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Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj -
31st March 2003, 07:22 AM
Dosto ye sab hua nahi par khyaal ne hi meri jaan le li aaj....jus ahrng the lines that came to mind and hrt..
Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj Khoon ke aansu royi aur khud se kitne sawaal kar baithi mein aaj Kabhi tu lagta tha jaisa mera deewana hai aur aaj apna hoke bhi tu kitna begana hai Bheer me chali aa rahi thi ki tu nazar aa gaya baat karna chahti thi tujhsey par dil me magar shabd aa gaya Aankhain jaise hi takri teri un gehri aankhon se Dil bebas hone laga meri un tej saanson se Kadam chahtey they tere paas chalkar chale jayain Kehna bahut kuch tha par ashk naino se chalaktey jayain? Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st April 2003, 12:32 AM
priya ji,
aapke jazbaatoN ki maiN bahot kadar karta huuN.. aur jitni bhi taareef ki jaaye, woh kam hai. to kis taraH se aapko bataauuN ki paD kar kya mehsoos hua? chaliye.. jo bhi mehsoos hua, woh bahot gehraaii meiN tha.. aapka likha hua bahot pasand aaya! likhte rahiye, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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1st April 2003, 02:46 AM
wah!! priya jii kya likhthi hai aap its really nice
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Hi Priya -
1st April 2003, 03:35 PM
Sahi Likha hai aapne Priya ji..Jab hamen bhi kabhi ye khyaal aata hai ke agar kahin woh sangdil hamare saamne aa gaya, to hum bhi issi tarah se ghabra jaate hain..Bas farak itna hai ke us ghabrahat ko jahan aap kaagaz mein utaarne mein safal ho jaati hain Aur main 'badnaseeb' yahan bhi haar jaata huun..
Aapne jo jo bhi likha sab is dil ko cheer gaya hai..par is sheyr ka to koi jawaab nahin hai Bheer me chali aa rahi thi ki tu nazar aa gaya baat karna chahti thi tujhsey par dil me "Magar" shabd aa gaya Bahut hi Gehra likha hai aapne(shayd jo aman ji ne mehsoos kiya tha woh isse bhi zyaada Gehra ho  )Chalta huun Take care Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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1st April 2003, 09:23 PM
hi priya
am mast dear ....kafi dino baad aayaa hoon ....tumhari shayree padne aaya tha ....acha laga pad ke .......aur sunao tumne to kabhi mail nahi karni mujhe bhi pata hai fir bhi hamesha ki tarha mein apna email chorr ke jaonga ...... friendtarun@rediffmail.com some lines for you :- tere dil tak jo pahooncha de woh rahein dhoondte hain hum wahi purana apnapan teri in bahon mein dhoondte hain hum andhere mein to apna saya bhi saath chorr deta hai zaalim jo andhere mein bhi saath rahe wohi saya dhoondte hain hum... tarun magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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hi -
1st April 2003, 11:35 PM
dear aman, aapke reply ka to hamesha hi intzaar rehta hai..aapke reply ko dekhkhar( usey padhne se pehle hi) khushi jhalakne lag jaati hai...aap soch le aapki kitni kadar aur keemat hai is dil mein...aapka shukriya ada karti hu..bas aapne pucha ki tarif kaise karu...to aap smile hi kar de...hamare liye vahi kaafi hai...aman what u say>
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Nilam ji thanks for likin this shayri frm my side ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Varinder ji sach mein aapne reply me theek kaha ki ghabrabhat hoti hai par i dont agre that u can be badnasseeb aisa keh kar is dosti ki tohin na karu yaar? Pasand karne ka aapka shukriya  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi tarun ji how ru > long time no c huh?? kaha rehte ho...yaar apne is shayri ko padha apna waqt lagakar aur pasand bhi kiya...wah aaj ka din to bahut hi acha hai thanks yaar..aapne shayri dil me utar gayi....dhundte hai vo saya jo saath de...Great/ummed karti hu u get tht kind of saath soon.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dosto aap sabka dil se shukriya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Re: Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj -
18th March 2006, 11:12 AM
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hamesa ki tarah aapki ye lines bi bohat pasand ayi hei. yeh sach mei lajawab hei. Kanchan |
