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20th August 2004, 01:02 PM
kahu ek baat tumase yaa ki tum samajh logi meri ankho mein dekho shayd meri need pakad logi khat jo maine dil mein likhe per bheje nahi tujhako bin dekhe...... kya tum use padh logi tadapa hoon tumhari yaad mein ab-talak bahut meri rooh dekh ke meri dhadakan samajh logi muhabbat ke mandir ki tumhe devi banaya hoon aake mere paas... apani aarti ker logi khud se jyada jise poojata hoon main mere chehre mein apani hi chhavi pakad logi... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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20th August 2004, 01:27 PM
Akant ji,
muhabbat ke mandir ki tumhe devi banaya hoon aake mere paas... apani aarti ker logi kya kahu shabd nahi milate hain... etana masoom aapne likha hai.. ki ab dil hi bahar aa gaya...ati sundar.. Shivangi |
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20th August 2004, 05:01 PM
Shivangi ji,
jee shukriyah... apko achchhi lagi...to.. phir achchhi hi hogi rachana.. likhati raha kijiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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20th August 2004, 05:14 PM
kahu ek baat tumase yaa ki tum samajh logi
meri ankho mein dekho shayd meri need pakad logi khat jo maine dil mein likhe per bheje nahi tujhako bin dekhe...... kya tum use padh logi tadapa hoon tumhari yaad mein ab-talak bahut meri rooh dekh ke meri dhadakan samajh logi Akant bhai, Bahut hi sundar rachna ek baar phir se.... Very beautiful words indeed..... Bas isi tarah likhte rahien... Plz do Take Care  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Khub...par ek tadap kyun hain? -
20th August 2004, 07:37 PM
Dear Akant, liya nahin hain keya? Well, I must say your writings are getting better & better.
Honi bhi chahiye, jab Pyaar paas ho tou kyun nahin. Dilse nikli houi Daad aur shukriya dono kubool karlon. Younhi likhte rehna. Khush rahon ye Duwaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th August 2004, 07:47 PM
Dear Akant,
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21st August 2004, 11:10 AM
kahu ek baat tumase yaa ki tum samajh logi
meri ankho mein dekho shayd meri need pakad logi khat jo maine dil mein likhe per bheje nahi tujhako bin dekhe...... kya tum use padh logi Akant ji... Yun to aapki puuri rachna bohat pyaari hai.. magar ye ashaar khaaskar pasand aaye! inme shaamil khayaal.. inka bayaan.. lajawaab raha.. Sach, aksar dil me ek chaah si hoti hai.. ki jo baat hum laboN se na keh sakein.. wo koi aankhon me hi paR liya kare.. Aur jo ehsaas palkein tak chhupa leti hain, unhe koi dil me utar kar dekhe.. bina zaahir kiye, inhe samjhhe.. aksar ye dil ye chaahta hai.. Bohat khoob likha hai aapne! |
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21st August 2004, 01:51 PM
Bahut achchhe akant ji.....waakai...bahut khoob likha hai aapne......aapke sawaalaat waajib hi haiN.....aaj ke is daur hai thoda mushkil lagne laga hai ye sab....
YooNhi likhte rahiyega... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st August 2004, 02:16 PM
akant,
bahut khub....... kaash sab is tarah pyaar ki bhasha padh lete.... meena |
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23rd August 2004, 12:33 PM
Pulkit ji,
bahut bahut dhanyvaad aapko... aapko pasand aayi sun ke achchha laga... aate rahiyega. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 12:40 PM
Shimul ji,
aapka behad shukriyah... haa shayd liya hai maine... thanks once again ki aapko laga meri lekhani mein sudhar ho raha hai.. sach kaha hai aapne ki pyar jab pass hota hai to improvment to honi hi hai.. lagta hai ki meri lekhani mein bhi kuchh improvemnet ho rahi hai..lol.. well aap khush rahiye aur apana kheyaal rakhiyega... shubhkamna sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 12:42 PM
Pappu ji,
bahut bahut dhanyvaad... esi tarah hausla badhate rahenge aage bhi aisi ummid kerta hoon aapse... khush rahiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 12:50 PM
Afshan ji,
behad shukriyah aapko..yah rachana bas baat hi baat mein maine likh diya tha.. jab wife kitchen mein khana bana rahi thi to main baitha tha kitchen mein kuchh padh raha tha.. bas shayri ki baat uth gayi to maine kaha lo abhi shayri likhata hoon.. jab likh raha tha to beech mein chhed rahi thi usi dauran yah shayri ban gayi.. use bhi bahut pasand aayi aur ofcourse mujhe bhi.. aapne sach kaha ki agar hamari baat ko bina kahe agar samane vala samjh jaay bina bataye jaan jaaye to phir kya baat hogi.. really yah ashaar mujhe bahut pasand aaye.. bada achchha laga aapka reply padhana.. well esi tarah aati rahiye.. with best wishes Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 01:42 PM
chaand ji,
