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teen fuTkar sher!! - 9th December 2010, 06:31 PM

aadaab dostoN

1. "achchhaa hai dil se door rahe paasbaane aql",
ye kyaa ki dil ke hoThoN pe alfaaz zeh'n ke!

as'l sher
"achchhaa hai dil ke saath rahe paasbaan e aql,
lekin kabhee kabhee ise tanhaa bhee chhoR de!"
(rooh e Iqbal mujhe muaaf kare )

2. uljhee hai makDiyaaN kabhee apne hee jaal meN,
aur apnee hasratoN ke hee jaale meN aadamee!

3. kahaaN apne hee pairaahan pe jaatee hai nigaaheN,
yahaaN bas gair ke daaman pe jaatee hai nigaaheN!

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aapke likhe sher to sabhi achhe hote hai par teesra sher jo aapne likha hai vo mujhe bahut khoob laga daad
duaon ke saath

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Dheer Ji .. Namaste ... Kaise hai aap ?? .. Ji bahot achchhe lage teeno sher hume ... par teesara waala ... jyaada pasand aaya .....

yunhi likhate rahiye aur .. hume padhane ka mauka dete rahiyeeeeee ... kyon ki aap ka likha hammesha hi khaas hota hai ....

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12th December 2010, 03:49 PM
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aadaab dostoN

1. "achchhaa hai dil se door rahe paasbaane aql",
ye kyaa ki dil ke hoThoN pe alfaaz zeh'n ke!

as'l sher
"achchhaa hai dil ke saath rahe paasbaan e aql,
lekin kabhee kabhee ise tanhaa bhee chhoR de!"
(rooh e Iqbal mujhe muaaf kare )

2. uljhee hai makDiyaaN kabhee apne hee jaal meN,
aur apnee hasratoN ke hee jaale meN aadamee!

3. kahaaN apne hee pairaahan pe jaatee hai nigaaheN,
yahaaN bas gair ke daaman pe jaatee hai nigaaheN!

khairandesh
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Dheer Sahab,
Namaskaar,


"ye kyaa ki dil ke hoThoN pe alfaaz zeh'n ke!"


kya baat hai, kay baat hai janaab bahut umda aur gehra hai ye misra. laajwaab , kisi badhe shayer ke sher par apna khyaal kehna aur wo bhi is gehraai ke saath. wah wah kya kehne kabile tareef. baaki dona sher bhi bhut achche kahe hain aapne .

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17th December 2010, 08:17 PM
dostoN!
aadaab aur namaste!
himmat_afzaayee ke liye aap sabhi kaa tah e dil se mamnoon huN.

@Anaarhi saHeb :- jis sher kaa aapne zikr kiyaa woh aamad thaa so jyo ka tyo pesh kar diyaa. aapne pasand farmaayaa.behad shukriya!

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janab dheer bhai.. kaise hain aap.. aaj itne arse ke baad aapke is post pe nazar gai... bahot ache lage aapke khayalaat.. aaate raha karen... khush rahen

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aadaab dostoN

1. "achchhaa hai dil se door rahe paasbaane aql",
ye kyaa ki dil ke hoThoN pe alfaaz zeh'n ke!

as'l sher
"achchhaa hai dil ke saath rahe paasbaan e aql,
lekin kabhee kabhee ise tanhaa bhee chhoR de!"
(rooh e Iqbal mujhe muaaf kare )

2. uljhee hai makDiyaaN kabhee apne hee jaal meN,
aur apnee hasratoN ke hee jaale meN aadamee!

3. kahaaN apne hee pairaahan pe jaatee hai nigaaheN,
yahaaN bas gair ke daaman pe jaatee hai nigaaheN!

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waah waah dheer ji ! bada hi dilchasp ghumaav hai teenon hi sheron mein. bahaut umda. daad aur dua ke saath .... zarraa
   
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