ki.
Muje tab bhi chalna hai
jab surya nahi hota
Tab bhi dekhne hein sapney
jab chaand bhi sojaya karta hei.
Muje tab bhi sach bolna hai
jab jhoot ka bolbala ho
Tab bhi banani hei roti
jab chula ujad jaye kabhi.
Gungunana chahti hun tab bhi
jab koyal ki awaz nahi ati.
Geet tab bi likna chahti hun
basuri ka jab sath mil nahi pata.
Mein tab bi jeena chahti hun
jab chitaa awaz deti hei,
Rehna tab bhi chahungi mein
jab rooh nikal jati hei.


Kanchan

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kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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Re: Re: Tumse hi main hun - 19th March 2006, 05:25 PM
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Bahut khoob Kanchan ji
Saathi ji
Aapka shukriya karna chahugi mei.

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19th March 2006, 05:26 PM
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bahut accha likha hai kanchan ji aapne sacchi behad pasand aaya yuhi likhte raho....................................
Mehul
sach mei acha laga ise padne se?
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19th March 2006, 05:27 PM
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kanchan ji ..

differently expressed but very nicely expressed
i like it

keep writing
bye TC
aapka shukriya karti hun main.

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19th March 2006, 05:29 PM
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kanch
aapki ye rachna bilkul sach kahe rahi hai suran nahi na sahi unka saath chahiye chand ki seetlata mahsoosh karne ke liye unka pyar chahiye

pyar mai adhikar se managna
achha laga tumhe padhkar

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haan, ye sath hi itna sunder hota hei ki kya kahen. accha laga aapne muje pada.

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Re: Re: Tumse hi main hun - 19th March 2006, 05:32 PM
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DEar di

bhale hi aapki rachna sidhe-sadi hoti hogi par fir bhi mujhe to bohat pyari lagti hai...isliye hamesha hi padhne chale aate hai

bohat acha likha hai aapne...likhti rahiyega hamein acha padhne ko milta rahega


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19th March 2006, 06:51 PM
hi kanchan
bahut achha likha hai aapney aese hi likhte rahna or hume sunati rahna
bye tc

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hi - 19th March 2006, 09:49 PM
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unhi likhte raho

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19th March 2006, 11:36 PM
Saaf aur saccha ... BilkuL nirmal ganga ke paani ki tarah ..

bohat accha likha hai kanchan ji...

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Re: Tumse hi main hun - 20th March 2006, 08:44 AM
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yeh seedi-sadi si rachna likney ki prerna muje kisi se mili hei, jinki rachna / nazm / geet ko mei bohat pasand karti hun. yeh rachna unhi ke kadmo mei rak rahi hun.

Tum ho to main hun
gar tum nahi to
meri bhi khabar kahan.
Surya ki kiran se adhik
muje awasyakta hai
tumari nazron ki.
Muje tab bhi chalna hai
jab surya nahi hota
Tab bhi dekhne hein sapney
jab chaand bhi sojaya karta hei.
Muje tab bhi sach bolna hai
jab jhoot ka bolbala ho
Tab bhi banani hei roti
jab chula ujad jaye kabhi.
Gungunana chahti hun tab bhi
jab koyal ki awaz nahi ati.
Geet tab bi likna chahti hun
basuri ka jab sath mil nahi pata.
Mein tab bi jeena chahti hun
jab chitaa awaz deti hei,
Rehna tab bhi chahungi mein
jab rooh nikal jati hei.


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meri priy kaanch,

khush raho

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20th March 2006, 01:37 PM
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hi kanchan
bahut achha likha hai aapney aese hi likhte rahna or hume sunati rahna
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hello Surbhi
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Re: hi - 20th March 2006, 01:39 PM
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20th March 2006, 01:40 PM
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bohat accha likha hai kanchan ji...

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Re: Re: Tumse hi main hun - 20th March 2006, 01:42 PM
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meri priy kaanch,

khush raho

tumhari meena
Namastey Meena Ji
aapne bataya nehi ye kesi lagi hei aapko
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20th March 2006, 01:46 PM
namaskaar kanchan ji,
how are u?hope in best of ur health. can i say tht watever i wud say wud be very less for ur this awesome creation.itni saralta see aapne aapne,apne ehsaas ko shabdon mein piroya hai ki shayad mein aaj kuch na keh pau kyoki its perfect. waah bahut khoob. dil ki gehraiyon se daad kabool kijiye aur yu hum sab ke beech aapne vichaar pesh karte rahiye. yeh andaaz aapka dil ko chu gaya. mano koi aapne ke liye likha ho jaise. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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21st March 2006, 10:26 AM
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Namastey, m quite well. ise padne ke liy aapka shukriya kerti hun.

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Re: Re: Re: Tumse hi main hun - 21st March 2006, 05:15 PM
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Namastey Meena Ji
aapne bataya nehi ye kesi lagi hei aapko
koi bat nehi aapne pad li ye hi bohat hei.

aapki
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Namastey Meena Ji
muje acha laga apka ana or muje padna

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