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Mausmon Ke Aane Mein ........ -
23rd August 2003, 04:43 AM
Mausmon Ke Aane Mein Mausmon Ke Jaane Mein,
Aur Jaam Tooteinge Iss Sharaabkhaane Mein. Har Dhadakte Patthar Ko Log Dil Samajhte Hain, Umr Beet Jaati Hai Dil Ko Dil Banaane Mein. Koi Jaanejaana Bhi Begaraz Nahin Milta, Dosti Nahin Hoti Aaj Ke Zamaane Mein. Faakhta Ki Majboori Ye Bhi Keh Nahin Sakti, Kaun Saanp Rakhta Hai Us Ke Aashiaane Mein. Doosri Koi Ladki Zindagi Mein Aayegi, Kitni Der Lagti Hai Us Ko Bhool Jaane Mein. Log Toot Jaate Hain Ek Ghar Banaane Mein, Tum Taras Nahin Khaate Bastiyan Jalaane Mein. pari  |
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23rd August 2003, 09:16 PM
wwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..............!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!1
kya baat hai. bahut hi khoobsoorat. "Mausmon Ke Aane Mein Mausmon Ke Jaane Mein, Aur Jaam Tooteinge Iss Sharaabkhaane Mein. Har Dhadakte Patthar Ko Log Dil Samajhte Hain, Umr Beet Jaati Hai Dil Ko Dil Banaane Mein. " bahut hi umda. aise hi likhti rahiyega. ========================== aviral |
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24th August 2003, 01:39 PM
Pariji,
"Har Dhadakte Patthar Ko Log Dil Samajhte Hain, Umr Beet Jaati Hai Dil Ko Dil Banaane Mein. " yeh Sher dil ko choolenewala hai. bohot hi khoooob. likhte rahiyega. Hafeez Paradise is always where love dwells |
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hi -
24th August 2003, 06:22 PM
hello aviral ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya....meri is rachna ko apna samay dene ka aur use sarahne kaa........aise hi likhte rahiye.. Pari |
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hi -
24th August 2003, 06:24 PM
Hello hafeez ji,..
aapse pehli baar hi mukhateef hui hoon.....kaise hai aap....welcome to shayri.com.....and thanx for aapreciating my shayris.... aise hi likhte rahiye.. take care.. aapki dost pari |
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25th August 2003, 03:43 PM
Har Dhadakte Patthar Ko Log Dil Samajhte Hain,
Umr Beet Jaati Hai Dil Ko Dil Banaane Mein. waah ji waah waah ji waah waah ji waah waah waah waaaaahhhh bohat achhi ghajal likhi hai zindgi mein pehle baar aapne koi dhang ka kaam thread post kiya hai... aise threads post kiya karo na jinhe padhne ko mann bhi kare.... achha bye and take care of yourself  |
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25th August 2003, 05:24 PM
pari ji,
wah kya baate likhi hain aapne. har sher aapka apane aap mein ek kahani liye hue hai. kis ksi sher ki tareef keru. sabhi sher mujhe pasand hain, bahut khub. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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hi -
26th August 2003, 04:46 AM
hello mohit ji,
Kaise hai aap??Aapko meri likhi ye gazal pasand aayi iske liye bahut bahut shukriya........mein aapka ye ehsaan kaise chukaungi?? Oye Mr. majnoo to aapke hisaab se maine aaj pehli baar hi koi dhang ki gazal likhi hai..........to tum kaunse teer marte ho shayri mein........tumse to bahut behter likhti hoon...aur jab tumhe pata hai ki mein achha nahi likhti to tum padhte hi kyu ho?? Pari |
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26th August 2003, 04:47 AM
Hello akant ji,
Aapki shubhkamnao ke bina to mujhe meri shayri hamesha adhoori lagti hai..isliye ise poora karne ke liye aapka shukriya.. aise hi likhte rahiyega.. Pari |
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26th August 2003, 12:16 PM
"........aur jab tumhe pata hai ki mein achha nahi likhti to tum padhte hi kyu ho??"....
Aapse dosti jo ki hai to dekhna to padhta hai na ki kya kar rahi ho aap aur kya nahi kar rahi.... aur vaise bhi main aapki post tab padhta hu jab neend nahi aa rahi hoti medicine khaane se achha to aapki ghajals padhna he hai hey just joking  never mind |
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27th August 2003, 05:43 PM
Hi mohit dear,
chalo ye achha hua ki meri shayris kisi kaam to aati hai chahe tumhare neend lene mein hi sahi........well thanx ki tumne meri shayri ko is laayak to samjha........ take care. pari |
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Ghalat baat hai ye |
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Ghalat baat hai ye -
9th September 2003, 04:48 PM
Pari ji
Is rang meN bhang daalne ke liye ma'zrat chahta huuN. Aapke is thraed par jo logoN ne is ghazal ki ddad dete hue taareefoN ki baarish ki hai uske baare meN bas ye hi khuuNga ke is ghazal par JANAB BASHIR BADR SAHAB saari duniya se tareefeN luut chuke haiN. Borrowed wings don't take you too far Pari. Whever of your original stuff I have read shows the potential that you have. So better work on it than doing things like this. regard and home you don't mind Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Taarif-e- kaabil! |
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Taarif-e- kaabil! -
9th September 2003, 05:10 PM
vakai mein taarif-e- kaabil hai aap ki gazal, bahoot khoob likhte hai aap
aap ki gazal ke saamne meri shayri kuch bhi nahi phir bhi "Zindagi ki rah mein ranj-o- gum ke mele hai, Qayaamat ki bhird lagi hai,aur hum akele hai" pari ji kya aap hum se dosti kar na pasand karenge Regards  duniyaa se dil lagaakar duniyaa se kyaa milegaa yaad-e-Khudaa kiye jaa tujh ko Khudaa milegaa |
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Re: Taarif-e- kaabil! -
9th September 2003, 05:27 PM
baba saheb..aap dosti kariye janab Bashir Badr se....kyun ki yeh gazal unhi ki hai.....
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