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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai - 15th November 2006, 07:41 PM

Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai


Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


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15th November 2006, 08:33 PM

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai


Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

bahot khub mere dost harash ji jabajst shuruaat!!!!!!

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

alag se andaz me aapne pesh kiya achha laga harshji

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

ye sher mujhe bahot pasand aaya my fav.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.

bahot ahhey sher hai ye dono achha likha hai



Harash


HARASH JI FIR SE EK BEHTRIN KALAAM PESH KIYA AAPNE

DIL SE NIKLI DAAD KUBUL KIJIYENGA

KHUS RAHIYE

APNA KHAYAL RAKKHIYE

AAPKA DOST
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15th November 2006, 08:51 PM

Harash Ji

Aapko parhkar bahaut accha laga. yeh panktiyaan bahaut kuch kehgayi hain:
" Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka / dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai"

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16th November 2006, 08:27 AM

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai


Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


Harash

bahut khoobsurat harash ji, yu hi likhtey rahiye.

aapki dost


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DIL SE NIKLI DAAD KUBUL KIJIYENGA

KHUS RAHIYE

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17th November 2006, 10:01 PM

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai


Namaskar Harsh ji

A very impressive inspirational poetry.....Parh kar har sher ke liye waah nikle..beautiful poetry.......hamare daad kabul kijeyega....it was nice to read an inspirational poetry after a long time......keep up the good work

Regards


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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai


Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


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Harash Ji...!

Aap ko parha aur daad diye bina na reh sake hum...! Aap ne vaakai ek umda kalaam likha hai...!

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


I appreciate the above mentioned sher most...

Younhi likhte rahiyega



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai


Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


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aaj aapne leak se hatkar bahut hi umda kalam pesh kiya hai
dil se meri daad kabool kigiye
bahut badiya ese hi likhte rahiye ga

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai!!

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai!!


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Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai


Namaskar Harsh ji

A very impressive inspirational poetry.....Parh kar har sher ke liye waah nikle..beautiful poetry.......hamare daad kabul kijeyega....it was nice to read an inspirational poetry after a long time......keep up the good work

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Harash Ji...!

Aap ko parha aur daad diye bina na reh sake hum...! Aap ne vaakai ek umda kalaam likha hai...!

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


I appreciate the above mentioned sher most...

Younhi likhte rahiyega


Bahoot bahoot shukriya mushkil saheb....

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harsh ji namaskar
aaj aapne leak se hatkar bahut hi umda kalam pesh kiya hai
dil se meri daad kabool kigiye
bahut badiya ese hi likhte rahiye ga

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai!!

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai!!


Jaisi khubsurat shuruat .... waisa hi anjaam!!! Daad haazir hai gurudev!!!

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bhut khub - 22nd November 2006, 10:13 AM

Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


Harash ji ko raj ka namaskaar......harash ji ek baat kehta hoon aapse ki agar aap itna acha likhte ho to plzzzzz aapse guzarish hai ki humme kush lafaz zaroor diya kari jinse hum aapki tareef me kush keh sake.......saach me aap bhut acha or bhut gehra likhte ho........mazza aa jata hai aapko parhkar....yu hee likhte rehna........take care.........raj.......


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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Khoobs bayaani hai Harsh bhai...


Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

nice words...


Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.

hmmmmmmmm...

Harsh bhai,

Kaise hain? Ummeed hai bahut acche se honge...

Bahut khooburat likha hai aapne... Ek message hai aapki tehreer me... padhkar accha laga... aise hi likhte raha kijiye.. apna khayal rakhiyega...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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HarSh jee,

Bohat Khuub liKha hai aap ne.. Daad qubool keejiyegaa.. yuuN to sabhi Sher achchhe haiN, paR yeH sher zeyaadah pasand aaye..

Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

ess sher ke duusre misre ko ess tarah liKh deN to rawaani meiN ezaafa hoga..
'Mausam bhi Shola ugalne laga hai'

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


Kya baat hai, bohat khuub! ek achchhi tehreer ke liye daad haazir hai.. qubool keejiyega..

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Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehlne laga hai.

Khoobs bayaani hai Harsh bhai...


Kab tak bhala kaid saanse rahengi,
kawach badiyoN ka pighalne laga hai.

Gumrah kab tak raheingi dishayeiN,
Tewar aasmaaN ka badalne laga hai.

nice words...


Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.

hmmmmmmmm...

Harsh bhai,

Kaise hain? Ummeed hai bahut acche se honge...

Bahut khooburat likha hai aapne... Ek message hai aapki tehreer me... padhkar accha laga... aise hi likhte raha kijiye.. apna khayal rakhiyega...

waah pulkit ji......bahoot dino baad dikhe aap janaab....kaise hain aap...n shukriya is stoppage ka...


god bless you always


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23rd November 2006, 09:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Anjana Rahi View Post
HarSh jee,

Bohat Khuub liKha hai aap ne.. Daad qubool keejiyegaa.. yuuN to sabhi Sher achchhe haiN, paR yeH sher zeyaadah pasand aaye..

Rukh ab hawa ka badalne laga hai
ye mousam bhi ab shola ugalne laga hai.

ess sher ke duusre misre ko ess tarah liKh deN to rawaani meiN ezaafa hoga..
'Mausam bhi Shola ugalne laga hai'

Jabse pata chal gaya sazishoN ka
dil kaatiloN ka dehalne laga hai.

Faouladi haathoN ka aisa hai jadoo,
kohre ka alam bikharne laga hai.

Tim-tim sitaroN ko chhupna hi hoga
Andhere mein suraj Nikalne laga hai.


Kya baat hai, bohat khuub! ek achchhi tehreer ke liye daad haazir hai.. qubool keejiyega..

Mayank


Mayank ji bahoot bahoot shukriya...aapko tehreer pasand ayi.....
and thx for your editing....ye our bhi sunder hogaya ji....waise its my instant write n second thought se pehle hi chhorh diya.....

Ek baar phir bahoot bahoot shukriya


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