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4th October 2005, 03:59 AM
Hi Everyone,
Friends and Friendship.....
I am wondering if I am the right person to write something about this in this forum. Try and see life if possible through a different pair of eyes. Through a friends eye.
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Friends and Friendship
A sweet gal was sitting near the road
Oh she was sitting there all alone
There came then a sweet little boy
As he walked past the gal he said
O! Boy O! Boy what a pretty las.
He stopped next to the sweet gal
and asked "Hey you pretty Gal
Why are you sitting here all alone?"
The Gal looked up with a innocent face
She had tears rolling down her face
"Oh I have nobody to play with"
"None of the other children like me" sob...sob..
The boy looked puzzled and a bit confused
"Why is that no one will play with you?"
She said "They say I am not one of them"
Oh poor gal she had been crying all day
"They say I'm different for I have a heart of gold"
The boy was stunned and then started to laugh.
Poor gal just said "I knew you would also laugh"
"Nobody loves me, everybody hates me"
"Sorry sweety I wasn't laughing at you"
He wiped the tears of the sweet little gal.
"I was laughing at all the other kiddos"
"For they do not know the value of heart of gold"
The gal stopped crying, looked up and said "Really"
The boy gave her a sweet smile and said "Yeah"
She said "Will you be kind enough to tell me?"
"Oh baby it cannot be valued, it is priceless"
"You are lucky for God gives it to a selected few"
The gal eyes lit up with joy and she smiled.
The boy said "Will you be my friend?"
The gal smiled and said "it will be a pleasure"
The boy winked and said "No gal, Pleasure is all mine"
-- Rohin Bhargava
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"Friends are like a moon on a lonely night"
-- Rohin
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4th October 2005, 04:17 AM
Dear Rohin...!
I think that this quote is suitable for this thread...!
"Friends are like poems,
you may never fully understand them,
but you will always love them."
Thanks
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th October 2005, 05:43 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
choooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeet
onli those with hearts of gold can write something proceless like this
will u be my friend?
tc
bye
ur sweetu
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»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~«
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
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hi -
4th October 2005, 06:14 AM
Dearest Rohin
WOw what a composition, in this poem i could see the hideen sadness of the sweet gal whom ppl considereed so different and didint play with her! most of the time i have seen that ppl want u to be a part of the crowd but they often forget! the one who is different in these days is the one who gets all the attention! i would say we should be ourseleves no matter ppl like us or not...because for sure! there will be someone who will come out like an angel and see that behind the smile there are hidden tears of sadness, and they will with magic kindness wipe them without out knowing and light up our world!
For my friends i would say: "Koyi bhi dosti hum na taodainge, Todagine dummahar EH! dost tera saath na todainge".....very good writing thanks for making us come across this! and Hey to be ur friend, "Plesure is all mine too"
Friends are the ones who knows it all, without us saying a word, they look n our eyez and know whats wrong and when we look in their eyes we know All be fine and its all good
Luv ya always Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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4th October 2005, 07:22 AM
hey rohin...
fantastic...
hmm...heart of gold....may b thts y u write poems like these
nice one i liked it
take care
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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hi -
4th October 2005, 08:22 AM
oooppps i forgot to say that! ur the best person to write on this! 'cuz tumse acha dost aur kaun ho sakta hai kisi ka! tumne acha dosti ko kaun samajh sakta hai
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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4th October 2005, 05:43 PM
Hii
U WRITE VERY NICE ...
I M NEW HERE BUT AAPKE POST PADTI THI MAIN PEHLE SE HI..
I LIKE UR POST..
KEEP IT UP
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4th October 2005, 06:09 PM
Very Cute expression Rohin.. as always very nicely written.. Aur haan.. I agree with Pria.. there's nobody better than u to write on Friendship....Aise hi likhte raho.... TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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4th October 2005, 06:10 PM
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Originally posted by Mushkil
Dear Rohin...!
I think that this quote is suitable for this thread...!
"Friends are like poems,
you may never fully understand them,
but you will always love them."
