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insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!!!



jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!

sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sach maan, jisne hai j'na wo rakhega tujhko,
kal pheNka tha jo beej, aaj pauda ho gaya...!

tufaaNoN meiN ghiri thi jab kashti ye meri...
kahiN se aaya tu, aa ke naakhuda* ho gaya...!

tha pyaar be-hisaab, bas taqazoN ne mara...
ishq na hua, tera zulf-e-khamshuda* ho gaya...!

haiN zoroN pe charche, chehre hairaan haiN...
'masttt...' ye kaise mard-e-baakhuda* ho gaya...!



*sauda = trade
*naakhuda = sailor, oarsman
*zulf-e-khamshuda = a long braid
*mard-e-baakhuda = servant of god


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!
sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sacchi baat!!!!

likhte rahe aise hi bhai!!!


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insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!!!



jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!

sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sach maan, jisne hai j'na wo rakhega tujhko,
kal pheNka tha jo beej, aaj pauda ho gaya...!

tufaaNoN meiN ghiri thi jab kashti ye meri...
kahiN se aaya tu, aa ke naakhuda* ho gaya...!

tha pyaar be-hisaab, bas taqazoN ne mara...
ishq na hua, tera zulf-e-khamshuda* ho gaya...!

haiN zoroN pe charche, chehre hairaan haiN...
'masttt...' ye kaise mard-e-baakhuda* ho gaya...!



*sauda = trade
*naakhuda = sailor, oarsman
*zulf-e-khamshuda = a long braid
*mard-e-baakhuda = servant of god

vikram bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob daad dil se hazir hai
duaon ke saath


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Subhan_allah Vikram Saheb is tanziya matle ke kya kehne.........bohat khoob.

jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!


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insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!!!



jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!

sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sach maan, jisne hai j'na wo rakhega tujhko,
kal pheNka tha jo beej, aaj pauda ho gaya...!

tufaaNoN meiN ghiri thi jab kashti ye meri...
kahiN se aaya tu, aa ke naakhuda* ho gaya...!

tha pyaar be-hisaab, bas taqazoN ne mara...
ishq na hua, tera zulf-e-khamshuda* ho gaya...!

haiN zoroN pe charche, chehre hairaan haiN...
'masttt...' ye kaise mard-e-baakhuda* ho gaya...!



*sauda = trade
*naakhuda = sailor, oarsman
*zulf-e-khamshuda = a long braid
*mard-e-baakhuda = servant of god
ghazal bhai apki bahut acchi lagi
khas taur par apka matla....
daad hazir hai.....
bus ye zulfe khamshuda ka matlab aapke niche bataye gaye matlab se mere mann me match karta nahi dikhta.......
zulfe kham shuda.......hmmm.....kham maane bent(jhuka hua) aur shuda shayad shadi shudaa wala 'shuda'( yani ke saath)...is logic se ye shayad jhuka hua baal ya maane khiche to'curly hair' hona chaiye.....
aap jaruur mujhe correct kar dijiye .........mere bhi to ilm me ijaafaa ho( kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi...maine jaise bataya waise shayad na ho)

magar ye bina dispute ke apki best ghazal hai mere liye.......
daad hazir hai

ABHI DEKHA DICTIONERY ME MEANING VIKRAMJI.... APKA KHAMSUDAA SAHI HAI.......I STAND CORECCTED

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Aadaab Vikram bhai!

bahut dino bad yahan reply kar raha hun,,.. aapki yeh gazal bahut achchi lagi...

Bahut hi gehrai hai aapki is gazal mein.. actuaqly mere agar dilko koi kalaam lage to hi main reply kar raha hun... aur aapki gazal mere dil ko lagi yeh bhi sahin hia ...

sabhi sher bahut umdaa rahe... dill se daad hazir hia janab ..... keep writing..
Keep posting.......

