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29th November 2005, 11:32 PM
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aaj dil se fir ek gajal nikli hai jinhe lafjon mai dhal kar laya hun aapki mahfil mai ek adhoore ishq ka kissa raha hun main ! ek adhkhili bahaar ka hissa raha hun main ! shiddat se kyun us bewafa se pyaar kiya tha ik umr apne aap se gussa raha hun amin ! jisase mila kiya dosti se mila kiya .. fir bhi kyun dosti ko tarsata raha hun main ! tishna hee jee raha tha tishna hee mar gaya barso se ashk ban ke barasta raha hun main ! ek pal ke liye bhi jo hamara nahi raha e " Anish" jindgi bhur uska raha hun main ! tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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29th November 2005, 11:34 PM
dear anish...tumne toh bilkul mere dil baat keh di hai apne kalaam mein....yun lag raha hai jaise tumne mere man ki baat padhli ho.....man bhar aya ise padhke.
bahaur umda likkha hai dear...keep posting...take care....bye Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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30th November 2005, 05:46 PM
hi farhana
thnx ke aapko ye rachna bhi pasand aai aapne reply kiya iske liye shukriya ... aapne kaha ke maine aapke dil ka haal likh diya to ham sabhi ke dil ka haal kahin na kahin milta julta hai hai na???? tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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30th November 2005, 06:01 PM
well said man
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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30th November 2005, 08:18 PM
bahut hi pyara liokha hai...... mujhe bahut pasand aayi apki Gazal..... u hin likhte rahiye
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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30th November 2005, 09:14 PM
Waah Waah Waaah aur ek aur baar Waah.
Anish bahi aap mano ya na mano lekin aapke pehli pesh kash ya yunn kahiye ke aapka pehla kalaam jo meine padha tha.. uss waqt se aapke rekhte mein khichaav sa pataa hoon, ek khaasiyat si mehsoos hoti hai. Bohot khoob kaha hai aapne ke shiddat se kyun us bewafa se pyaar kiya tha ik umr apne aap se gussa raha hun main pur-asar, pur-maani, kaamil.... yunn hi mehfil roshan karte rahein janaab.... Talib. |
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30th November 2005, 10:52 PM
dea rmehul
thnx for reply or aapko ye gajal pasand aai iske liye shukriya tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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30th November 2005, 10:56 PM
dear kuhulika
achha laga jankar ke aapko mera likha pasand aaya ye meri khushnaseebi hai ... yun to dil ka haal likhkar khushi hoti he hai or jab wo gajal kisi ko pasand aaye to or bhi khushi hoti hai tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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30th November 2005, 11:00 PM
hi talib jee
fir se aapko dekh kar khushi hui or khushi hui ke aapko mera likha pasand aaya aapne jin lafjo mai meri is rachana ko saraha uske liye shukr gujaar hun or haan apka sms mila bahut achha laga aapka sher waki umda par mai reply nahi kar paya sorry tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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