Dil virane wich jad teri yaad

[Nakshpreet202]

Kuch shabad meri kalam toon... I hope ke tuhanu pasand aayegi..........

Dil virane wich jad teri yaad paroni aaye ve
hanjua de suche moti assan usdi jholi paye ve
teri yaad de sir te gunde suhe suhe full ve sajna
Mehek ohna di ki dassan mein roh de vich samaye ve
teri yaad chup karke jad mere vehre paer hai dhareya ve
fir dil kambeya fir nain bhare fir tera cheta aaye ve
tu beparwa tenu ki parwa ehna yadan di te tahanga di
kade yaad meri vi rabb karke tenu mere wang tarfae ve

[tilakji]

Nakshpreet ji bahut khoob. Bahut khoobsoorat. U've all the ingrediants of becoming a great poet. Soch di maturity to kayam rakhnaa. Aah di lines ne taaN jaan kadh ditti..

teri yaad chup karke jad mere vehre paer hai dhareya ve
fir dil kambeya fir nain bhare fir tera cheta aaye ve

Wasdey raho

tilak