Thanks
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4th October 2005, 06:12 PM
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Originally posted by Mukhra
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
choooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeet
onli those with hearts of gold can write something proceless like this
will u be my friend?
tc
bye
ur sweetu
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Sweetu,
I am glad you liked it.... but maybe only those can write something like it who knows what is the value of heart of gold which they might not have....
Take Care
Rohin
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4th October 2005, 06:25 PM
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Originally posted by LuvPriya
Dearest Rohin
WOw what a composition, in this poem i could see the hideen sadness of the sweet gal whom ppl considereed so different and didint play with her! most of the time i have seen that ppl want u to be a part of the crowd but they often forget! the one who is different in these days is the one who gets all the attention! i would say we should be ourseleves no matter ppl like us or not...because for sure! there will be someone who will come out like an angel and see that behind the smile there are hidden tears of sadness, and they will with magic kindness wipe them without out knowing and light up our world!
For my friends i would say: "Koyi bhi dosti hum na taodainge, Todagine dummahar EH! dost tera saath na todainge".....very good writing thanks for making us come across this! and Hey to be ur friend, "Plesure is all mine too"
Friends are the ones who knows it all, without us saying a word, they look n our eyez and know whats wrong and when we look in their eyes we know All be fine and its all good
Luv ya always Priya
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Priya,
Itne pyaar se padhne ke liye shukriya... true... hum alag hote hain... sab ek jaise nahi hote... aur shayad yeh kuch logon ko manjoor nahi hota jo doosron ka dil dukhate hain....but you rightly said hum jaise hain vaise hi theek hai.... koi na koi is ladke ke tarah jaroor hoga jo humare aasoo pochega...
Yeh Dosti hum nahi todenge...
todenge dum magar...
tera saath na chodenge....
True... friends do understand without having to say a word...
Luv u always Rohin
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4th October 2005, 06:26 PM
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hey rohin...
fantastic...
hmm...heart of gold....may b thts y u write poems like these
nice one i liked it
take care
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Karthik,
I am glad you liked it...
To understand such words you need to have a heart of gold...
You do have one...
Take Care
Rohin
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Re: hi -
4th October 2005, 06:27 PM
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Originally posted by LuvPriya
oooppps i forgot to say that! ur the best person to write on this! 'cuz tumse acha dost aur kaun ho sakta hai kisi ka! tumne acha dosti ko kaun samajh sakta hai
Priya
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Priya,
I am not sure if I am the best person... for there are million better then me...yeah I do try to write something which touches my heart...
Take Care
Priya
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4th October 2005, 06:29 PM
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Originally posted by mehekti_muskaan
Hii
U WRITE VERY NICE ...
I M NEW HERE BUT AAPKE POST PADTI THI MAIN PEHLE SE HI..
I LIKE UR POST..
KEEP IT UP
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Muskaan,
Aap yahan aaye shukriya...
Aapka Shayri.com par swagat hai
Hope you have a great time here...
and I am glad you liked this post
Take Care
Rohin
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4th October 2005, 06:30 PM
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Very Cute expression Rohin.. as always very nicely written.. Aur haan.. I agree with Priya.. there's nobody better than u to write on Friendship....Aise hi likhte raho.... TC
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Pulkit,
Good to see you around....
Cute thee na.... and thanks a lot for the compliment...
Take Care
Rohin
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4th October 2005, 09:09 PM
as sweet as like my Bhaiya.. apani tarah sweet likha hai aapne .. mujhe bhi thoda sa.. thoda sa itana sweet likhana sikha do aap...
aapki lallu
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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5th October 2005, 01:02 PM
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as sweet as like my Bhaiya.. apani tarah sweet likha hai aapne .. mujhe bhi thoda sa.. thoda sa itana sweet likhana sikha do aap...
aapki lallu
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hehehhehehe.............. Garima tum khud hi bahut sweet ho isliye tumhe sab kuch sweet nazar aata hai.......hehehehehe.......
Mein kya sikhaonga.... tumhe to already aata hai.....