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Re: Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj -
18th March 2006, 05:33 PM
Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj
Khoon ke aansu royi aur khud se kitne sawaal kar baithi mein aaj Kabhi tu lagta tha jaisa mera deewana hai aur aaj apna hoke bhi tu kitna begana hai hmm..... Bheer me chali aa rahi thi ki tu nazar aa gaya baat karna chahti thi tujhsey par dil me magar shabd aa gaya Aankhain jaise hi takri teri un gehri aankhon se Dil bebas hone laga meri un tej saanson se Wah.... Kadam chahtey they tere paas chalkar chale jayain Kehna bahut kuch tha par ashk naino se chalaktey jayain? Beautiful... Priya, Acha likha hai... magar meri umeed hai... tumhare saath aisa kabhi na ho... Apna khayal rakhna Rohin |
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18th March 2006, 06:51 PM
hi priya
beautiful bahut achha likha hai yuhi likhti rahna bye tc |
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Re: Re: Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj -
19th March 2006, 04:32 AM
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i am so glad to know ki aapko pasand aaya ye bhi.....aise hi saath dete rehna ---------- Dear Rohin, Thanks dear for liking it, until i got friends like u...all is well ------------ Luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Kawish -
19th March 2006, 02:01 PM
"Kaisay kehay woh jaan say pyaara nahi raha ... laikin woh abh humara nahi raha"
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Lajwab hy Priya.. |
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Lajwab hy Priya.. -
19th March 2006, 02:04 PM
Aandhiyon me bhi jaise kuch chirag jala kartey hai
Utni hi himmat-e-hausla hum bhi rakha kartey hai Manzilon abhi aur dur hai hamari Manzil Chaand - Sitarey to raahon me mila kartey hai! |
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20th March 2006, 12:52 AM
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Thanks for liking what i wrote...jus yuhi kuch here n there i write sometimes.....aise hi saaath dete rehna...and i will keep penning down some thoughts luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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hello -
22nd April 2006, 05:21 PM
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priya nice shayri....ite realy from the core of the heart...u know am working with AIRTEL in punjab ....since one year...now am happy to be busy sorry kafi dino tak aaya nahi near abt 6 mahine to ho gaye hain keep it up ur friend tarun magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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22nd April 2006, 06:17 PM
hmm. well said priya ji, keep goin
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Re: Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi mein aaj -
11th July 2006, 08:00 PM
Hiiiiiiiiiiii.... i hope everythings fine with you. talking to u after a real looong time...
tumhari shayri to pasand aayi... lekin pata nahi kyun yeh adhoori si lagi..... jaise abhi aur bhi kuch is me likhna baaki hai.. nahi jaanti kya.. par kuch hai.. shaayad tumhe bhi laga ho.... par phir bhi... ek khoobsoorat khayale-nazm ke liye bahut bahut badhaai... Don't know much about your situation... but just trying to add a few lines.. hope u'll like it.. Quote:
Na jane kaisi lachaari se ek doorse ko dekhTe jaayein.. Bheegin Thi palkein humari askhon ki chandni se.. Un pyar bhari aankhon me bhi par ashk kahan ruk paaye.. Badhaaya haath phir unhone apna.. Hum kahan apna haaTh unhe de paaye... Jo berukhi.. jo doori ban gayi na chaahte hue bhi darmayaan.. Woh doori aaj ek mulakaaT se kaise miT jaaye.. Kya woh chaahTe hain humein aaj bhi.. Bas yehi hum aaj Teh na kar paaye..... Ye sab soch kar hi ghabra si gayi main.. Kiye kiTne sawaal khud se jinke jawab na mil paaye.. ~Prii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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11th July 2006, 08:13 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...992#post205992
i have posted it here.... hope u'll like it... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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