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ik khat.....Rab de naa. - 14th July 2010, 01:36 AM
SDC te sab dosta nu sat sri akaal.dosto bari purani hai eh kavita.1982 ch likhi c.dil kita tuhaday sab naal sanjhii karaN.so tuhaday vicharaN da intezaar rahega.jis traN di v lagay be jhijak likhna.

Oh baadshahaN de baadshah te nimanya de maan
ki soch tu apne aap nu kahana hai bhagwaan.
das khaN kehri gal pichay c tu eh dunia banai
kisay hor di mat le lenda je apni c gwai.
ho k bhagwaan,te tu rachya edaN da sansaar
be tuki jisdi har shai te be matalva har kirdaar.

bhed bhaav jehay saray jehar is vich hii pa ditay
hor taN hor fullaN nal v kanday tu laga ditay
sabhni ghariN laaya kismat da boota,te oh v iko jeha nahi
kisay nu ghat te kisay nu vadh,ki teray hath v nia nahi.

koi gareeb koi amir koi khara koi khota
ik paani di traN rohray dujaa lai khara hai lota.

dharm banaan lagay bana ditay senkday dharm
fir lokaN nu fsaan lai das ditay kinay hii karm.

basda ay tu har shai andar eh teri hii baani ay
ena kujh bana k kehnda,eh sab jhooth di hii ghaani ay.

ik de andar vad k tu katal pya karvaana ay
dujay andar vad k tu fansi te charvaana ay
eho jehay kam taN shaitaan de v nahi hunday
te tu apne aap nu bhagwaan kahaana ay.

je eh sab jhooth hai taN ena kujh banaan di ki lod c
sohnay- sohnay sitarayiaN naal asmaan nu sajaan di ki lod c.

gal mannay j tu "seep" di
haalay v is jhooth nu samet lai
dulay hoay beraN da kujh nai bigarya
bukal ch lapet lai.

jhooth-jhooth banaday-banaday,kal tu v sach na kahaweNga
jhoothay di eh jhoothi maya,ant tu jhootha hii kahaweNga.

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14th July 2010, 08:44 AM
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SDC te sab dosta nu sat sri akaal.dosto bari purani hai eh kavita.1982 ch likhi c.dil kita tuhaday sab naal sanjhii karaN.so tuhaday vicharaN da intezaar rahega.jis traN di v lagay be jhijak likhna.

Oh baadshahaN de baadshah te nimanya de maan
ki soch tu apne aap nu kahana hai bhagwaan.
das khaN kehri gal pichay c tu eh dunia banai
kisay hor di mat le lenda je apni c gwai.
ho k bhagwaan,te tu rachya edaN da sansaar
be tuki jisdi har shai te be matalva har kirdaar.

bhed bhaav jehay saray jehar is vich hii pa ditay
hor taN hor fullaN nal v kanday tu laga ditay
sabhni ghariN laaya kismat da boota,te oh v iko jeha nahi
kisay nu ghat te kisay nu vadh,ki teray hath v nia nahi.

koi gareeb koi amir koi khara koi khota
ik paani di traN rohray dujaa lai khara hai lota.

dharm banaan lagay bana ditay senkday dharm
fir lokaN nu fsaan lai das ditay kinay hii karm.

basda ay tu har shai andar eh teri hii baani ay
ena kujh bana k kehnda,eh sab jhooth di hii ghaani ay.

ik de andar vad k tu katal pya karvaana ay
dujay andar vad k tu fansi te charvaana ay
eho jehay kam taN shaitaan de v nahi hunday
te tu apne aap nu bhagwaan kahaana ay.

je eh sab jhooth hai taN ena kujh banaan di ki lod c
sohnay- sohnay sitarayiaN naal asmaan nu sajaan di ki lod c.

gal mannay j tu "seep" di
haalay v is jhooth nu samet lai
dulay hoay beraN da kujh nai bigarya
bukal ch lapet lai.

jhooth-jhooth banaday-banaday,kal tu v sach na kahaweNga
jhoothay di eh jhoothi maya,ant tu jhootha hii kahaweNga.

rajinderseep



bahut khoob ranjinder ji bahut hi vdia.....
ik de andar vad k tu katal pya karvaana ay
dujay andar vad k tu fansi te charvaana ay
eho jehay kam taN shaitaan de v nahi hunday
te tu apne aap nu bhagwaan kahaana ay.

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14th July 2010, 11:45 PM
hi.....maaf krio rajinder g..ethe main kavita te nahi..kavi di soch te ashemati karn ja reha....it leads towards pessimism.........rabb ne ta dunia bht vdia bnai hai ji...bas dekhan da nazria har ik da..ohne kise nal koi vitkra ni kita...eh sab insan e krda...remeber gurdass maan ji's song "rabb jo krda changa e krda,eh puthia sidhia banda e krda" ............
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Loveleen ji tareef lai shukria.
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15th July 2010, 09:41 PM
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hi.....maaf krio rajinder g..ethe main kavita te nahi..kavi di soch te ashemati karn ja reha....it leads towards pessimism.........rabb ne ta dunia bht vdia bnai hai ji...bas dekhan da nazria har ik da..ohne kise nal koi vitkra ni kita...eh sab insan e krda...remeber gurdass maan ji's song "rabb jo krda changa e krda,eh puthia sidhia banda e krda" ............
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agreed, deep ji completely agreed main poori tarah sehmat haN tuhaday naal.par eh kavita meiN unha logaN nu khyal ch rakh k likhi hai jinha nu rab naal bahut hi shikaytaN han te har velay kehNday rehNday han k rab ne unha da eh nahi kita te oh nahi kita.so........................................... ..

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16th July 2010, 10:08 AM
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hi.....maaf krio rajinder g..ethe main kavita te nahi..kavi di soch te ashemati karn ja reha....it leads towards pessimism.........rabb ne ta dunia bht vdia bnai hai ji...bas dekhan da nazria har ik da..ohne kise nal koi vitkra ni kita...eh sab insan e krda...remeber gurdass maan ji's song "rabb jo krda changa e krda,eh puthia sidhia banda e krda" ............
agree?

agreed, deep ji completely agreed main poori tarah sehmat haN tuhaday naal.par eh kavita meiN unha logaN nu khyal ch rakh k likhi hai jinha nu rab naal bahut hi shikaytaN han te har velay kehNday rehNday han k rab ne unha da eh nahi kita te oh nahi kita.so........................................... ..

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ji rajinder ji fer oh lok galat ne na jo shikayta krde ne........tsi shayd gurdas maan ji da oh song sunea hovega " heer"..osde kuj bol es tra ne...."tere jog da ki fyda j sanjog hi na jite,'marjaane maana' rabb tenu hath pair dite,tu ta beh gya a dere ch fakir banke.ki khatia main teri heer banke.."..........so kehn da matlab..if god is giving u life..u shud respect 'em and show sm courage towards troubles of life....jdo rabb ne hath pair dite aa ta..jst go get evrthng.....baki in case of handicapes,othe v ohna kyi examples set kitia ne...so the thing is u hav to show sm meter towards the destiny...in true words u r ur own god..
   
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16th July 2010, 10:13 AM
SSA Rajinder ji....hope u r doing great....bahut hi vadhia likhia hai tusiN.......take care



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