Mafia kid- south asian gang voilence poem (hinustani/english)

[Hardev Ashk]

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South Aisan Gang activity is a serious problem in our Vancouver lower mainland and I wrote Hindi and English versions of my poem MAFIA KID that I am posting here. Though I am putting both versions here for the sake of relevance. I believe it is the right place and forum.

I wrotein Hindi 15 years and (English version a few years later)ago when Gang activity was taking hold of our South Asian youth in Vancouver. The poem narrates the rise, fall and untimely demise of the misguided youth by the hail of bullets. Unfortunately looks, although history is repeating itself now, yet the lesson has not been learnt. I hope my composition will discourage the young people from the lure of easy money and fast life that traps them in gang activities which later on they cannot quit even if they want to.

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MAFIA KID (Hindi)

samjhaaya tha, maaN ne bahut
beTaa in raahoN, pe na jaa
tilakti hui, galiyaaN haiN ye
nahiN vaapisi,ka koi raasta

khoon thaa, uska garm
jwaani se, madhosh thaa
suraj chaaNd,,muthiyoN meiN
pakaRne, ka josh thaa

toRni chaahta, thaa vo
garibee ki, beRiyaaN
sar nahiN, jhukegaa ab
naa vo, ragRegaa aRiyaaN

dushmanoN, ko roNdhta
niDar vo ,ho gayaa i
itna chaRhaa,ki
gang ka,leader vo ho gayaa

log boss se, Darte ab
uskaa hi, bolbaala thaa
door tak chaaya tha bhaiy
na koi kahne waala thaa

DolloroN ke notoN ko
ginta thak gayaa
ayaashiyoN, ka khoon
har rag meiN, bas gayaa

chaahta thaa jab kabhi
sab ChoRkar bhaagna
magar namumkin thaa
ab police rkeeboN se bhagnaa

fir aayee, eik din
dushmanoN ki, car dauRti
chali gayi, goliyoN ki
vo bauchaaR, choRti

aaj shikaar, ki tarhaa
shikaari ke, tukRe ho gaye
noToN aur, kokeen ke baNdal,
havaa meiN kho gaye

faTi aaNkheiN, boltiN thiN
chehre pe, thi kazaa
maaN tu, THeek kahti Thi
beTaa, in raahoN pe na jaa

rakeeb-enemy bhaiy-fear,kazaa-death


MAFIA KID (English)

Mother said my son
do’nt walk the slippery track
This is one way street
there is no turning back

But he was young
and he was bold
Whole world in his hands
he wanted to hold

Shackles of poverty
he was determined to break
A No from any one
he would not take

He turned into merciless
a ruthless killer
Rose so fast
became the gang leader

People were scared
as he was the boss
Far and wide
no body dared to cross

Counting dollar bills
he was tired
With the easy money
his blood was on fire

Some times now he wanted
to breakaway and run
But was not possible
to escape police and rival’s gun

Then one day enemy
car came running
Showered him with bullet
gunning more gunning

Today the hunter
became the hunt
Dollar bills, cocaine packets
were littered, in his front

Death looked into his face
his eyes wide open stared back
Mother you were right when you said
do’nt walk the slippery track.

COPY RIGHT HARDEV ASHK

[Hardev Ashk]

Dosto

MAFIA KID (minor revision)
samjhaaya tha, maaN ne bahut
"beTaa! in raahoN, pe na jaa
tilakti hui, galiyaaN haiN ye
nahiN vaapisi,ka koi raasta"

khoon thaa, uska garm
jwaani se, madhosh thaa
suraj chaaNd,,muthiyoN meiN
pakaRne, ka josh thaa

toRni chaahta, thaa vo
garibee ki, beRiyaaN
sar nahiN, jhukegaa ab
naa vo, ragRegaa aRiyaaN

dushmanoN, ko roNdhta
niDar vo ,ho gayaa i
itna chaRhaa,ki
gang ka,leader vo ho gayaa

log boss se, Darte ab
uskaa hi, bolbaala thaa
door tak chaaya tha bhaiy
na koi kahne waala thaa

DolloroN ke notoN ko
ginta thak gayaa
ayaashiyoN, ka khoon
har rag meiN, bas gayaa

chahta thaa kabhi sab choR
nayi ziNdgi guzaarna copuplet revised 5172012
sab ChoRkar bhaagna
magar namumkin thaa dur
police rkeeboN se bhaagnaa

fir aayee, eik din
dushmanoN ki, car dauRti
chali gayi, goliyoN ki
vo bauchaaR, choRti

aaj shikaar, ki tarhaa
shikaari ke, tukRe ho gaye
noToN aur, kokeen ke baNdal,
havaa meiN kho gaye

faTi aaNkheiN, boltiN thiN
chehre pe, thi kazaa
"maaN ! tu, THeek kahti Thi
beTaa, in raahoN pe na jaa"

rakeeb-enemy bhaiy-fear,kazaa-death

[Abid_Majaaz]

U r right thanks 4 such a nice feelings

[Hardev Ashk]

Originally Posted by Abid_Majaaz

U r right thanks 4 such a nice feelings

Abid Ji

Adaab

Hamaare Vancouver mein ye bahut hi serious problem hai. Kitne ni naujawaan is gang war mein jaane gua chuke hain. Meri rab se parwardigaar se yehi arz hai, ki innko sbuddhi de. aapko kalaam achha lagga. tahedilse shukriya

Hardev Ashk