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Aangan.. - 6th March 2016, 03:16 PM

Ek unwaan aangan use padhte hee na jane kuun us aangan ki yaad aa gayi jahaan maine chalna bolna seekha tha.....yun to bahut pahle uska sath chhoot gaya tha..par vo aangan aur vahaan beete pal kabhi bhoolte nhi..unhe shbdo me likh pana bahut mushkil gau..par kuch khayaal jo anayaas hee shabd ban gaye unhe aapke sath saanjha kiye bagair na rah saki...


Vahi hai..aangan aur aangan me paudh vahi tulsi ka hai..
Nahi hai badla ab bhi kuch vo gamla bhi mitti ka hai..

Subah savere aangan pe bhi dhoop vahiin se aati hai..
Shaam dhale fir dheere dheere andhiyara de jati hai..

vo hee taar purana jispe kapde sookha karte the..
Aur kabhi amma tote ka pinjra taanga karti thi..

Aangan ka kona kona to bilkul pahle jaisa hai..
na maloom pasra sannata isme jane kaisa hai..

Thand me jalti angeethi ki garmi isme rahi nahi
Garmi pe pankha jhalti maa ki choodi bhi ab baji nahi..

Aangan bula raha hai mujhko lauta do vo sare pal
Kilkari si goonj uthe bilkul vaisi jaisi thi kal.

Mana Shahar me jakar tumne har sukh sadhan paya hai..
Kya A.C ke kamro me purwa ka jhonka aaya hai?

Nahi agar to aao fir se kabhi kabhi kuch yaad karo..
Baith k chai piyo aangan me fir isko aabad karo..
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17th April 2016, 12:03 AM

Bohut hi achi lagi ye kavita...

Tum poochti ho ma ki jab main kavita likhti hu to kavita mein kyun nahi daalti?

Issiliye kyunki yahaan kisi ka dhyaan nahi jaata aur heere bhi untaraashe reh jaate hain..

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Vahi hai..aangan aur aangan me paudh vahi tulsi ka hai..
Nahi hai badla ab bhi kuch vo gamla bhi mitti ka hai..

Subah savere aangan pe bhi dhoop vahiin se aati hai..
Shaam dhale fir dheere dheere andhiyara de jati hai..

vo hee taar purana jispe kapde sookha karte the..
Aur kabhi amma tote ka pinjra taanga karti thi..
originally posted by Madhu

Aangan ka kona kona to bilkul pahle jaisa hai..
na maloom pasra sannata isme jane kaisa hai..

Thand me jalti angeethi ki garmi isme rahi nahi
Garmi pe pankha jhalti maa ki choodi bhi ab baji nahi..

Aangan bula raha hai mujhko lauta do vo sare pal
Kilkari si goonj uthe bilkul vaisi jaisi thi kal.

Mana Shahar me jakar tumne har sukh sadhan paya hai..
Kya A.C ke kamro me purwa ka jhonka aaya hai?

Nahi agar to aao fir se kabhi kabhi kuch yaad karo..
Baith k chai piyo aangan me fir isko aabad karo..


Madhu ji aapki yeh kavita man ko prerna dene wali hai......

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Bohut hi achi lagi ye kavita...

Tum poochti ho ma ki jab main kavita likhti hu to kavita mein kyun nahi daalti?

Issiliye kyunki yahaan kisi ka dhyaan nahi jaata aur heere bhi untaraashe reh jaate hain..

Bohut khubsoorat
To tumhari parkhi nazar me aa gayi meri kavita...
Sach me main soch rahi thi ki kisi ko achchi hee nahi lagi shayad par sahi kah rahi ho yahaan par sabki nazar nahi jati...

Bahut dhanywaad tumne padha aur pasand kiya...

Isliye to kahti hun...aati raha karo.aur kuch naya likha ho to post karna.....

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Vahi hai..aangan aur aangan me paudh vahi tulsi ka hai..
Nahi hai badla ab bhi kuch vo gamla bhi mitti ka hai..

Subah savere aangan pe bhi dhoop vahiin se aati hai..
Shaam dhale fir dheere dheere andhiyara de jati hai..

vo hee taar purana jispe kapde sookha karte the..
Aur kabhi amma tote ka pinjra taanga karti thi..
originally posted by Madhu

Aangan ka kona kona to bilkul pahle jaisa hai..
na maloom pasra sannata isme jane kaisa hai..

Thand me jalti angeethi ki garmi isme rahi nahi
Garmi pe pankha jhalti maa ki choodi bhi ab baji nahi..

Aangan bula raha hai mujhko lauta do vo sare pal
Kilkari si goonj uthe bilkul vaisi jaisi thi kal.