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ghazal bhai apki bahut acchi lagi
khas taur par apka matla....
daad hazir hai.....
bus ye zulfe khamshuda ka matlab aapke niche bataye gaye matlab se mere mann me match karta nahi dikhta.......
zulfe kham shuda.......hmmm.....kham maane bent(jhuka hua) aur shuda shayad shadi shudaa wala 'shuda'( yani ke saath)...is logic se ye shayad jhuka hua baal ya maane khiche to'curly hair' hona chaiye.....
aap jaruur mujhe correct kar dijiye .........mere bhi to ilm me ijaafaa ho( kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi...maine jaise bataya waise shayad na ho)

magar ye bina dispute ke apki best ghazal hai mere liye.......
daad hazir hai

Ha hah aha Zidd sahab aap bhi kamaal karte hai kahm ka matlab zaruri nahi ke curly hair ho.... ?
janab kham means pechinda...
aap bhi naa.....


main isliye yahan Vikram bhai ki side le raha hun coz I know ke Pyaar kya hota hia aksar pyaar ka yehi anjaam hota hai... still IM bachlor so ...

Gustakhi mau ho janab khamshuda ka aapne jo matlab nikala bilkul galat..
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Aadaab Vikram bhai!

bahut dino bad yahan reply kar raha hun,,.. aapki yeh gazal bahut achchi lagi...

Bahut hi gehrai hai aapki is gazal mein.. actuaqly mere agar dilko koi kalaam lage to hi main reply kar raha hun... aur aapki gazal mere dil ko lagi yeh bhi sahin hia ...

sabhi sher bahut umdaa rahe... dill se daad hazir hia janab ..... keep writing..
Keep posting.......

Khuda Hafez......




Ha hah aha Zidd sahab aap bhi kamaal karte hai kahm ka matlab zaruri nahi ke curly hair ho.... ?
janab kham means pechinda...
aap bhi naa.....


main isliye yahan Vikram bhai ki side le raha hun coz I know ke Pyaar kya hota hia aksar pyaar ka yehi anjaam hota hai... still IM bachlor so ...

Gustakhi mau ho janab khamshuda ka aapne jo matlab nikala bilkul galat..
nikala.....


Khair bade bade shayroN se galti hoti hai main koi shayar nahi ... isliye kah diya ..
accha ...mkiyaa...to aaj apko aapka chance mil hi gaya

magar miya zara jyada josh me lagte ho kya baat hai?

kham matlab pechidaa???

to phir ye kya hai

nigah-e kham==pechida ankhe ke jhuki nigah??

aur ye kya hai

surahi ke kham ke saath= pechidaa suraahi??
ki jhuki hui suraahi............

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jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!
sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sacchi baat!!!!

likhte rahe aise hi bhai!!!


aapka
bahut bahut shukriya amit da....
aapko pasaNd aayee, mujhe achha laga...


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Vikram bhai namskaar....
khuda se duaa karta huN ki aapko hamesha khush rakhe

Bahut hi pasand aayi aapki ye koshish
daad qabool kareN

aur ye line to bahut hi pasand aayi iske liye alag se daad haajir hai

jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya..


maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
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Vikram Ji.....Bahut asardaar lagi aapki yeh pehkash........matla khaas pasand aaya...aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...

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vikram bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob daad dil se hazir hai
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe ishq saheb,
padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya....


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Subhan_allah Vikram Saheb is tanziya matle ke kya kehne.........bohat khoob.

jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!
ghayal saheb,

aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN...aise hi hausale badhaate rahiyega saheb...
bahut bahut shukriya...


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bus ye zulfe khamshuda ka matlab aapke niche bataye gaye matlab se mere mann me match karta nahi dikhta.......
zulfe kham shuda.......hmmm.....kham maane bent(jhuka hua) aur shuda shayad shadi shudaa wala 'shuda'( yani ke saath)...is logic se ye shayad jhuka hua baal ya maane khiche to'curly hair' hona chaiye.....
aap jaruur mujhe correct kar dijiye .........mere bhi to ilm me ijaafaa ho( kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi...maine jaise bataya waise shayad na ho)

