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"tarahi Ghazal" - JANUARY 2012 -
1st February 2012, 10:17 AM
Mere Pyaare dostoN:
aap sabhee ko meraa Namaskaar aur Aadaab!! "tarahi Ghazal" ka silsilaah ab aur bhee aage baDh rahaa haii...silsile mein jin bhee dostoN ne apni GhazaleN submit kee hai maiN un sabhee dostoN ka Shayri Parivaar ki aur se tah-e-dil se ShuKraGuzaar huuN ! dostoN: aap sabhee se merii dilii darKhaast yahee hai ki sabhee ne apni Ghazal meiN baDii mehnat kee hai aur apne ehsaas Ghazal ke saath joDe hain.. aap sabhee dostoN ki GhazaloN ko dil se paDhiye aur samjhiye..aur apna VOTE zaroor den (aap apna VOTE kisii ek Ghazal ko hi den sakte hain) ***** = taKhallus maiN ek baar fir se sabhee dostoN ka ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huuN... yuuNhi saath dete rahen aage bhee! aapka ~Dhaval |
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jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota -
1st February 2012, 10:26 AM
mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
jahaaN mujh ko, meri jana, ye sara mil gaya hota maiN likh pata ghazal koi tere hoNthoN pe hoNthoN se tadapta kyuN, mujhe gar ye nazara mil gaya hota jo chalte tum, falaq tak saath mere ham-qadam banke kahiN khoya, haseeN sapna, hamaara mil gaya hota tu rootha kyuN, sanam mujh se, hui mujh se khata kaisi tere qadmoN meN rakhta sar, ishaara mil gaya hota juda kuchh yuN, hua khud se, namumqin ab milan apna sada sunta faqat dil ki, dobara mil gaya hota tha gardish meN sada apna muqaddar ***** sunta ja qaram hota agar uska, sitara mil gaya hota |
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Mere Dil Ki Umangon Ko Kinara Mil Gaya Hota -
1st February 2012, 10:27 AM
Koi Jugnu, Koi Deepak, Sitaara Mil Gaya Hota
Mujhay Teri Muhabbat Ka Sahara Mil Gaya Hota Tumhari Aankh Me Hota Jo Mere Naam Ka Kajal Dil-e-Bismil Ko Bhi Jeenay Ka Chaara Mil Gaya Hota Wazahat Kis Ne Mangi Hai Wafaaon Ki Jafaaon Ki Tumhi Pr Jaan Detay Gar Ishaara Mil Gaya Hota Tum Meri Dubti Nabzon Pe Apna Hath Rakhtay Gar Mere Dil Ki Umangon Ko Kinara Mil Gaya Hota Faqat Ye Aarzu Muzmir Thi Mere Dil Me Jaan-e-Jaan Teri Khushion Ke Badlay Me Khasara Mil Gaya Hota Na Hota Gr KHUDA Logo Hamaray Haal Ka Mehram To Ab Tak Khaak Me Naqsha Hamara Mil Gaya Hota Mere Tootay Huay Khwabon Ki Bikhri Kirchiyan ***** Jo Aa Kr Aankh Se Chunta Wo Piyaara Mil Gaya Hota |
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Falak se TooT kar jaise sitaaraa mil gayaa hotaa |
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Falak se TooT kar jaise sitaaraa mil gayaa hotaa -
1st February 2012, 10:29 AM
Falak se TooT kar jaise sitaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Agar wo bheekh mei'n mujhko dobaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Unhone keh diya baazaar mei'n sab kuch milega par Kahaa'n baazaar mei'n wo dil hamaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Diwaanaa yoo'n zamee'n ki godd mei'n sotaa nahi'n shayad Tumhaaree chaahto'n ka gar nazaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Kisee ke zehn mei'n aayaa nahi'n tere sivaa koyee Nahi'n to dar pe uske shehr saaraa mil gayaa hotaa Jo meree haisiyat tere baraabar kee rahee hotee Mujhe teree muhabbat ka sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa Ghamo'n ki bheed mei'n kitne akele reh gaye ho tum Tumhei'n bhi kaash wo dilbar tumhaaraa mil gayaa hotaa |
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Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota -
1st February 2012, 10:30 AM
Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota,
Mujhe Sooraj nahi miltaa, Sitaara mil gaya hota. Dilaasa dil ko dekar maiN bhi apne Ghar gayaa hota, Gale lag kar jo Tu Mujhse Dubaara mil gayaa hota. Khuda se waasta rakhta, to na LuT'taa main is tarha, Tabaahi ke zaraa Pehle ishaara mil gayaa hota. Na jaata Naa-khuda gar Chorkar Lehron ko baahoN me, Tha Mumkin aaj kashti ko kinaara mil gayaa hota. Na fir gumraah main hotaa tamannaoN ke Sehra meiN, Mujhe terii Muhabbat ka sahaara mil gayaa hota. |
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3rd February 2012, 10:18 AM
Khudaa ka saath Na Milta, tumhara mil gaya hota,
Mujhe Sooraj nahi miltaa, Sitaara mil gaya hota. ye sabse acha matlaa lagaa khoob  zara na ke lafz pe gaour ho fir bhi sabse khoob hai agar sooraj nahi miltaa.... |
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5th February 2012, 02:44 PM
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12th February 2012, 10:17 PM
Vote zaruur keejiye......................!!!
