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Ansoo -
23rd February 2004, 08:03 PM
Lahrain kisne dekhi hai
Hum to apne hi ansuo me doob kar marjaenge... |
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its good -
24th February 2004, 01:42 PM
hi mehzabeen
2 quotes reveals every postion of ur nerves and heart and also its very well written....!!! my veiw is that i dnt know about others but it is written with depth. keep on postings inspired_humour@yahoo.com Sal!m.....!!! |
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24th February 2004, 03:38 PM
Dearest friend
Thanks for reading and appreciating my work.. Thanks for the encouragement!  |
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Wah..!! |
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25th February 2004, 12:01 PM
Lahrain kisne dekhi hai
Hum to apne hi ansuo me doob kar marjaenge... Wah.....Kamaal likha hai aapne.....Kasam se... dohraana hi padega... Lahrain kisne dekhi hai Hum to apne hi ansuo me doob kar marjaenge... UooNhi likhte rahiyega..Mehjabeen ji. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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25th February 2004, 02:17 PM
Dearest Chand,,,
Thank you for taking time and commenting my work I appreciate that u like what i wrote. Take care always Love: |
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12th May 2004, 10:44 AM
Lahrain kisne dekhi hai
Hum to apne hi ansuo me doob kar marjaenge Waah khoobsurat likha hain...kafi gehraayee hai khayaalat mein gar original writer aap hi hain to bass ek baat ki wajah se yeh ashaar jhootha lagta hai...aur woh yeh ke aap ne apna original avtaar use nahi kiya... I believe yeh avtaar mohtarma parastaar G ka hai...Plz koi accha sa avtaar sirf aur sirf apne liye istemaal karna, kyon ke yeh khayaalat yeh sher sirf tumhaare hain.... Talib. |
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Re: Ansoo -
12th May 2004, 11:17 AM
Lahrain kisne dekhi hai
Hum to apne hi ansuo me doob kar marjaenge... mahjabeen ji.... aap kumbh ke mele mein bichad to nahin gayi thi????? hamari priye paars se????  sher acha hai...daad kubool kijiye... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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