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9th May 2002, 03:21 AM
Jo ik baar dil peh chot khaee hai
ub yeh dil kisi pur kaisay eitbaar karey Wafa nibhanay ki to saza payee hai Najaanay nigaahein kyoun uska intezaar karein |
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10th May 2002, 08:15 PM
Jo ik baar - Waah
Kya Baath Hai Maryam Ji, really nice I like your this poem very much. I am a new shayer but so far I loved your poem. My Fav line is the finish, Kya Khoob Lika Hai tum Nai kai : - "Najaanay nigaahein kyoun uska intezaar karein" Just great. Carry on with the good work Faisla |
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