Mana Shahar me jakar tumne har sukh sadhan paya hai..
Kya A.C ke kamro me purwa ka jhonka aaya hai?

Nahi agar to aao fir se kabhi kabhi kuch yaad karo..
Baith k chai piyo aangan me fir isko aabad karo..


Madhu ji aapki yeh kavita man ko prerna dene wali hai......

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aapne ise padha bahut khushi ho rahi hai,.......bahut dhanywaad aapka..

sath dete rahiyega.....

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buhet achi kavita likhi hey aap ney madhu ji vaah

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Ek unwaan aangan use padhte hee na jane kuun us aangan ki yaad aa gayi jahaan maine chalna bolna seekha tha.....yun to bahut pahle uska sath chhoot gaya tha..par vo aangan aur vahaan beete pal kabhi bhoolte nhi..unhe shbdo me likh pana bahut mushkil gau..par kuch khayaal jo anayaas hee shabd ban gaye unhe aapke sath saanjha kiye bagair na rah saki...


Vahi hai..aangan aur aangan me paudh vahi tulsi ka hai..
Nahi hai badla ab bhi kuch vo gamla bhi mitti ka hai..

Subah savere aangan pe bhi dhoop vahiin se aati hai..
Shaam dhale fir dheere dheere andhiyara de jati hai..

vo hee taar purana jispe kapde sookha karte the..
Aur kabhi amma tote ka pinjra taanga karti thi..

Aangan ka kona kona to bilkul pahle jaisa hai..
na maloom pasra sannata isme jane kaisa hai..

Thand me jalti angeethi ki garmi isme rahi nahi
Garmi pe pankha jhalti maa ki choodi bhi ab baji nahi..

Aangan bula raha hai mujhko lauta do vo sare pal
Kilkari si goonj uthe bilkul vaisi jaisi thi kal.

Mana Shahar me jakar tumne har sukh sadhan paya hai..
Kya A.C ke kamro me purwa ka jhonka aaya hai?

Nahi agar to aao fir se kabhi kabhi kuch yaad karo..
Baith k chai piyo aangan me fir isko aabad karo..
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buhet achi kavita likhi hey aap ney madhu ji vaah
bahot shukriya sab...bahut achcha lag raha hai aapne ise padha....



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Ek unwaan aangan use padhte hee na jane kuun us aangan ki yaad aa gayi jahaan maine chalna bolna seekha tha.....yun to bahut pahle uska sath chhoot gaya tha..par vo aangan aur vahaan beete pal kabhi bhoolte nhi..unhe shbdo me likh pana bahut mushkil gau..par kuch khayaal jo anayaas hee shabd ban gaye unhe aapke sath saanjha kiye bagair na rah saki...


Vahi hai..aangan aur aangan me paudh vahi tulsi ka hai..
Nahi hai badla ab bhi kuch vo gamla bhi mitti ka hai..

Subah savere aangan pe bhi dhoop vahiin se aati hai..
Shaam dhale fir dheere dheere andhiyara de jati hai..

vo hee taar purana jispe kapde sookha karte the..
Aur kabhi amma tote ka pinjra taanga karti thi..

Aangan ka kona kona to bilkul pahle jaisa hai..
na maloom pasra sannata isme jane kaisa hai..

Thand me jalti angeethi ki garmi isme rahi nahi
Garmi pe pankha jhalti maa ki choodi bhi ab baji nahi..

Aangan bula raha hai mujhko lauta do vo sare pal
Kilkari si goonj uthe bilkul vaisi jaisi thi kal.

Mana Shahar me jakar tumne har sukh sadhan paya hai..
Kya A.C ke kamro me purwa ka jhonka aaya hai?

Nahi agar to aao fir se kabhi kabhi kuch yaad karo..
Baith k chai piyo aangan me fir isko aabad karo..
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Ohh my god

Itni achhi nazm pe nazar bohat der se pari
Kya nazm hai madhu ji

Ehsaas se labrez
Har sher mai kitni masoomiyat chupi hai

Ye nazm padh kar jee khush hogaya

Bohat bohat mubarak madhu ji iss umda nazm pe
   
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Ohh my god

Itni achhi nazm pe nazar bohat der se pari
Kya nazm hai madhu ji

Ehsaas se labrez
Har sher mai kitni masoomiyat chupi hai

Ye nazm padh kar jee khush hogaya

Bohat bohat mubarak madhu ji iss umda nazm pe
Abhari hun aapki..apne padha aur pasand kiya bahut khushi huyi........

Sath dete rahiyega ..



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