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maine chaha to yahee chaha - 13th January 2006, 05:18 PM

maine chaha to yahee chaha
ki tum se din kee udasee kahoon
raat kee siskiyan sunayoon
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhoon
tum ko meharaban payoon

zindgee ke pas mohalat ho
ya zindgee sakhat ho
jab bhee main chahoon
tumhre pas mere liye waqt ho

tum ko kal tak maine
har pal aisa hee paya tha
tumhara wazood jaise
meree khwahishon ka saya tha

par aj sabhee baten alag dikhtee hain
jab main dard se bojhil hoon
aur meree saree ragen dukhtee hain
tum nazar nahee ate
tum milte nehee
tum hee kaho main kya karoon
mujh se yanha ye ashak sambhalte nahee

maine chaha to bas yahee
ye sare ansoo meree ankhon se nikal lo
mara dard yateem na ho jaye
tum bachhon kee tarah paal lo

mujh main aab rahe
ya sookhee rahoon
main kal bhee dariya thee
aaj bhee dariya hoon
main bas tum tak bahtee hoon
lahar jaise samanadar se bat kartee hai
tum se sare gam kahtee hoon

kal tak tum sunte bhee the
samjhate bhee rahe
main jab bhee tum se apane
hadise kahe

aj mujh se alag muh fer ke khare ho
main hee chotee ho gayee
ya tum hee ab bare ho
mere chote hone ka mujhe dukh nahee
tumahre bare hone se kab parhez hai
par tumhara yoon muh ferana hairatangez hai

maine kab chaha tha tum mere barabar raho
main tum ko farishta kar doongee
khud ko jab bhee farishat kaho

mujeh bas tumahree bahon main rahana ata hai
mujhe bas tum se dard kahana ata hai

bas yee chaha hai maine jab chaha hai
tumhe phir se meharban payoon
mere pas tumhre siwa koye ghar nahee
tum nahee to main kahan jayoon

kab jane meree mazbooriyan samjhoge
kitnee sakht hain ye dooriyan samjhoge
tum na sahee main hee ye fasale mitayoon
bas yahee chaha maine jab bhee chaha
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhon
tum ko meharaban payoon


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13th January 2006, 09:18 PM

Anil,

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Re: maine chaha to yahee chaha - 15th January 2006, 09:55 AM

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maine chaha to yahee chaha
ki tum se din kee udasee kahoon
raat kee siskiyan sunayoon
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhoon
tum ko meharaban payoon

zindgee ke pas mohalat ho
ya zindgee sakhat ho
jab bhee main chahoon
tumhre pas mere liye waqt ho

tum ko kal tak maine
har pal aisa hee paya tha
tumhara wazood jaise
meree khwahishon ka saya tha

par aj sabhee baten alag dikhtee hain
jab main dard se bojhil hoon
aur meree saree ragen dukhtee hain
tum nazar nahee ate
tum milte nehee
tum hee kaho main kya karoon
mujh se yanha ye ashak sambhalte nahee

maine chaha to bas yahee
ye sare ansoo meree ankhon se nikal lo
mara dard yateem na ho jaye
tum bachhon kee tarah paal lo

mujh main aab rahe
ya sookhee rahoon
main kal bhee dariya thee
aaj bhee dariya hoon
main bas tum tak bahtee hoon
lahar jaise samanadar se bat kartee hai
tum se sare gam kahtee hoon

kal tak tum sunte bhee the
samjhate bhee rahe
main jab bhee tum se apane
hadise kahe

aj mujh se alag muh fer ke khare ho
main hee chotee ho gayee
ya tum hee ab bare ho
mere chote hone ka mujhe dukh nahee
tumahre bare hone se kab parhez hai
par tumhara yoon muh ferana hairatangez hai

maine kab chaha tha tum mere barabar raho
main tum ko farishta kar doongee
khud ko jab bhee farishat kaho

mujeh bas tumahree bahon main rahana ata hai
mujhe bas tum se dard kahana ata hai

bas yee chaha hai maine jab chaha hai
tumhe phir se meharban payoon
mere pas tumhre siwa koye ghar nahee
tum nahee to main kahan jayoon

kab jane meree mazbooriyan samjhoge
kitnee sakht hain ye dooriyan samjhoge
tum na sahee main hee ye fasale mitayoon
bas yahee chaha maine jab bhee chaha
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhon
tum ko meharaban payoon


ap sab ka anil

Acha likha hai anil

keep it up


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shukriya sabhee ka - 9th February 2006, 11:33 AM

thanks devangi har baar kee tarah si bar bhee mera likha achha laga tumhe

dave tumhara meree shayree pe anzar rakhana bhala lagata hai

meena g u always makes my shayree spcl with ur words

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9th February 2006, 12:53 PM

Kya Baat Hai Pahdte hue bahut apni si prateet hui mujhe aapki ye kavita

Lagta Hai ye Dard jaise APna Sa Hi hai
Tujhe Pana Aaj Bhi Jaise Sapne Sa Hi Hai
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thanks a lot - 9th February 2006, 04:41 PM

achha laga kavita dil ke as pas lagee tumhe
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9th February 2006, 04:50 PM

anil ji
weese to puri kavita hi ek aurat ke ehsas ko vyakat karti hai
par ye sher bhaut hi achha samjh hai aapne
achha laga ki aap aurat k man ko itni achhi tarah samjh paate hain
aj mujh se alag muh fer ke khare ho
main hee chotee ho gayee
ya tum hee ab bare ho
mere chote hone ka mujhe dukh nahee
tumahre bare hone se kab parhez hai
par tumhara yoon muh ferana hairatangez hai


