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Post Sastey Aasoon - 31st January 2003, 07:54 PM
Woh din kya aayenge
jab hum mil paayenge,
Shayad nahin!
nahin kabhi nahin.

Itna bhi nahin hai kuch
ki koi itihaas bane,
Bas patthar hai yahan
beech deewar bane.

Tere duppatte ki parchayee
mere aagan mein pade,
Uski parchayee mein chupe
dukh registaan se hain bade.

Koi jab aayega sajkar
tujhe lejane ko,
Duppatta woh chod dena
karna hai saaf aasuvon ko.

Tu sada khush rahe
tu hee aabaad rahe.
Sasta hoon insaan main
sastey mein aasoon bik rahe.

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Thumbs up wah - 31st January 2003, 11:37 PM
wah vipin shahab! bahut khoob..aapke khyaal bare pasand aaye hame........touched my heart shayd vo din aayainge..shayad nahi!! nice lines

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1st February 2003, 04:08 AM
"Tu sada khush rahe
tu hee aabaad rahe.
Sasta hoon insaan main
sastey mein aasoon bik rahe."

is sher ka matlab baDi gehraaii meiN hai Vipin saahab, aur hamesha ki taraH -- yeh kavita bhi pasand aayi!
maaf ki jiye gar thoDa late reply kiya to..

Likhte rahiye,
Aman


"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"

kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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1st February 2003, 04:12 AM
Tu sada khush rahe
tu hee aabaad rahe.
Sasta hoon insaan main
sastey mein aasoon bik rahe.

Wah Vipin Ji ,
Bahut khoob kahaan hai aapne, Age kuch kahneki lafz nahin hamare pass, tho fir ek baar yehi kahthe hai ..waah.


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1st February 2003, 11:49 AM
Koi jab aayega sajkar
tujhe lejane ko,
Duppatta woh chod dena
karna hai saaf aasuvon ko.

Wah Vipin ji..aapki ye Kavita bhi lajawaab thi aur iska shirshak 'Sastey Aansoon' bahut hi badia laga..

Aapki agli rachna ka intezar rahega.
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hi - 1st February 2003, 08:28 PM
hw r u

after a long time tum se kuch paden to mila magar bhut hi acha laga kiya khoob likha hain

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Post 2nd February 2003, 07:18 PM
LuvPriya ji, Aman ji, Bijli ji, Varinder ji aur Neha ji,

Mujhe bahut juada khusi hui ki aap sab doston ko iss Shoonya ki Kavita pasand aayee. Varna Shoonya tow Shoonya hee rehta hai, ...jo kuch kar nahin sakta. Ussi tarah iss shoonya ke aasun bhi sastey hain.

Ek baar phir aap sabka Dhanyavaad

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3rd February 2003, 12:00 AM
Wah Vipin, kya baat kahi apne. bohat waqt ke baad ayi aur apki shayri padi to acha laga.

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Vipin saab

Kya aap muje batange ki aap ke pas kon sa Pen hai? Sach me behut ascha liktey hai aap.

apki dost

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hi vipin - 3rd February 2003, 01:16 PM
Bahoot khoob hai dost....tumhare dil main kabhi zhankanaa padega.

paplu khush hua.
   
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Post 3rd February 2003, 09:13 PM
Shaheen ji aur Geetanjali ji,
Aapka dhanyavaad jo aapne mera likha pada.

AUR

Paplu sahab
Mere dil ke andar koi khaas baat nahin hai. Main ek maamooli sa insaan hoon aur mera dil ek khuli kitaab hai. Agar kuch aur jaan-na chahen tow jaroor batana.

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hi - 24th August 2005, 06:36 PM
Vipin ji
u r too gr8
gr8 shayri
I think u hurt by sum 1
well take care
bye

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wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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Post 25th August 2005, 03:46 PM
Kuhulika Ji,
Namaskaar,
Aapka message parha, accha laga kisi ne iss dhundli si rachna ko aaj parha hai.........varna yeh tow shoonya ho chuki hai......
Aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad

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no words to appreciate this... bahut hi umda rachna... Likhte rahiye bhai..!

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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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