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Love Ganga - 12th April 2010, 11:25 AM

doston ishq me koi bandish nahi hoti ye to kabhi bhi kisi se bhi ho jata hai..........aaj bhi yaad hai jab main himalay ki wadiyon me ganga ke kinare base apne pushtaini ghar ke aangan me khada ganga ko nihar raha tha...........na jane kyun uski balkhati shoor machati dharao'N ne mujhe mazboor kar diya ke main usse ishq kar baithu'N aur dekhiye kya kah gaya me u'se rijhane ke liye..................


GANGA mujhe bhi apna banale
apni dhara me ek baar bahale

kahte hain tu sabke gunah dhoti hai
kyun tu phir bhi nahi rooti hai

pahado'N se jab tu utarti hai
maidano'N ki kismat sanwarti hai

mok'sha ki jab bhi pyass jagti hai
tujse se hi sari aas lagti hai

himalay se sagar tak ke safar me
tere kinaro'N par sabhayata basti hai

aaj mujhe bhi tu khud me basale
ek baar bas mujhe khud se lagale




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awesome creation.... aapki is rachna ki taarif ke liye har shabd chhota lagta hai... Ganga maa ki shaan me mai shayad hi kuch likh pau...
superb............
likhte rahiye....... khush rahiye....


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GANGA mujhe bhi apna banale
apni dhara me ek baar bahale

kahte hain tu sabke gunah dhoti hai
kyun tu phir bhi nahi rooti hai

pahado'N se jab tu utarti hai
maidano'N ki kismat sanwarti hai

mok'sha ki jab bhi pyass jagti hai
tujse se hi sari aas lagti hai

himalay se sagar tak ke safar me
tere kinaro'N par sabhayata basti hai

aaj mujhe bhi tu khud me basale
ek baar bas mujhe khud se lagale

Very Impressive ! Superb Creation ............. !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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doston ishq me koi bandish nahi hoti ye to kabhi bhi kisi se bhi ho jata hai..........aaj bhi yaad hai jab main himalay ki wadiyon me ganga ke kinare base apne pushtaini ghar ke aangan me khada ganga ko nihar raha tha...........na jane kyun uski balkhati shoor machati dharao'N ne mujhe mazboor kar diya ke main usse ishq kar baithu'N aur dekhiye kya kah gaya me u'se rijhane ke liye..................


GANGA mujhe bhi apna banale
apni dhara me ek baar bahale

kahte hain tu sabke gunah dhoti hai
kyun tu phir bhi nahi rooti hai

pahado'N se jab tu utarti hai
maidano'N ki kismat sanwarti hai

mok'sha ki jab bhi pyass jagti hai
tujse se hi sari aas lagti hai

himalay se sagar tak ke safar me
tere kinaro'N par sabhayata basti hai

aaj mujhe bhi tu khud me basale
ek baar bas mujhe khud se lagale




bhai aaj se tum mere pakke dost ho gaye( tum mano ya na mano)
ganga ka naam sunta hu to rongte khade ho jaate hai......
mere dad batate hai ke jab mai paida hua to mujhe utha kar khidki se sabse pahle ganga ka darshan karaya tha......
aaj bhi waha ghat ke raste ke patthar 5000 saal puraane hai....
and we walk on a living musuem
its no coincidence that the ganga flows through the most anceint city of the world....
aur aaj mera sahi naam bhi sabko bata deta hu.....
vo hai pranav gupta
   
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bhai aaj se tum mere pakke dost ho gaye( tum mano ya na mano)
ganga ka naam sunta hu to rongte khade ho jaate hai......
mere dad batate hai ke jab mai paida hua to mujhe utha kar khidki se sabse pahle ganga ka darshan karaya tha......
aaj bhi waha ghat ke raste ke patthar 5000 saal puraane hai....
and we walk on a living musuem
its no coincidence that the ganga flows through the most anceint city of the world....
aur aaj mera sahi naam bhi sabko bata deta hu.....
vo hai pranav gupta
Yeh toh zidd sahab aapne Man Mohan Desai ki kisi film ki tarha aapne aslii naam ka khulasa kar diya aaj .....jaise unki harek film me hota hai....." tu mera bacchpan ka bichhra hua bhai hai....aaj se theek 20 saal pehle kumbh ke mele me kho gaya tha...bahut dhunda maa aur maine magar tu nahi mila....dekh tere seedhe haath me ek kala tiil hai....aisa hi mere haath me bhi hai.....hum judhwa bhai hai........"




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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awesome creation.... aapki is rachna ki taarif ke liye har shabd chhota lagta hai... Ganga maa ki shaan me mai shayad hi kuch likh pau...
superb............
likhte rahiye....... khush rahiye....
aare wah ye bhi khub rahi ..........is rachna ko post kiye kam se kam 2 mahine ho chale aur SDC walo ki nazar ab padi is par..........
is baat ke liye to lamha apka shukriya main to bhul hi gaya tha apni is post ke bare me mujhe laga shayad kisi ko pasand hi nahi aayi hai.............
kosish karunga aur bhi kuch likhne ki...........

