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jab main tumhe dekha karta tha..... -
2nd July 2005, 10:34 PM
kaise bhulu wo din...wo bachkaani harkate...
jab teri ek jhalak paa lene ke liye main ghanto baitha rahta tha... teri ek muskaan par mit jaane ko dil karta tha....kaise bhulu we din......... yaad hai mujhe jab pahali baar dekha tha tujhe.... ek ajab si tarap uthi thi is mann main paa lene ko tujhe... paagalo sa fira karta tha main..har kone main intejaar karta tha main....kab gujregi tu meri gali se...yehi socha karta tha main..... dil main armaan tha..bhola sa aetbaar tha.... tu meri hogi..iska mujhe gumaar tha.... sajti thi sej suhaani yaado main...bajti thi sahnaiya mere kaano main.... kabhi to milenge hum bhawisya ki parchahiyo main.....jab prem paripakt hoga dil ki gahraiyo main..... TUT gae sapne saare ki dol gaya main.... band hui sahnaiyaa bajni tab jaag gaya main.... bhola tha...maasum tha...chala tha chaand ko churane..... thokar khaake jo gira..tut gae swapn saare..... Ab teri yaad me kavitae likhta hu main..... dil me jo armaan tha...use apni pahchaan banataa hu main........ |
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5th July 2005, 04:21 PM
Musafir Ji,
Firstly, Welcome to Shayri parivaar. Secondly, aapki kavita ke pehle half part ne meri kuch anmol yadein taaza kar di.. achha likha hai.. hamesha likhte rehna Best Wishes, Niral |
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5th July 2005, 11:29 PM
TUT gae sapne saare ki dol gaya main....
band hui sahnaiyaa bajni tab jaag gaya main.... --------------------------------------------------------- well said, like your creation, and welcome to this site, keep writing and take care! |
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18th July 2005, 01:32 AM
sacchh bahut sari yadon ko taaza kar diya aapne
likhte rahiye -- maddi madhu [maddi] |
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hi -
20th July 2005, 04:27 PM
bahut badhiya....
yaado ke jherokho shabdo mein dhalana shabdo se upaji manjil ko shishe mein tarashana.. ek sapane ko hakikat ka roop dena... bahut achchha laga.. likahte arhiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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