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Chand ho ya ho tum Chand ka aaina - 11th July 2003, 08:34 PM
Hi DostoN kaise ho aap log ..

Chand ho ya ho tum Chand ka aaina
Ya ho tute sitaaroN ka ek aashiyaN

Ya haiN Aise mahal se tumhare kadam
GhunghruoN ne jhankna ho sikha jahaN

Chandi ki gully se jo guzra kabhi
MaiN banaunga palkoN pe ek aasmaaN

Chaand ban Tum chamakti rahogi vahiN
Ban ke parwana ek maiN rahunga vahaN

andaaz
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Hi - 12th July 2003, 02:11 AM
Khitiz ji,

aaj aapne bahaut time ke baad kuch Shari E Ishq mai likha hai, i am very happy, ek baat kahoon aapse, mujhe jyada khushi hogi ki agar aap Shayri E Ishq mai likhen to, Shayri E Dard mai ke elaava bhi.

Aapne bahaut accaha likha hai, aap to hamesha hi acacha likhte hain... Ab hum jaante hain aap shukriyaa kahenge, lekin plzzzzzzz aap shukriyaa mat kahna, kyonki dosti mai shukriyaa nahi kaha jata hai, yeh to mera hakh hai, kyon???

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12th July 2003, 02:13 AM
HI KSHITIZ JI
APNE BAHUT PYARA LIKHA HAI LIKHTE RAHEGA
BYE
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hi - 12th July 2003, 03:10 AM
kshitiz ji ,,.
ab mere pass lafj khatam ho rahe hai tareef ke liye....
hamesha achha hi likhte hai kabhi kharab bhi likh dijiye...
just kidding..
take care,
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maja aa gaya - 12th July 2003, 06:40 AM
kshitiz dost,
ek halki si hawa jaise.... choop kadmo se aa kar gujar jaati hai aisi lagi aaj ki tumhari nazam... bhale hi woh choop thhi par ooske GhunghruoN bol oothhae... bahetareen..
   
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12th July 2003, 02:06 PM
Kshitiz sahab! Aaj yahan ka raasta kaise bhool gaye??

Kidding..

Sach maniye.. aapse itni pyaar bhari ghazal sun kar dil ko bohat sukuun pohoncha.. achha laga jaan kar ki aap sirf shayri e dard me basar nahi karte..bohat hi khubsoorat hai ye kalaam.... Khaaskar kyonki isme 'Chand' lafz itne baar istemaal hua hai!!

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Love main shayar to nahi - 12th July 2003, 02:12 PM
hi kshitiz ji
hello
appki tarif ke liye mere pass shabad nahi hai koi alfaz nahi hai
bus esi tarah app likhte rahai yahi duua hai hamari

bye

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12th July 2003, 02:53 PM
Rimjhim ji ..

Humne to pahli baar kuch likha hai shayri E ishQ me jane kaise aa gaye yahaN ye to klhud bhi nahi malum bas aise hi aap logo ki likhi hui kuch ghazal shayri vagairah padh rahe the to dil kiya ki kuch aap logo ke sath shair kiya jaye bas yahi soch kar likh diya .. Khair ye ghazal to humne 3 saal pahle likhi thi aap logo ki likhi hui shayri dekh kar hume bhi kuch purani bateiN yaad aa gayiN to likh diya ..
Ab aapne mana kar diya hai to shukriya kah nahi sakte par itna zaror kahenge meri khushkismati hai ki aap jaisi dost yahaN par mere saath mauzud hai ..

Take Care .



Punnu ji ..

Tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ..

Bye 2 u




Pari Ji ..

Maine kaha tha na ki DostoN ki nigaheiN hoti haiN jo apne dostoN ki khubiyaN pahchaan jati haiN ..

Ab aur kya kahuN .. Bas
LIkhti rahiye issi tarah se ..

Take care



Meena JI ..

Iss kadar tareef karengi to hum aasmaan me chale jayenge issi zamin par rahne di jiye apne saath .. Vakeyi jis lahze me aap ne tareef ki hai vo hausla afzayi karti hai ..

Likhti rahiye issi tarah se ..




Afshan ..

Hai na ajeeb baat MaiN yahaN par huN .. bas samjh li jiye ki koi musafir rasta bhatak kar aa gaya yahaN tak ..

Arre bas aise hi aa ja raha tha to yaad aaya ki hum bhio kabhi ishQ ke bare me likhte the bas post kar di ek biti baat yahaN par ..

khair ..

Aap kaisi haiN ..



Chetan Bhai ..

Aapki dua ke liye maiN bahut shukrguzaar huN ..

Aapne apne keemti alfaaz se mujhe navaza meri khushkismati hai ..

Izaazat di jiye ..