Shukriyah... sawal jo hain vah bhi ek khas image rakhate hain.. vaise aapne sach kaha hai ki aaj ke es daur mein mushkil lagane lage hain.. per namumkin to nahi . abhi bhi bahut hain jo in ankho ki bhasha ko padh lete hain... shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 05:39 PM
Meena ji,
hmm... sach kaha hai aapne ki kaash sab es tarah pyar ki bhasha padh lete to phir duniya mein aman chain ka dusera hi sundar sa roop dekhene ko milata. per abhi bahut se shaksh hain jo es bhasha ko padh lete hain... aap apani sehat ka apani kheyaal rakhiyega.. shubhkamanao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd August 2004, 06:05 PM
khud se jyada jise poojata hoon main
mere chehre mein apani hi chhavi pakad logi... wah Akant ji....bahut hi pyari rachna hai ye..padh kar dil mein pyar ki lehrein uthne lagi hai...sach aapki rachnayein alag hi hoti hai bas isi ehsaas ko kaayam rakhiyega.. take care, pari.... |
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24th August 2004, 01:25 PM
Pari ji
haa yah dil ki baat hai tabhi dil mein aapke lahare uthane lagi.. jab cheej dil se hoker gujeregi to nischit apana sathan bana ke chhod jayegi. bahut achchha laga aapka yaha aana aur mere hausale ko badhana.. khush rahiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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24th August 2004, 09:11 PM
hi
akant how r u? aapki yeh kavita sach mein bohot hi achhhiii hai tareef k liye alfaaz nahin hai reallly good one take care smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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26th August 2004, 01:34 PM
Khushii ji,
reply kerne aur ese pasand kerne ke liye aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad... main achchha hoon aur ummid kerta hoon ki aap bhi achchhi hi hongi. khush rahiye... aur.. likhate raha kijiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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27th August 2004, 01:46 PM
Akant ji,
puri rachana bahut hi sundar hai... her sher ke apane hi dum hai.. bahut achchha laga yah sher... muhabbat ke mandir ki tumhe devi banaya hoon aake mere paas apani hi aarati ker logi.. ANKIT That tale of sadest thought.... |
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7th September 2004, 10:54 AM
Thanks Ankit ji
aapko meri rachana pasand aayi.. bahut bahut dhanyvaad... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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8th July 2005, 05:20 PM
Thanks to everyone.....
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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20th September 2006, 05:01 PM
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unbelievable, simply so great you have written... A human... To understand me... its better to understand yourself... |
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27th September 2006, 07:28 PM
Thank you chem ji,
its my pleasure... Akant... Quote:
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12th June 2013, 04:30 PM
Aaj bahut dino baad ese padhna bahut achha laga...
Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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14th June 2013, 03:19 PM
khat jo maine dil mein likhe per bheje nahi tujhako
bin dekhe...... kya tum use padh logi waaahhhhhh behad khoobsurat ehsaas o jazbaat hain aapke akant jii..... bahot ummdah... likhte raheN.... hamaare saath jazbaat baanTte raheN.... Shaad.... |
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kya baat hai akant jee....bahut sundar racna pe aapko dhero daad....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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Dear dhaval,
main achchha hoon.. pahale jaisa hi busy rahata hoon.. esliye site pe ana kam ho pata hai.. aapko shabdo ke rup ki sadgi achhhi lagi.. aur usme base khayalat pasand aaye to samjheN ki hume hausla mil gaya.. thanks Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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bahut bahut dhanyvaad jo aapne ese parkha.. well yah to unhe samjh jyada aati hain jinhone ese apane aap mein ru-b-ru kiya ho.. dil se nikali har baat dil tak hi pahunchati hai... shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Hausala afzaai ke liye aapka behad shukriya ada kerta hoon. samay saath deta rahega to aage bhi rachana likhane ki koshis kerta rahunga... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Aap bhi bahut badhiya likhate hain... yah to maine bahut pahale likha tha.. aur pako pasand aayi .. so behad shukrgujar hoon.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd April 2014, 04:29 PM
bin dekhe kya tum ese padh logi...? yaad aa gayi..
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Bin dekhe kya tum ..ese padh logi
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