Apna khayal rakho
Rohin
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5th October 2005, 03:19 PM
...tht was really cute..
just like apure frenship!
very well writtn rohin...as always!
tc
komal
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5th October 2005, 03:35 PM
dear rohin,
i read it ample of times but never replied . just wanted to read it again n again. each n every word reflects the meaning of friends n friendship n i wud love to cherish it everyday as this post is sumthing which i can say is close to my heary becoz its written by my sweet friend n i just love reading it again n again. the sink tht will never sink is my friendship with u cum wat may.one quote i remember after reading u............
everyone hears wat u say.....friends listen to wat u say .best friends listen to wat u dont say......
well i think this is such a topic which has no end as i think no relation is beyond friendship. i loved this creation of urs. keep penning ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas
Friendship is not how u forget but hw u forgive
not how u listen but how u understand,
not wat u see but how u feel
and not how u let go but how u hold on
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mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!
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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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5th October 2005, 04:16 PM
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...tht was really cute..
just like apure frenship!
very well writtn rohin...as always!
tc
komal
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Komal,
Vaise ladkiyon ka har cheez cute kyon lagti hai...hehehe
Well Friendship is wonderful... infact it is the best ship on earth...
Thanks for ur sabashi....hehehe
Take Care
Rohin
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5th October 2005, 04:24 PM
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dear rohin,
i read it ample of times but never replied . just wanted to read it again n again. each n every word reflects the meaning of friends n friendship n i wud love to cherish it everyday as this post is sumthing which i can say is close to my heary becoz its written by my sweet friend n i just love reading it again n again. the sink tht will never sink is my friendship with u cum wat may.one quote i remember after reading u............
everyone hears wat u say.....friends listen to wat u say .best friends listen to wat u dont say......
well i think this is such a topic which has no end as i think no relation is beyond friendship. i loved this creation of urs. keep penning ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas
Friendship is not how u forget but hw u forgive
not how u listen but how u understand,
not wat u see but how u feel
and not how u let go but how u hold on
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Jasleen,
Acha laga jaan kar ki tumne isse kai baar padha aur tumhe ye khoob pasand aayi... haan friendship ek aisa rishta hai jo sab se alag hai...samjhana mushkil....samjhna aur bhi mushkil.....
Friends are like a moon on a lonely night...
Apna khayal rakho...
Rohin
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6th October 2005, 05:46 AM
Rohin,
It is nice to read you... and it's beautiful creation. this creation really made me feel good....... keep writing and take care!
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6th October 2005, 04:03 PM
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Rohin,
It is nice to read you... and it's beautiful creation. this creation really made me feel good....... keep writing and take care!
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Oye Parul,
Mujhe pa rahi thi ya poetry ko...hehehehe....
Yaar this creation is a heart touching one...
And makes anyone with a heart of Gold feel good...
Take Care
Rohin
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8th October 2005, 09:16 AM
Rohin ji
wow!!!!
tusi bada c sohna likhya .... friendship te ... bahut changa lagaya es nu padh ke ... bahut kat log hunde ne duniya che ... jo hamesha saath dende ne ... eda hi likhde rehakaro
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Rohin ji
wow!!!!
tusi bada c sohna likhya .... friendship te ... bahut changa lagaya es nu padh ke ... bahut kat log hunde ne duniya che ... jo hamesha saath dende ne ... eda hi likhde rehakaro
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Mandeep,
I am glad you liked it... bus yunhi dosti ka saath humesha bana rahe...
Take Care
Rohin
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9th October 2005, 01:09 AM
Really very nice. I felt its story of mine.
How lucky she is. Atleast she got someone who understands her golden heart. But... I am still waiting for someone who can understand my golden heart.
Bye,
Take Care.
Shikha
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9th October 2005, 06:30 PM
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Really very nice. I felt its story of mine.
How lucky she is. Atleast she got someone who understands her golden heart. But... I am still waiting for someone who can understand my golden heart.
Bye,
Take Care.
Shikha
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Shikha,
Somebody will understand for sure...
Have patience...
Take Care
Rohin
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10th October 2005, 12:32 AM
How long??
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