magar ye bina dispute ke apki best ghazal hai mere liye.......
daad hazir hai

ABHI DEKHA DICTIONERY ME MEANING VIKRAMJI.... APKA KHAMSUDAA SAHI HAI.......I STAND CORECCTED

zidd saheb aapka mere thread pe aana hi izzat ki baat hai mere liye, aapne to daad bhi de di….bahut bahut shukriya janaab…
“zulfe khamshuda” ka masala bhi hal ho gaya, lekin maiN dictionary meaning se zyada aapke bataye matlab se bhi convinced hooN….kham mane jhuka hua ya jisme bal pa’de hoN…to ‘curly hair’ bhi sahi hai….
yahaN i’s ka istemaal tiredness ya uktaahat ki feeling ko display karne ke liye istemaal kiya hai, i’sliye dono ka matlab taqreeban sahi baitha_ta hai
sameer saheb ka pechida bhi mujhe sahi jaan padta hai…
mujhe lagta hai ki kai words ko situation ke mad’de nazar interpret kiya jaana chahiye kyuNki situation ke accordingly hi unka sahi matlab nikalta hai...


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( kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi...maine jaise bataya waise shayad na ho)
hahahahaha….. kabhi kabhi nahi saheb ak’sar aisa hota hai….
maiN matlab ki nahi amuman jo hota hai uski baat kar raha hooN...

aapki daad ka phirse shukriya….


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zidd saheb aapka mere thread pe aana hi izzat ki baat hai mere liye, aapne to daad bhi de di….bahut bahut shukriya janaab…
“zulfe khamshuda” ka masala bhi hal ho gaya, lekin maiN dictionary meaning se zyada aapke bataye matlab se bhi convinced hooN….kham mane jhuka hua ya jisme bal pa’de hoN…to ‘curly hair’ bhi sahi hai….
yahaN i’s ka istemaal tiredness ya uktaahat ki feeling ko display karne ke liye istemaal kiya hai, i’sliye dono ka matlab taqreeban sahi baitha_ta hai
sameer saheb ka pechida bhi mujhe sahi jaan padta hai…
mujhe lagta hai ki kai words ko situation ke mad’de nazar interpret kiya jaana chahiye kyuNki situation ke accordingly hi unka sahi matlab nikalta hai...




hahahahaha….. kabhi kabhi nahi saheb ak’sar aisa hota hai….
maiN matlab ki nahi amuman jo hota hai uski baat kar raha hooN...

aapki daad ka phirse shukriya….
bhai vikram sahab.........ab jo dictionery me hai vo hi sahi hai..........
maine to pahle tukka lagaya tha words ke break up ke hisaab se...
phir thode der baad dictionery dekha....
i am not embarassed one lil bit....shayad apko aisa lag raha hai...ye apka pyaar aur muhabbta hai jo iska matlab kuch aur nikalne ki koshish kar rahe hai....mere matlab ke hisaab se...

agar mai embarassed hota to -agar mai khudko edit karke correct kar sakta hu to kya mera post delete nahi kar sakta tha? magar aisa karta to beimaani ho jaati...

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insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!!!



jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!

sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

sach maan, jisne hai j'na wo rakhega tujhko,
kal pheNka tha jo beej, aaj pauda ho gaya...!

tufaaNoN meiN ghiri thi jab kashti ye meri...
kahiN se aaya tu, aa ke naakhuda* ho gaya...!

tha pyaar be-hisaab, bas taqazoN ne mara...
ishq na hua, tera zulf-e-khamshuda* ho gaya...!

haiN zoroN pe charche, chehre hairaan haiN...
'masttt...' ye kaise mard-e-baakhuda* ho gaya...!



*sauda = trade
*naakhuda = sailor, oarsman
*zulf-e-khamshuda = a long braid
*mard-e-baakhuda = servant of god

Kya baat hai Vikram ji........ Dil khush ho gya aapki rachna padh kar........
sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
be-rozgaar the, uska bhi sauda* ho gaya...!

ye lines mujhe bahut hi pasand aai......... Dil Se Daad Hazir hai.............

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Aadaab Vikram bhai!

bahut dino bad yahan reply kar raha hun,,.. aapki yeh gazal bahut achchi lagi...

Bahut hi gehrai hai aapki is gazal mein.. actuaqly mere agar dilko koi kalaam lage to hi main reply kar raha hun... aur aapki gazal mere dil ko lagi yeh bhi sahin hia ...

sabhi sher bahut umdaa rahe... dill se daad hazir hia janab ..... keep writing..
Keep posting.......

