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aisa ik jaam -
3rd November 2009, 06:21 AM
ik ajab si dastaan sunaane laga hoon
main aaj phir se maikhaane main jane laga hoon bahut dinon se gham ko bhool baitha tha main bewafaa ajj us bewafa ki yaad aayi, to gham ko phir se gale se lagaane laga hoon zyada ho jaaye to sambhaal lena mere dosto main aaj apne aap ko azmaane laga hoon botal mein unka chehra dekhne ka bahan lekar main botal ko apne zakhm dikhaane laga hoon main "zakhmee ashiq", koi maana hua sharaabi to nahin par phir bhi nashe mein doob jaaye meri qaayenaat jise pee kar, aisa aaj ik jaam banaane laga hoon |
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22nd November 2009, 02:36 PM
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Wah Kya baat hai, bahut achhi Ghazal likhi hai aapne. Achha laga padh ke... Aise hi likhte rahiye...... Dil se daad haazir hai.. Kabuul kijiye... Aapka dost Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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25th November 2009, 11:53 AM
aapki daad bilkul kabool hai ji. thanks a lot for appreciation and the encouragement. koshish rahe gi aage se behtar likkhoon
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