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main jab bhi dil main..... - 3rd November 2007, 01:29 PM

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Bahut dino baad fir se dil ne kuchh likhne par majboor kiya to kuchh kagaj par utarta chala gaya socha aap sabhi kee najar karun pasand aaye to batiyega or agar kuchh kahin galat ya kami see lage to bhi apni ray dijiyega aap doston kee mahfil main aakar kuchh padhna or dil ke kuchh bahut andar chal rahe jajbaat pesh karne main achha lagta hai


Main jab bhi dil main kuchh thaan kar ke rakhta hun !
Ummid kam hai bahut maan kar ke rakhta hun !

Kisi ke pyaar kee tohin na ho jaye kahin ..
Main sare dard –e- dil sambhal karke rakhta hun !

Na jaane kaun tere khwaabon kee tabeer bane ..
Main apna aks bhi nikhar kar ke rakhta hun !

Tere huzur main kuchh kahne kee manjoori nahi ..
Juban aankhon main hee dhal kar ke rakhta hun !

Har ek shaks teri or hee kyun takta hai ..
Jab saari baate.n main bayaan kar ke rakhta hun !

Na kar de maut teri yadon se mahroom mujhe ..
Main apni jaan ko sambhaal kar ke rakhta hun !

Kahin na khul jaye ye raj-e-ashiqi mera ..
Main apne dil pe bhi lagam kar ke rakhta hun !


anish

tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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Smile hi - 3rd November 2007, 01:56 PM

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Dear Friends
Bahut dino baad fir se dil ne kuchh likhne par majboor kiya to kuchh kagaj par utarta chala gaya socha aap sabhi kee najar karun pasand aaye to batiyega or agar kuchh kahin galat ya kami see lage to bhi apni ray dijiyega aap doston kee mahfil main aakar kuchh padhna or dil ke kuchh bahut andar chal rahe jajbaat pesh karne main achha lagta hai


Main jab bhi dil main kuchh thaan kar ke rakhta hun !
Ummid kam hai bahut maan kar ke rakhta hun !

Kisi ke pyaar kee tohin na ho jaye kahin ..
Main sare dard –e- dil sambhal karke rakhta hun !

Na jaane kaun tere khwaabon kee tabeer bane ..
Main apna aks bhi nikhar kar ke rakhta hun !

Tere huzur main kuchh kahne kee manjoori nahi ..
Juban aankhon main hee dhal kar ke rakhta hun !

Har ek shaks teri or hee kyun takta hai ..
Jab saari baate.n main bayaan kar ke rakhta hun !

Na kar de maut teri yadon se mahroom mujhe ..
Main apni jaan ko sambhaal kar ke rakhta hun !

Kahin na khul jaye ye raj-e-ashiqi mera ..
Main apne dil pe bhi lagam kar ke rakhta hun !

hello anish ji kaise hai aap? aaj kal kaha gayab rehte hai janab?
aap ki ghazal "tanhaayi men yaado ke jungle sulag pade" mere zeh'n se hatati hee nahii hai.

aur ab aap ki is ghazal ki baat kare to yeh bhi kaabil-e-taarif hai ,bahut hee khoob likha hai anish ji aap ne. meri aur se dher sari dad aur shubhkaamanye qubool farmaaye is behtareen kalaam par. yunhee likhate rahiyega aur aate rahiyega. aap jaise shayar ki hamaari family ko sakht jaroorat hai.

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3rd November 2007, 01:58 PM

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Bahut dino baad fir se dil ne kuchh likhne par majboor kiya to kuchh kagaj par utarta chala gaya socha aap sabhi kee najar karun pasand aaye to batiyega or agar kuchh kahin galat ya kami see lage to bhi apni ray dijiyega aap doston kee mahfil main aakar kuchh padhna or dil ke kuchh bahut andar chal rahe jajbaat pesh karne main achha lagta hai


Main jab bhi dil main kuchh thaan kar ke rakhta hun !
Ummid kam hai bahut maan kar ke rakhta hun !

Kisi ke pyaar kee tohin na ho jaye kahin ..
Main sare dard –e- dil sambhal karke rakhta hun !

Na jaane kaun tere khwaabon kee tabeer bane ..
Main apna aks bhi nikhar kar ke rakhta hun !

Tere huzur main kuchh kahne kee manjoori nahi ..
Juban aankhon main hee dhal kar ke rakhta hun !

Har ek shaks teri or hee kyun takta hai ..
Jab saari baate.n main bayaan kar ke rakhta hun !

Na kar de maut teri yadon se mahroom mujhe ..
Main apni jaan ko sambhaal kar ke rakhta hun !

Kahin na khul jaye ye raj-e-ashiqi mera ..
Main apne dil pe bhi lagam kar ke rakhta hun !




hello ji
Anish ji
kaise hai aap?
meine to socha ab apki shayri shayad hi padhne ko mile...
per aaj apki shayri padhkar sacch mein bahut accha laga....

aapne bahut accha likkha hai.. har baar ki tarah

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Na kar de maut teri yadon se mahroom mujhe ..
Main apni jaan ko sambhaal kar ke rakhta hun !

Kahin na khul jaye ye raj-e-ashiqi mera ..
Main apne dil pe bhi lagam kar ke rakhta hun
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apke yeh do sher bahut hi acche lage

umeed hai aap aage bhi aise hi shayri karte raheinge or humein nirash nahi kareinge na aane ki wajah se....

tc ji


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uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
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kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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5th November 2007, 12:23 PM

Dear manu
thanks ke aap fir se ek baar yanha aaye meri hosla afjai ke liye aapko mera likha pasand aaya mujhe khushi hui or aap meri har rachna ka reply karte hain iske liye main hamesha apka tah-e-dil se shukriya ada karta hun thanks for all reply


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5th November 2007, 03:41 PM

Kahin na khul jaye ye raj-e-ashiqi mera ..
Main apne dil pe bhi lagam kar ke rakhta hun !


very nice one anishji...........Yun hi yaha is bazm ki ronak badhate rehna...


mausam...


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