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20th February 2012, 09:17 PM
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Subhan_Allah kya shaandar ghazal pesh ki hai........jis kisi ki yeh khoobsurat ghazal hai usey meri taraf se bohat bohat mubrakbaad. Baki sabhi ne bhi bohat khoobsurat likha hai.....par majboori yeh hai ke chunna kisi ek Ghazal ko hai aur yeh Ghazal behad pasandeeda rahi. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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20th February 2012, 09:30 PM
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Khair bemaza hoker hum to chale.....Dhaval saheb sorry. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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21st February 2012, 02:48 AM
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............................................ Khair bemaza hoker hum to chale.....Dhaval saheb sorry.[/QUOTE] AsSalam Alykom Sajid Bhaee! Janaab 'hum to chale'se kya matlab aapka? Hamaree darkhwaast haye aapsay aysa hargiz na keejaygaa..... Duagoh Ahmad |
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22nd February 2012, 02:13 AM
ahaa..!! sajid miyaaN kaisi tabiyat hai................. are bhayee aate hi itni muhabbat barsaa di humpe.....
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bhai , aapse meree request hai ki aap mere qalaamo par zaroor comment kiya kare...............aapke comments se bahut kuch seekhne ko miltaa hai........ aur mujhe ummeed hee nahee balki puraa yaqeen hai ki aapne upar jo naam ginaaye hai unme se 99% percent log mujhse sahmat honge........... after we all are here to learn........................ |
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Main Chahun Ga Ke Aap Dono Aapas Ki saari Ranjishen Bhula Kar Phir Se Baaqaaida SDC Me Participate Karen...... Ummid Hai Ke Aap Meri Darkhwaast Par Ghaur Farmaayen Gay.... Sajid BHayi ... Mujhy Ummid Hai Ke Ap BHi Mujh Jaisay Anaadi Members Ki Posts Par Zaruur Comment Karen Gay... Sada Khush Rahiye..... @ VIKAAS BHAAYI.... Jaisa Ke Me Uper Bata Chuka Hun Ke Aap Ke Comments Se Mujh Jaisay Boht Se Anaadi Shaayer Mustafeez Hotay Hain... Is Liye Main Chaahun Ga Ke Aap Aapas Ki Tamam Ranjishon Se Baala-Tar Ho Kar Faqat S D C Ke Liye Sochen...... Meri Aap se Darkhwaast Hai Ke Aap Sabhi Members Ki Post Par Zaruur Comments Kia Karen... Ye aap ki Inaayat Ho Gi..... ALLAH PAAK Aap Dono Ko Sada Khush Rakhay Or Dilon Se Badgumaanion Ka Khaatima Kare.... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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29th February 2012, 08:02 PM
Vikas Bhai Aur Sajid Bhai !
Mujhe Jyada Kuch Nahi Kahna ... Ahmad Shakil Bhai Ne Bahut AchChhe Se Apni Baat Aap Dono Ke Samaksh Rakhi Hai ... Jise Samajh Lenaa Sahi Soch Kaa Parichaayak Hoga ... Kyonki SDC Koi Jangh Kaa MaidaaN Nahi Hai ... Yeh Hum Sabhi Samajhte HaiN ... YahaaN Aane WaaLe Sabhi Dost ... Shayri Likhne Padhne WaaLe HaiN ... Jab Koi Ghazal Saarvjanik Kii Jaati Hai toh Usski IslaaH Honaa Saubhaavik Hai ... IslaaH Karte Waqt Har PaDhne WaaLe Kaa Alag Alag Nazariyaa Ho Saktaa Hai ... Isme Naraaz Hone Jaisi Koi Baat .. Mujhe Samajh Nahi Aati ... ! Lekin IslaaH SaarThak Honi Chaahiye ... ! Yeh Toh Main Shuroo Se Kahta Raha HooN ... Sabhi Members Ko YahaaN Likhne Waale Sabhi DostoN Kii Likhi Takhleeq Ko Zaroor PaDhnaa Chahiye Aur Unki Likhi Takhleeq Ke Mayaar Ke Mutaabiq Unhe Reply Bhi Zaroor Denaa Chahiye ... ! Vikas Bhai ... Sajid Bhai ... Aap Dono SDC Ke UmdaaH Shair HaiN ... Aap Se Naye Likhne Waale ShairoN Ko Bahut Kuch Seekhnaa Hai ... Mujhe YakeeN Hai .... Apni Zimmedaari Aur MohabbateN Barqaraar RakheNge ... ! Apne har har lafz ka Khud aaiinaa ho jaoon ga Us ko chota kah ke main kaise bara ho jaoon ga -- Wasim Barelvi --  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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3rd March 2012, 02:10 PM
vikas bhai aur sajid bhai...
maiN kuchh kahne nahi puchhane aaya huN.... meri soch hai ki ek shayar tab achha shayar banta hai jab uske paas likhne ke hunar ke saath saath grace, intellect, maturity aur zindagi ka tajarba ho aur aap dono to mashallah achhe nahi bahut achhe shayar haiN....aur isi sab ko dhayan me rakhte hue ek sawaal mere zehan me baar baar aa raha hai....shayad aap uska jawaab de paayeN.... mera chhota sa sawaal ye hai ki ye jo uppar ke threads par kaha suna gaya hai ye kya hai aur kis liye hai? isse zyada kuchh kahna nahi chaahta.... aap dono mujhe behad azeez haiN, aur aapko pura haq hai meri baat ka bura maan ne ka....aur mujh se khafa hone ka... aap ka apna vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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15th March 2012, 08:02 AM
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