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soch - 10th September 2011, 06:05 AM

socha rhe gazal hum bhi banayenge
unki yaad se use nahlayenge


likhne ki bari aayi to dil samaj na paye
intezar ki dastaan to ab kya sunaye

pal pal badta pyaar ,badta hi jaye
ek ehsaas sukhd nikhar samne aaye

intezar me bhi pyaar samaye
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10th September 2011, 09:51 AM

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socha rhe gazal hum bhi banayenge
unki yaad se use nahlayenge


likhne ki bari aayi to dil samaj na paye
intezar ki dastaan to ab kya sunaye

pal pal badta pyaar ,badta hi jaye
ek ehsaas sukhd nikhar samne aaye

intezar me bhi pyaar samaye
pyaar hi pyaar ki baat man ko bhaye
Good One .... Veena Ji !

Nice Effort .......... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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10th September 2011, 12:43 PM

kuch koshise kuch tarife
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ala ala gazlo ke bitch
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11th September 2011, 10:30 AM

waah aapka andaaze reply bhi bbahot khoob hai veena jee... keep writing.. khush rahiye

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waah aapka andaaze reply bhi bbahot khoob hai veena jee... keep writing.. khush rahiye

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aap jaise aasman ko chute sitare
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Sukriya

aap jaise aasman ko chute sitare
hum bhi dharti ke prani pyare
sikh hi lete hai dekhkar in unchi hastiyo ko
jinse wo bekhabar aur hamare vare nyare

Veenaa jee maine sahi kahaa tha ke aapka reply karne ka andaaz bahot khoob hai.. har insaan me kuch na kuch khaas zaroor hotaa hai aur hame aapki yeh adaa bahot pasand aai.. Aap yaqeenan bahot khoob likhti hain, bas yuNhi likhti rahiye aur is kalaa ko aur bhi nikhaaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

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12th September 2011, 10:33 PM

accha likha hai aapne veena jiii...........................


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Veenaa jee maine sahi kahaa tha ke aapka reply karne ka andaaz bahot khoob hai.. har insaan me kuch na kuch khaas zaroor hotaa hai aur hame aapki yeh adaa bahot pasand aai.. Aap yaqeenan bahot khoob likhti hain, bas yuNhi likhti rahiye aur is kalaa ko aur bhi nikhaaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

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Ab itne bade logon ke reply main kya reply du..mujhe to is tarah mehsus ho raha hai ki-
Teri mehfil me aarzoo meri,is tarah dilme simti jati hai..
Jaise dehaat ki koi ladki sahar me pehli baar aati hai..


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Ab itne bade logon ke reply main kya reply du..mujhe to is tarah mehsus ho raha hai ki-
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Jaise dehaat ki koi ladki sahar me pehli baar aati hai..
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