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"aaj pankh laga ud jaana chahti hoo" -
6th April 2005, 06:24 PM
Dosto,
waise to har din suhaane safar ka saath laata hai lekin aaj kucch uhi achanak bahoot achha ho gaya, kuchh jo socha tha aur jo nahi socha tha saare sapne uhi saakar dikhate gaye to khayaalo ko sabdo me baandhane ki prakirya bhi aap se aap aa gaye. technically to mai sahi likhati nahi lekin apne feelings ko hi sabake saath share kar rahi hoo . Big B ke anusaar ye baatane se doguni hoti hai to socha mai bhi dekh loo waise meri khushi chouguni hogi kyunki mere Big B ne ye baat boli hai. aaj pankh laga ud jaana chahti hoo aasmaan ko chhu lena chahati hoo aankho me basa ke mai wo sapna haqiqat me didar karna chahti hoo manjil door hai aur hai kathin raasta sabhi par ek saath chalana chahti hoo ummed ki kiran, ki hai faili chhata ise uhi barkraar rakhana chahti hoo aaj ki na puchho meri hai kya dasha doori gamo se taiy karna chahti hoo aaj gaa rahi hoo khood se to taraana ye taraana har baar gaana chahti hoo jindagi ke daud me nahi jhookana khud ki ‘garima’ko paana chahti hoo Garima |
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6th April 2005, 06:28 PM
Hi Garima,
Tumne bahut acha likha hai... Aur Tumhare vicharon ko shabdon mein dhalne ke prayas mein tum roz nayi uchai chu rahi ho... Mein To bahut khush hoon tumhari is rachna se... jindagi ke daud me nahi jhookana khud ki ‘garima’ko paana chahti hoo Ant to kiya tumne iska ... woh bhi itna khoobsurat ki ...iska kabhi ant nahi hoga... Bahut ache soch hai sister yunhi likhte rehna Thanks Rohin |
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6th April 2005, 06:53 PM
Big B,
uchaayi kitna chhu rahi hoo ye to nahi bata sakati hoo.. haa aap khush ho to fir aur kisi baat ki chinta hi nahi rah gayi na. ur's loving sis |
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Re: "aaj pankh laga ud jaana chahti hoo" -
6th April 2005, 07:07 PM
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keeeeeeeep writing really daaad kabul karo aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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Re: Re: "aaj pankh laga ud jaana chahti hoo" -
6th April 2005, 07:16 PM
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6th April 2005, 11:54 PM
garimaji
bahut khoob humari daad kubul kijiye sonal |
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7th April 2005, 01:43 AM
Wah Garima ji, Wah... aap ne bahut hi accha likha hai....
aaj gaa rahi hoo khood se to taraana ye taraana har baar gaana chahti hoo jindagi ke daud me nahi jhookana khud ki ‘garima’ko paana chahti hoo |
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7th April 2005, 01:23 PM
aaj pankh laga ud jaana chahti hoo
aasmaan ko chhu lena chahati hoo aankho me basa ke mai wo sapna haqiqat me didar karna chahti hoo Kyaa baat haiii! manjil door hai aur hai kathin raasta sabhi par ek saath chalana chahti hoo ummed ki kiran, ki hai faili chhata ise uhi barkraar rakhana chahti hoo Bautifull Thought!! aaj ki na puchho meri hai kya dasha doori gamo se taiy karna chahti hoo aaj gaa rahi hoo khood se to taraana ye taraana har baar gaana chahti hoo jindagi ke daud me nahi jhookana khud ki ‘garima’ko paana chahti hoo Hmmmmmm.... aisa hi likhti rahogi.. to jald hi paaogi!! Garima! Main kaya jee.. tusi to chhaaa gaye ho... Ishq di mehfil bhi sajaa di aapne.. Chalo doston ki baat ka maan to rakhti ho  Bhai.. mujhe to bahut bahut pasand ayaa... Meri to dher saari daad le lo.. aur yun hi kucch halka halka sa likhti raho Ek post aur bhi to hai.. owh main kar doon kya? tumhare naam se ?  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th April 2005, 02:00 PM
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7th April 2005, 02:01 PM
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Thanks Parul jee housala dene ke liye shukriya. Garima |
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7th April 2005, 02:14 PM
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Pulkit, dosto ki baat nahi maanenge to kya dushmano ki baat maanenge.. dost hote hi hai saath dene ke liye.. uhi saath dete rahana to achha sa likhati hi rahoongee.. tumhe pasand aaya mujhe achha laga thanks.. us post ko to bhool hi jaao faaltoo sa to hai wo jisaka na aadi pata chalta hai na ant. Garima |
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