Khuda Hafez......



Ha hah aha Zidd sahab aap bhi kamaal karte hai kahm ka matlab zaruri nahi ke curly hair ho.... ?
janab kham means pechinda...
aap bhi naa.....


main isliye yahan Vikram bhai ki side le raha hun coz I know ke Pyaar kya hota hia aksar pyaar ka yehi anjaam hota hai... still IM bachlor so ...

Gustakhi mau ho janab khamshuda ka aapne jo matlab nikala bilkul galat..
nikala.....


Khair bade bade shayroN se galti hoti hai main koi shayar nahi ... isliye kah diya ..
aadaab sameer saheb...!
ghazal padhne aur pasaNd karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hooN...bahut bahut shukriya janaab...
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bahut bahut shukriya....!!!


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Vikram bhai namskaar....
khuda se duaa karta huN ki aapko hamesha khush rakhe

Bahut hi pasand aayi aapki ye koshish
daad qabool kareN

aur ye line to bahut hi pasand aayi iske liye alag se daad haajir hai

jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya..
bahut bahut shukriya rajeev bhai.....


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apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
naresh saheb,
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jaane jism se kaise, iska dil juda ho gaya...?
insaaN tera ae' khuda, ab khuda ho gaya...!

subhanallah........bahut umda
bahut bahut shukriya seep saheb.....


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sab kho, paya tha imaaN, wo bhi na raha,
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ye lines mujhe bahut hi pasand aai......... Dil Se Daad Hazir hai.............

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इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया


जाने जिस्म से कैसे, इसका दिल जुदा हो गया
इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया

सब खो पाया था ईमान, वो भी न रहा
बे-रोज़गार थे उसका भी सौदा हो गया

सच मान जिसने है जना, वो रखेगा तुझको
कल फेंका था जो बीज, आज पौधा हो गया

तूफानों में घिरी थी जब कश्ती ये मेरी
कहीं से आया तु, आके नाखुदा हो गया

था प्यार बेहिसाब, बस तकाजों ने मारा
इश्क न हुआ, तेरा ज़ुल्फ़-ए-खाम्शुदा हो गया

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इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया


जाने जिस्म से कैसे, इसका दिल जुदा हो गया
इन्सां तेरा ए ख़ुदा, अब ख़ुदा हो गया

सब खो पाया था ईमान, वो भी न रहा
बे-रोज़गार थे उसका भी सौदा हो गया

सच मान जिसने है जना, वो रखेगा तुझको
कल फेंका था जो बीज, आज पौधा हो गया

तूफानों में घिरी थी जब कश्ती ये मेरी
कहीं से आया तु, आके नाखुदा हो गया

था प्यार बेहिसाब, बस तकाजों ने मारा
इश्क न हुआ, तेरा ज़ुल्फ़-ए-खाम्शुदा हो गया

हैं ज़ोरों पे चर्चे, चेहरे हैरान हैं
'मस्त' ये कैसे मर्द-ए-बाखुदा हो गया

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namaskar,vikram bhai.kaise hai aap? aapkee ghazal bahut acchee lagi.matla to bahut hee khas lagaa. aapko is sundar peshkash per dili daad o mubaraqbad
bahut bahut shukriya janaab uffak saheb.....
aapki daad sar maathe....


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Vikram Ji......... Abhi Abhi Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Parha....... Boht Pasand Aaya..... Apnay Andar Is Dor-e-Zulmat Ki Sachayi Liye Huay Hai....... Khubsurat Khyal Pr Tah-e-Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai.......... Qabool Farmayen




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Vikram Ji......... Abhi Abhi Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Parha....... Boht Pasand Aaya..... Apnay Andar Is Dor-e-Zulmat Ki Sachayi Liye Huay Hai....... Khubsurat Khyal Pr Tah-e-Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai.......... Qabool Farmayen
janaab ahmad shakil saheb aadaab,

sab aapki muhabbat hai, daad dil se qubuul hai..
aapka bahut bahut shukriya...


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