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ek gujarish khuda se*** -
28th May 2007, 04:57 PM
mere sabhii dosto ko mera namaskaar....aaj mai ek nayii racnaa post kar rahii hu ...umid karti hu iss bar aapko nirash nahi karugi....aaplog merii kamiyo ko jarur bataiyaga...
.... Ai khuda sun le merii ek gujarish....... De de mere sanam ko merii wafaa kii gawahii... Bol de use ki hmne nahii use bhulaayaa..... Uskaa naam leke hii har lamhaa bitayaa. Bol ke jane ko usko........ Maine bhii aasuu bahaayaa. Har pal uskii yaado me.......... Hii maine din bitaayaa.. Bol do usko bhula de merii khataa ko... ChoD de merii yado ke sahre din bitaanaa. Ai khudaa sun le merii ek gujaarish...... De do mere sanam ko merii wafa kii gawahii..  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
 
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28th May 2007, 05:21 PM
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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28th May 2007, 05:27 PM
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god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th May 2007, 06:04 PM
saloni jee namaskaaR:
aik bahot hi khoobsooraT naZ^m aaj aapkii aur seY ham sab ko paRHne ko milii..khuShii huii..aor khuShii ess baat kii huii kii aap ehsaaSoN ko peSh karne meiN aage baRH rahe haiN..dil se niklii daad ko qabool farmaaYeN..yuuNhii liKhte raheN khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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29th May 2007, 10:54 AM
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bahut bahut sukriya hume parne ke liye...aapka sath raha to yakinan hum isse bhi behtar likhege...... ese hii sath dete rahiyega. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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29th May 2007, 01:00 PM
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aapko yaha dekh ke bahut khusii hui .........ese hii humaraa sath dete rahiyega. aapki choti sis~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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29th May 2007, 01:06 PM
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wah bohat bohat acha likha hai saloni bilkul simple aur clear yunhi likhti raho apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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29th May 2007, 01:07 PM
hi saloni ji
kese ho aap? saloni ji pehle to daad hazir hai aapki is rachna pe, kabuliyega ab aapki rachna ki baat kare to wo sach mein bahut hi achchhi lagi hamien, aapne jo dard bhate alfaaz ko yaha bayan kiya hai wo daad ke kabil hai, aapka wo khuda se kehne ka andaaz hamein is rachna mein bahut hi achchha laga, ese hi mehfil sajate rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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29th May 2007, 06:36 PM
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pahle to humarii naz^m parne ka bahut bahut sukriya...aapke hii hosla afzai ka natiza hai jo hum pahle se bahtar kar paa rahe hai......aapka sath agr rahe to yakinan hum aur bahtar likhege... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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29th May 2007, 08:09 PM
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kesii ho aap? pata hai aapko yaha aapne post pe dakh ke hume bahut khusii huii...umid kartii hu aapka sath hamesa banaa rahega... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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29th May 2007, 10:30 PM
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kaisi ho tum? wah kitna khobsurat likha hai tumne bhot pasand aye padhkar bhot acha likha meri dost itna acha likhti hai so sweet aise hi likhte rehna tumari dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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30th May 2007, 07:08 PM
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pahle too aapko bahut bahut shukriya hume parne ke liye..aur aapne khamakha kuch jyada hii tarif kar dii hai humaroo... aapka sath rahe to yakinan hum aur bahter likhege.. aapkii dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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30th May 2007, 08:20 PM
Dear Saloni,
Apko aaj padhne ka ye pahala moka humen mila. Aur pahali daffa men apke ehsaas katill nikle. Bahot khoob mohtarma. Aap yunhi likhti rahiye. Insha'allah aapko aur tarqqii milegi. Daad kabool kijiye. Ijaazat!! Grazie Apki dost Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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31st May 2007, 11:11 AM
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mai to thik hu ,tum kaisi ho...? aur tumne khamakha kuch jyada hii tarif kar dii hai..  ..tumko yaha dakh ke bahut khusi hui...ese hii sath dete rahnaa... tumharii dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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31st May 2007, 07:58 PM
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aapne hume parha isse hume bahut khusi hui....bass aapka sath rahe to yakinan hum aur acha likhege... aap ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa.... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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31st May 2007, 08:31 PM
de do mere sanam ko mere pyar ki gavaahi, hmmm, ahcha khayaal hai, kahiN mere dil me v yahi khayal baitha hua hai, ahcha laga aapko padhne ke liye...! bas yuNhi likhti rahiye apne jazbaatoN ko...!!
aapka dost LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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31st May 2007, 10:17 PM
Bahut hi khoobsoorti se aapne apne ehsaason ko shabdon me dhaala hai..
Daad kubool keejiye.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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1st June 2007, 12:26 PM
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pahle to itnii der se reply kiyaa aapne...jaiye hum bat nahii karte aap se..huhuh..  ..chaliye der aye to kya aye to sahii..ek bar phir meraa sath nibhane kaa bahut bahut sukriyaa... aapka sath raha to ese hii likhte rahege jii... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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1st June 2007, 03:50 PM
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aap ko yaha dekh kar hame bahut khusi hui.. ...ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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frnd 4 ever |
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1st June 2007, 06:51 PM
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Aadab saloni ji, kaisi hain ap? wah kya baat hain, bohot hi pyara hai aapka andaz_e_bayan, bas dil ko chuu gayi apki nazm, aapka ek_ek ashaar apke ehsason ko bayan kar raha hain, bohot khoob apna khayal rakhiye ALLAH HAFIZ ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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1st June 2007, 08:00 PM
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aapko yahaa dekh ke bahut khusi hui...apke dil ko chu liyaa meri rachnaa ne bass meri mahnat safal ho gayii jii... ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa...aur hume parte rahiyegaa.. aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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nice try |
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1st June 2007, 08:32 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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2nd June 2007, 03:37 PM
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pranam.. mai jantii hu abb bhi kuch kami hai meri lekhnii me...bass aapka sath rahe to yakinan wo bhii dur karlugi.......aapne ye kaha kii aap mere sath hai to mere me ek naya josh aa gaya jii.... ...umid karti hu ye sath hamesaa banaa rahegaa........aapne kimti samay me se samay nikal ke hame parte rahiyega .......aapki choti bahan, saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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6th June 2007, 01:13 AM
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par ham apne pyae ke sache hone ka kisi koi yakeen uske jane ke baad bhi kyun dilaye bhala?? asha hai meri baat samjhogi hai na saloni. apna khyaal rahna aur khush rahna with love sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th September 2007, 02:33 PM
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sakhi kaisii hai aap..?? aapko apni post pe dekh ke bahut khushi hui....ese hii sath dete rahiyegaa... aapki dost~ saloni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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