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23rd September 2009, 01:10 AM
Koi deewana kahta hai, koi pagal samajhta hai
Magar dharti ki bechaini ko bas badal samajhta hai Mai tujhse door kaisa hoon, tu mujhse door kaisi hai Ye tera dil samajhta hai ya mera dil samajhta hai Mohabbat ek ehsaason ki paawan si kahani hai Kabhi kabeera deewana tha, kabhi meera deewani hai Yaha sab log kahte hain meri aankhon mein aansu hai Jo tu samjhe to moti hai jo na samjhe to pani hai Samandar peer ka andar hai lekin ro nahi sakta Ye aansu pyar ka moti hai isko kho nahi sakta Meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le Jo mera ho nahi paaya wo tera ho nahi sakta Bhramar koi kumudani per machal baitha to hungama Humare dil mein koi khwab pal baitha to hungama Abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab kissa mohabbat ka Mai kisse ko hakiqat mein badal baitha to hungama.... "Ishq apna rahe us shab tak, jiska na koi savera ho...." |
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23rd September 2009, 11:05 AM
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Chandan Ji Namashkar, Sarvapratham to aapka SDC pe swaagat hai. Aur jaisa ki kehte haiN "agar aagaaz itna khuubsuurat hai to inteha kya hogi!" Bahot khuub janab. Aapki nazm se behad mutassir hua. Aapke ehsas behad gehre haiN, bayani bhi achhi hai aur adaaygi bhi. Chaaro chhand apne aap meiN mukammal haiN. Khuubsurat nazm pe daad qubuul kijiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye. Khush rahiye Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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23rd September 2009, 11:25 AM
Shyam ji
Bahut bahut shukriya ek zarre jo nawaaza yun khayalon se, bas aaplogo ka isi tarah sath chahiye. aur hum koi bade shayar to hai nahi, so tareef ke sath agar koi kami nazar aaye to zarur bataiyega humein achha lagega.... Chandan verma |
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13th December 2009, 09:51 PM
Chandan jii,
Main bhi Aapka swagat Karta hooN sdc meiN, halanki mujhe Khud bhi zyada waqt nahi hua lekin ye jagah apni si lagne lagi hai..... Bahut badhiya aur arthpurn rachna hai, bahut gehrayee liye hue....hme bahut pasand aayee.... Likhte rahiye...... Khush rahiye...... Aapka dost, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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14th December 2009, 10:34 AM
Chandan Ji.........Namaste !
Yeh Nazm maine pehle kai baar sun rakhi hai........aapki likhi hui hai kiya ? jaisa ho bataiyega.... ha......maine kisi kavi sammelan mai suni thi....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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9th January 2010, 04:28 PM
hello chandan ji
bahut achhi poetry likhi hai aapne bas aise hi likhte rahiye mujhe khaskar wo line bahut achhi lagi hai "Mohabbat ek ehsaason ki paawan si kahani hai Kabhi kabeera deewana tha, kabhi meera deewani hai Yaha sab log kahte hain meri aankhon mein aansu hai Jo tu samjhe to moti hai jo na samjhe to pani hai" Raj... uski yaadein hi ab is dil mein reh gayi, thi shayad uski bhi koi majboori, jo aaj meri kahani fir adhoori reh gayi" |
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