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Akhbaar - 20th August 2009, 12:04 PM

Ek khabar aayi hai k mai khabar ban gya hun,
ab ye sawaal hai ke kya mai jee rha hun?

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Aaj kal man bada bimaar sa rehta hai,
najane kyu umeedon ko bhukhar sa rehta hai

Kuch kehne k liye zubaan nahi khulti
chup rehne ka ajeeb khumar sa rehta hai

Ese hue hain gum is shehar k logo mai,
k pyar apno par aksar udhaar sa rehta hai

Wqt khud hi likh de mere naam koi gazal,
esi koshish mai shayar berozgaar sa rheta hai

Purane naam kayi yaad aakar phir bhul jate hain,
roz koi naya chehra milne ko taiyar sa rehta hai

wqt k sath dhalne wala, Logo se hans k milne wala,
Har shaqs mai koi adakaar sa rehhta hai..

BaatoN ne badhna chho.d diya, logoN ne ladna chho.d diya
ye acha hai, insaan ab akhbaar sa rehta hai

Aaj kal man bda bimaar sa rehta hai!
Najane kyun umeedon ko bhukhar sa rehta hai!

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- Komal


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20th August 2009, 12:41 PM

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Originally Posted by komal5 View Post
Ek khabar aayi hai k mai khabar ban gya hun,
ab ye sawaal hai ke kya mai jee rha hun?

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Aaj kal man bada bimaar sa rehta hai,
najane kyu umeedon ko bhukhar sa rehta hai

Kuch kehne k liye zubaan nahi khulti
chup rehne ka ajeeb khumar sa rehta hai

Ese hue hain gum is shehar k logo mai,
k pyar apno par aksar udhaar sa rehta hai


Wqt khud hi likh de mere naam koi gazal,
esi koshish mai shayar berozgaar sa rheta hai

Purane naam kayi yaad aakar phir bhul jate hain,
roz koi naya chehra milne ko taiyar sa rehta hai

wqt k sath dhalne wala, Logo se hans k milne wala,
Har shaqs mai koi adakaar sa rehhta hai..


BaatoN ne badhna chho.d diya, logoN ne ladna chho.d diya
ye acha hai, insaan ab akhbaar sa rehta hai

Aaj kal man bda bimaar sa rehta hai!
Najane kyun umeedon ko bhukhar sa rehta hai!

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- Komal

Komal Ji,

Aadab. Bahut khuubsurati se pesh kiyaa hai aapne apne ehsasaat ko. Bahut achhi lagi aap ki koshish. Highlighted sheroN se kaafi mutassir hua. Daad qabuul kareN aur yuuN hi likhte rahiye.

Apna Khayal rakhiye aur khush rahiye,
Shyam


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