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12th July 2003, 03:09 PM
Woh kya aaye, bahaarein aa gayi,
Kadam paRe unke, fizaein chaa gayi.

Suna suna tha aalam dil ka,
Unke pyaar ki ghataein chha gayi.

Koi shay na lubhaati thi hume,
Aane se unke, saari baatein bhaa gayi.

Sajna sawarna bhool gaye the hum,
Nazar se unki kaii raunakein aa gayi.

Dil ki basti aabaad hui hai aaj to,
Chaar su palkon ki panahein chaa gayi.



Aapko kya lagta hai, kaise hain hum aaj??

Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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12th July 2003, 03:25 PM
Afshan ..

Aapka mizaaz to bahut rumani lagta hai aaj .. YooN mahsos ho raha hai ki badalte mausam ka asar aa raha hai is khushnuma mausam me aapke khyalat bhi indradhanush ki tarah rang birange ho gayeN haiN .. Magar kya kahuN main chaah kar bhi kuch aisa nahi likh pata jo rumani ho ..kuch purana likha hua hai vahi urz kar deta huN ..

Kisi ki nigahoN ke betaab ban kar
Sabhi se nazar hum churane lage haiN

Ek chehra dil me utara hai jab se
YooN surat sabhi ki bhulane lage haiN

KI vo chand jo koi ek baar dekhe .. To
Ta umar usko hi socha karega

Ussi khwaab ko hum sabhi se chura kar
khyalooN me apne sajaane lage haiN

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12th July 2003, 03:32 PM
LOL.. ji.. aaj koi lauta hai.. darr sa to ab bhi hai.. magar bohat kum.. kaii dino baad is chehre par muskuraahat aayi hai..

Janaab, aap to kaafi rumani hua karte the.. bhale hi ab aisa likhna aapke liye mumkin na ho, magar likhte to bohat achha ho..

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12th July 2003, 03:41 PM
Afshan ..

YaadoN me unki batooN me unki
Dil ko rulana chor diya

Gate the hum bhi gungunate the hum bhi
GhazaloN me sapne sajaate the hum bhi

GhazaleiN banana chor diya
YooN gungunana .. chor diya

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Chand hoya ho tum...... - 12th July 2003, 04:00 PM
Dear Kshitiz, I hope you are well.
Aapka likhha hua parke aapka tarifh keise karu samajh nehi aaraha hein.
Well you are good. Aapki khayalat bohot acha hein.
Woh toh khush naseeb hongi jo aapka aapna hoga.
All the best. Likhte rahiyega. Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Regards, Shimul.

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12th July 2003, 04:10 PM
Shimul ji ..

NigaheiN Ankahi bayaN karne ke liye hoti haiN .. Aur
TareefeiN sir jhuka kar sunne ke liye hoti haiN

AB Main aapke itne keemti alfaazaat Jinse navaaz kar aapne mujhe izzat o bashar kiya hai .. ka karz maiN chuka nahi sakta ..

Fir bhi itna kahna chaunga ki .. MaiN bahut ehsaan mand huN ..Hausla afzayi ke liye ..

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Chand hoya ho tum...... - 12th July 2003, 04:40 PM
Dear Kshitiz, Karz toh woh chukate hein jo dusre ko gair samajhte hein. Aapko toh hum aapna samajhte hein.
Aayenda karz ki baate na kare toh mujhe bohot khushi hogi.
Thanks for reply. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless.
Regards, Shimul.

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Hi - 12th July 2003, 06:57 PM
Khitiz ji,

Yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata ki aap ko yahan kaun si baat keench laayi but jo bhi keench laaya hai ooski main shukraguzaar hoon. Kyonki maine aaj tak aapko Shayri E Dard mai hi likhte dekha hai, lekin kal jab maine aapko Shayri E Ishq mai likhte dekha, to aap yakeen nahi maanege main bahaut kush thee, kush thee ki shaayad mujhe aisa laga ki aap kush ho, pata nahi kyon yeh ehsaas hua, pata nahi main sahi hoo ya galat.

Anyays main bhi bahaut kushkismat hoo ki aapke jaisa dost mere saath hai, very happy. Aur hana mere clear instructions hain ki aap mujhe thankyou and soryr nahi kahenge, samjhe???

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Re: Chand ho ya ho tum Chand ka aaina - 14th July 2003, 12:37 PM
hi khisit
sabne aap ki tareef ki hai kyun ki aap tareef ke qabeel ho.mein aap ko "happy birthday"kehta hoon.

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14th July 2003, 07:20 PM
Manoj ji ..

Bahut bahut shukriya .. aapne keemti waQt me se kuch hissa mere liye nikala maiN bahut shukrguzar huN ..

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