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..."Jab Bhi Beeti Baaton Ko Socha Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai"… - 24th February 2009, 12:45 PM

Zindagi Aab Sirf Dard Hai Tanhai Hai,
Meri Aankhon Main Kyu Maut Simat Aayi Hai,

Kehte Hain Log Chahat Ko Ibaadat,
Ibadat Mein Phir Kyu Ruswayi Hai,

Mehfil Mein Reh Kar Bhi Tanha Rehna,
Yeh Adaa Zindagi Ne Hi Sikhlayi Hai,

Yeh Iss Jeevan Ka Sila Hai ,
Main Tamasha Bana Aur Duniya Tamashayi Hai,

Intezar Main Kisi Ki Raat Ko Naa Barbaad Karna,
Doobte Taaron Ne Mujhe Baat Ye Samjhaayi Hai,

Us Se Taluk Hi Kuch Aisa Raha Hai
Jab Bhi Beeti Baaton Ko Socha Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai…

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24th February 2009, 01:00 PM

Roshini jee:

namaste!!

aapki yeh tehreer bahot hi achchhee rahee !! aSh'aar dil-fareb lage.n!

YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee... bazm kii raunaq baRhaate rahiye!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Love 24th February 2009, 04:14 PM

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Zindagi Aab Sirf Dard Hai Tanhai Hai,
Meri Aankhon Main Kyu Maut Simat Aayi Hai,

Kehte Hain Log Chahat Ko Ibaadat,
Ibadat Mein Phir Kyu Ruswayi Hai,

Mehfil Mein Reh Kar Bhi Tanha Rehna,
Yeh Adaa Zindagi Ne Hi Sikhlayi Hai,

Yeh Iss Jeevan Ka Sila Hai ,
Main Tamasha Bana Aur Duniya Tamashayi Hai,

Intezar Main Kisi Ki Raat Ko Naa Barbaad Karna,
Doobte Taaron Ne Mujhe Baat Ye Samjhaayi Hai,

Us Se Taluk Hi Kuch Aisa Raha Hai
Jab Bhi Beeti Baaton Ko Socha Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai…

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great piece of work..............keep up
thanks for sharing
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24th February 2009, 04:20 PM

Namaskaar Roshni jiii...............aapne bahut accha likha hai, sabhi sher acche lage....par yeh last wale 2 sher dil ke khaas kareeb rahe....!

Intezar Main Kisi Ki Raat Ko Naa Barbaad Karna,
Doobte Taaron Ne Mujhe Baat Ye Samjhaayi Hai,

Us Se Taluk Hi Kuch Aisa Raha Hai
Jab Bhi Beeti Baaton Ko Socha Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai…

bahut khoob......daad kabool kijiye.

en 2 shero.n par aapko reps ++

god bless u


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24th February 2009, 06:25 PM

hey thnks all of u frnds but main apke sath yahan ek baat share karna cahati hu aur wo baat ye hai ki main poem nahi likhti hu na hi maine ye poem likhi hai...

mujhe ye lines achi lagi to maine aap sabke sath share ki hai bas...

ye achi baat hai ki aap logo ko ye post achi lagi...

   
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ayela... ek baar to main bhi chakkar me pad gaya tha..
ki roshini ne ghazal likhna shuru kar diya
shukar hai tuney khud bata diya...

waise nice collection dear...

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take care
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24th February 2009, 08:05 PM

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ayela... ek baar to main bhi chakkar me pad gaya tha..
ki roshini ne ghazal likhna shuru kar diya
shukar hai tuney khud bata diya...

waise nice collection dear...

keep posting...

take care
keep smiling...

achha Roshni nahin batati to tum behosh ho jate kya





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24th February 2009, 08:07 PM

thanx 4 sharing roshini sweety



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Roshni ji, beeti bataon se to ankhe aksar bahr ati hai, lekin aap ke is ehsas ko padhkar kuch purani baaton se ankhbhar ayi hai, bahot acha likhte hai aap yun hi likhte rahe, take care, bye


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nice sharing.......................................


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Roshni ji................aapne bahut acchi gazal share ki hai, par jo gazal aapki khud ki likhi hue na ho...uske neeche "writer ka naam" ya "NOT MINE" jaroor likha likiye...taaki padne wale kisi galatfahmi meiN na rahe.

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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai roshini ji......thanks for sharing.........




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