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"Ain" Ko Bhi Ishq Ke Ab Tak Kahan Samjha Tha Main - 15th December 2012, 12:51 PM

Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Pehli Baar Hazrat-e-Allama Muhammad Iqbal Sahab Ki Kisi Ghazal Ki Zameen Par Likhnay Ki Jasarat Ki Hai….
Ummid Hai Ahl-e-Zauq Ko Pasand Aaye Gi….

THI FUGHAAN WO BHI JISAY ZABT-E-FUGHAAN SAMJHA THA MAIN

Apni Aah-e-Sard Ko Soz-e-Nihaan Samjha Tha Main
"Ain" Ko Bhi Ishq Ke Ab Tak Kahan Samjha Tha Main

Khaak Kar Daala Mujhay Bas Ik Nigaah-e-Shauq Ne
Meri Khush Fehmi Thi,Khud Ko Aasmaan samjha Tha Main

Haaye Ay Dil Tuu Ne Hee Khola Mera Raaz-e-Wafa
Tujh Ko To saray Jahan Me Raazdaan Samjha Tha Main

Keh Gaya Behta Sa Kaajal Us Ke Dil Ka Maajra
"Thi Fughaan Wo Bhi Jisay Zabt-e-Fughaan Samjha Tha Main"

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

Ab Khula Uqda, Hai AHMAD Ishq Ka Rutba Barra
Aql Ko Saray Jahan Pe Hukmraan Samjha Tha Main

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL




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15th December 2012, 05:24 PM

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Pehli Baar Hazrat-e-Allama Muhammad Iqbal Sahab Ki Kisi Ghazal Ki Zameen Par Likhnay Ki Jasarat Ki Hai….
Ummid Hai Ahl-e-Zauq Ko Pasand Aaye Gi….

THI FUGHAAN WO BHI JISAY ZABT-E-FUGHAAN SAMJHA THA MAIN

Apni Aah-e-Sard Ko Soz-e-Nihaan Samjha Tha Main
"Ain" Ko Bhi Ishq Ke Ab Tak Kahan Samjha Tha Main

Khaak Kar Daala Mujhay Bas Ik Nigaah-e-Shauq Ne
Meri Khush Fehmi Thi,Khud Ko Aasmaan samjha Tha Main

Haaye Ay Dil Tuu Ne Hee Khola Mera Raaz-e-Wafa
Tujh Ko To saray Jahan Me Raazdaan Samjha Tha Main

Keh Gaya Behta Sa Kaajal Us Ke Dil Ka Maajra
"Thi Fughaan Wo Bhi Jisay Zabt-e-Fughaan Samjha Tha Main"

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

Ab Khula Uqda, Hai AHMAD Ishq Ka Rutba Barra
Aql Ko Saray Jahan Pe Hukmraan Samjha Tha Main

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
AsSalaam Alykum Ahmad bhaee...

One word.....Sub'hanAllah!
Janaab waysay tou muhtaram Shaayar e Mashriq ki zameen kay saath inssaf kar paanaa buhat mushkil kaam haye..laykin aapnay insaaf say badhkar kia haye...ayk ayk satar dilfareb ...masroor kiya aapki is kaavish nay!

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15th December 2012, 06:18 PM

subhanallah............kya kalaam likha hai aapne.........wahh....sar se paa talak qayaamaat hai............khoob se bhi khooob............likhte rahiye yu hi..............dhero daad
   
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16th December 2012, 10:58 AM

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

WaaH ! BehtareeN !!

Asar Andaaz Kalaam !

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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16th December 2012, 11:06 AM

Haaye Ay Dil Tuu Ne Hee Khola Mera Raaz-e-Wafa
Tujh Ko To saray Jahan Me Raazdaan Samjha Tha Main

Keh Gaya Behta Sa Kaajal Us Ke Dil Ka Maajra
"Thi Fughaan Wo Bhi Jisay Zabt-e-Fughaan Samjha Tha Main"

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

WAH!!...Bohat khoob!!.......................




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19th December 2012, 11:59 AM

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One word.....Sub'hanAllah!
Janaab waysay tou muhtaram Shaayar e Mashriq ki zameen kay saath inssaf kar paanaa buhat mushkil kaam haye..laykin aapnay insaaf say badhkar kia haye...ayk ayk satar dilfareb ...masroor kiya aapki is kaavish nay!

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Aap Ki Zarrah-nawaazi HAi JO Aap NE Is Kaawish Ko Saraaha, KHushi Hui Aap ki Daaad Se,,.....

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subhanallah............kya kalaam likha hai aapne.........wahh....sar se paa talak qayaamaat hai............khoob se bhi khooob............likhte rahiye yu hi..............dhero daad

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WaaH ! BehtareeN !!

Asar Andaaz Kalaam !

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
Naresh Mehra Ji...!

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Haaye Ay Dil Tuu Ne Hee Khola Mera Raaz-e-Wafa
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Keh Gaya Behta Sa Kaajal Us Ke Dil Ka Maajra
"Thi Fughaan Wo Bhi Jisay Zabt-e-Fughaan Samjha Tha Main"

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

WAH!!...Bohat khoob!!.......................
Zainy JI,.....! Bazm ME Haazri Aur Kalaam PAr Hausla-Afzaayi Farmaanay Par Tah-e-Dil Se Aap KA MAshkoor Un.
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19th December 2012, 12:38 PM

bahut khoob likha hai aapne..ek alag andaaz mein...daad kubul karein...



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Ahmad Bhai Apki Ghazal bohat ba-kamal hai, pls ye bhi bata dein ke Allam Sahib ki konsi ghazal ki zameen pe likhi hai.

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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab…..!
Pehli Baar Hazrat-e-Allama Muhammad Iqbal Sahab Ki Kisi Ghazal Ki Zameen Par Likhnay Ki Jasarat Ki Hai….
Ummid Hai Ahl-e-Zauq Ko Pasand Aaye Gi….

THI FUGHAAN WO BHI JISAY ZABT-E-FUGHAAN SAMJHA THA MAIN

Apni Aah-e-Sard Ko Soz-e-Nihaan Samjha Tha Main
"Ain" Ko Bhi Ishq Ke Ab Tak Kahan Samjha Tha Main

Khaak Kar Daala Mujhay Bas Ik Nigaah-e-Shauq Ne
Meri Khush Fehmi Thi,Khud Ko Aasmaan samjha Tha Main

Haaye Ay Dil Tuu Ne Hee Khola Mera Raaz-e-Wafa
Tujh Ko To saray Jahan Me Raazdaan Samjha Tha Main

Keh Gaya Behta Sa Kaajal Us Ke Dil Ka Maajra
"Thi Fughaan Wo Bhi Jisay Zabt-e-Fughaan Samjha Tha Main"

Mujh Ko Khalwat Ne Meri Bakhsha Shaoor-e-Zindagi
Warna Is Kaar-e-Jahaan Ko Raayigaan Samjha Tha Main

Ab Khula Uqda, Hai AHMAD Ishq Ka Rutba Barra
Aql Ko Saray Jahan Pe Hukmraan Samjha Tha Main

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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28th December 2012, 04:03 PM

Shakeel sahab .. kya kahun.. qayaat hai aapki ghazal..... waaahhh

Awwal toishq ke Ain ne hi di jeet liyaa... baaki behte hue kaajal ne dil e nashaad ko is hadd tak mutmaeen kiyaa ke bayaani ke baahar ki baat hai... waahhh...

Is aalaa kalaam ke liye tahe dil se daad pesh karta hoon.. ummeed hai qubol kijiyegaa..
likhte rahen.. bazm ki raunak badhaate rahen...

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