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Love mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu....... - 5th March 2011, 02:15 PM
din raat tujhko sochun
har pal me tujhko chahun
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....1

na hosh hume hai apni
na phikr hai kisi ki
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....2

raaton ko jagta hoon
taaron se baatein karu
jab saamne tu na aaye
har pal main tadpa karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....3

baahon me bhar ke tujhe
main pyar itna karu
bhul jao tum ye duniya
mere baahon me khoyi raho
milte rahe yun hi hum janmo janm
dua me rab se yahi manga karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....4
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5th March 2011, 02:36 PM
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din raat tujhko sochun
har pal me tujhko chahun
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....1

na hosh hume hai apni
na phikr hai kisi ki
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....2

raaton ko jagta hoon
taaron se baatein karu
jab saamne tu na aaye
har pal main tadpa karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....3

baahon me bhar ke tujhe
main pyar itna karu
bhul jao tum ye duniya
mere baahon me khoyi raho
milte rahe yun hi hum janmo janm
dua me rab se yahi manga karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....4
Hi friends ,,,its so beautiful feeling,,,,I like that,,,,,Thanks lot for share with us,,,,,I think ki aapki poem me bhi he jaadu!!!!!!!!
aapki soch me bhi he jaadu!!!!!!!!!
   
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shukriya.........kajal ji.........
It's just my feeling...........
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bahot khoob likha hai aapne..... keep writing

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feelings full of loveeeee......... keep writing... enjoyed reading... mishka
   
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7th March 2011, 05:58 PM
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din raat tujhko sochun
har pal me tujhko chahun
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....1

na hosh hume hai apni
na phikr hai kisi ki
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....2

raaton ko jagta hoon
taaron se baatein karu
jab saamne tu na aaye
har pal main tadpa karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....3

baahon me bhar ke tujhe
main pyar itna karu
bhul jao tum ye duniya
mere baahon me khoyi raho
milte rahe yun hi hum janmo janm
dua me rab se yahi manga karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....4
Very Nice Poetry ......... Nice Feeling ..... dil se daad ........

Aur behtar koshish ke saath likhte rahen aur aate rahen ... aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

---Naresh Mehra----
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din raat tujhko sochun
har pal me tujhko chahun
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....1

na hosh hume hai apni
na phikr hai kisi ki
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....2

raaton ko jagta hoon
taaron se baatein karu
jab saamne tu na aaye
har pal main tadpa karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....3

baahon me bhar ke tujhe
main pyar itna karu
bhul jao tum ye duniya
mere baahon me khoyi raho
milte rahe yun hi hum janmo janm
dua me rab se yahi manga karu
kya kar diya hai tumne
mujhpe ye kaisa jaadu.....4
Great poem!!!!!!!!!! its so really nice feeling ....thanks a lot for sharing that....well done puregold ji...aage bhi u hi apni feelings ko hamare sath bikherte rahiye..........keep it up,,,,
   
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8th March 2011, 06:07 PM
@naresh mehta..........sukriya Nresh ji..............aapki sujhav k liye............
aasha hai aagey bhi hum likhte rahe.........aapko pasand aaye...........
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@Sneha.............thanks Sneha ji.............

Is hosla afjaai k liye..........aasha hai hum yun hi apne dil ka haal.......aap sab k saath share karte rahe...............aur aapko wo pasand aaye.........
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