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Very Impressive ! Superb Creation ............. !
naresh bhai apse kya kahun aapke kahe in chaar shabdoN ne to kuch bolne ke qabil hi nahi rakha humme..........tareef ke liye apka dil se shukriya........

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bhai aaj se tum mere pakke dost ho gaye( tum mano ya na mano)
ganga ka naam sunta hu to rongte khade ho jaate hai......
mere dad batate hai ke jab mai paida hua to mujhe utha kar khidki se sabse pahle ganga ka darshan karaya tha......
aaj bhi waha ghat ke raste ke patthar 5000 saal puraane hai....
and we walk on a living musuem
its no coincidence that the ganga flows through the most anceint city of the world....
aur aaj mera sahi naam bhi sabko bata deta hu.....
vo hai pranav gupta
pranav bhai tareef ke sath aapki dosti ka tohfa waah kya kahne....kabul hai
waise main abhi kuch dino pehle
GANGA ke udgam sthan GANGOTRI gaya hua tha is saal se uttarakhand govt. ne wahan jana ban kar diya hai par jaisa main hamesha kahta hoon duniya ki banayi deewarein itni uNchi bhi nahi ke main unhe paar na kar sakun..............
GANGA se to mera janm janm ka nata hai tabhi to jab bhi dil bechain hota hai kaam se ya rishte natoN se daud padta hoon rishikesh ke GANGA ghat ki aur..........
ye bhi thik rahi ek garib brahmin SDC par GANGA ko laya aur dekho Zidd bhai ka naam karan ho gaya..........Pranav Gupta...

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Yeh toh zidd sahab aapne Man Mohan Desai ki kisi film ki tarha aapne aslii naam ka khulasa kar diya aaj .....jaise unki harek film me hota hai....." tu mera bacchpan ka bichhra hua bhai hai....aaj se theek 20 saal pehle kumbh ke mele me kho gaya tha...bahut dhunda maa aur maine magar tu nahi mila....dekh tere seedhe haath me ek kala tiil hai....aisa hi mere haath me bhi hai.....hum judhwa bhai hai........"
aare meri is rachna ne to ek se bad kar ek kamal kar diye 2 bichhde hue bhaiyoN (naresh aur pranav) ko mila diya........
is hisab se to main Manmohan desai ho gaya hoon
lagta hai is par bhi kuch likhna padega mujhe

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doston ishq me koi bandish nahi hoti ye to kabhi bhi kisi se bhi ho jata hai..........aaj bhi yaad hai jab main himalay ki wadiyon me ganga ke kinare base apne pushtaini ghar ke aangan me khada ganga ko nihar raha tha...........na jane kyun uski balkhati shoor machati dharao'N ne mujhe mazboor kar diya ke main usse ishq kar baithu'N aur dekhiye kya kah gaya me u'se rijhane ke liye..................


GANGA mujhe bhi apna banale
apni dhara me ek baar bahale

kahte hain tu sabke gunah dhoti hai
kyun tu phir bhi nahi rooti hai

pahado'N se jab tu utarti hai
maidano'N ki kismat sanwarti hai

mok'sha ki jab bhi pyass jagti hai
tujse se hi sari aas lagti hai

himalay se sagar tak ke safar me
tere kinaro'N par sabhayata basti hai

aaj mujhe bhi tu khud me basale
ek baar bas mujhe khud se lagale


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[COLOR="rgb(255, 0, 255)"]Sabse Ziyada agar kuch laga toh , "Introduction".

The way you described about physicality of the scenario which made me feel a beautiful heaven..!!

Khair Kabhi Himalay ke Qareeb Aana to na hua mujhse, par chahta zaroor hoon..!! Wahan ki kacchi dhoop ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon..!!!

Blissfull feeling..!!
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[COLOR="rgb(255, 0, 255)"]Sabse Ziyada agar kuch laga toh , "Introduction".

The way you described about physicality of the scenario which made me feel a beautiful heaven..!!

Khair Kabhi Himalay ke Qareeb Aana to na hua mujhse, par chahta zaroor hoon..!! Wahan ki kacchi dhoop ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon..!!!

Blissfull feeling..!!
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Bahut Shukriya Bhai.......sach kehta hoon Ganga se kuch esa nata hai k kabhi kabhi to lagta hai k sharir (body) mein khoon ki jagah Gangajal daudta hai.......!

aur jahan tak rahi baat himalaya ki to Ganga k bina Himalaya ki ya Himalaya k bina Ganga ki kalpana bhi nahi ki ja sakti hai......dono hi Gyan aur Moksha k data hain.......!!

umeed karta hoon jald se jald aapka himalaya ki vadiyoN mein jana hoo aur ganga se mulakat.......!!!

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