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shradhha - 10th February 2006, 07:32 AM

sharddha tum ne gaharayee se samjah meree kavita ko achha laga tumhaar is kavita ke liye pyar bahut achha hai shukriya
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dear anil ji,
sab ko sab kuch mil jaye iss bedard zindagi mein yeh zaroori to nahi. yeh kam hai ki unka ehsaas humein aaj bhi zindagi ke har morh par aage chalte jaane ke liye samjhata rehta hai. ek naari ki bhavna ko samjhne ke liye shukriya. mein aur kya dikhao tujhko wafa ka namuna.........khud kandhon par aapni dhoyi armaanon ki maiyaat!its wonderfully expressed. kitni sadhgi se aapne aapne ehsaas ko shabdon mein dhala hai. bahut khoob. best is tht u can give words for any one. loved as usual reading ur thoughts. keep penning down ahead too. take care.chalo issi baat par aaj ek aur sher jo likha hai kabhi wud love sharing with u again today............

baad marne ke mere ghar se jo samaan milega
meri laash ke maufic woh bhi bejaan milega
kisi kone se mileghi eh humdum tumhari yaadein
kisi kone se dil ka toota armaan milega!

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Re: maine chaha to yahee chaha - 9th March 2006, 12:54 PM

Bhai

aaj achi tarah padha...aur likha aapne bohat hi badhiya hai...jaise koi apne khud k jazbaato ko bayaa kar raha ho..bas starting ki kuch line mein jayada dum naa laga mujhe...vaise itna kuch to main janta nahi par jab mein dil se padhta hai isliye baki sabhi lineo mein kamjor lagi...


shukriya...lekin aapki rachna kabil-e-tarif hai


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maine chaha to yahee chaha
ki tum se din kee udasee kahoon
raat kee siskiyan sunayoon
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhoon
tum ko meharaban payoon

zindgee ke pas mohalat ho
ya zindgee sakhat ho
jab bhee main chahoon
tumhre pas mere liye waqt ho

tum ko kal tak maine
har pal aisa hee paya tha
tumhara wazood jaise
meree khwahishon ka saya tha

par aj sabhee baten alag dikhtee hain
jab main dard se bojhil hoon
aur meree saree ragen dukhtee hain
tum nazar nahee ate
tum milte nehee
tum hee kaho main kya karoon
mujh se yanha ye ashak sambhalte nahee

maine chaha to bas yahee
ye sare ansoo meree ankhon se nikal lo
mara dard yateem na ho jaye
tum bachhon kee tarah paal lo

mujh main aab rahe
ya sookhee rahoon
main kal bhee dariya thee
aaj bhee dariya hoon
main bas tum tak bahtee hoon
lahar jaise samanadar se bat kartee hai
tum se sare gam kahtee hoon

kal tak tum sunte bhee the
samjhate bhee rahe
main jab bhee tum se apane
hadise kahe

aj mujh se alag muh fer ke khare ho
main hee chotee ho gayee
ya tum hee ab bare ho
mere chote hone ka mujhe dukh nahee
tumahre bare hone se kab parhez hai
par tumhara yoon muh ferana hairatangez hai

maine kab chaha tha tum mere barabar raho
main tum ko farishta kar doongee
khud ko jab bhee farishat kaho

mujeh bas tumahree bahon main rahana ata hai
mujhe bas tum se dard kahana ata hai

bas yee chaha hai maine jab chaha hai
tumhe phir se meharban payoon
mere pas tumhre siwa koye ghar nahee
tum nahee to main kahan jayoon

kab jane meree mazbooriyan samjhoge
kitnee sakht hain ye dooriyan samjhoge
tum na sahee main hee ye fasale mitayoon
bas yahee chaha maine jab bhee chaha
jab bhee tumahree simt dekhon
tum ko meharaban payoon


ap sab ka anil


Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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9th March 2006, 01:07 PM

anil ji bahaut hi khoobsurti se aapne apne jazbaaton ko lafz diye hain...sach mujhe bada accha laga.........
dil se likhte hain aap isliye dil ko baat chood jaati hai.
likhte rahiyega aur khush rahiye..jaane kyun aajkal aap mujhe kuch udaas lagte hain..khush raha kariye kyunki dhoop chaaon toh jeevan ka hissa hai....


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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jas kee kalam - 9th March 2006, 02:04 PM

jas bahut achha likha hai tumne tumahree saree panktiyan meree nazm ko aur tumhre andar kee shayara dono ko apne samne khara kar dete hain nazm ki kismat sanwar jatee hai jab tumhree shayree ko apne sath patee hai its sweet bahut achha hai thanks for ur words
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diggaj - 9th March 2006, 02:08 PM

main sochta raha aghaz kee lino ko kaise badaloon par mujhe in kee jagah koyee doosree line sujhayee nahee dee is baar kamzor agahz se guzara kar lo aglee baar aur achha kcuh le ke ayoonga, halake mujeh is kee shuruat pasand hai ho sakta hai koyee kamee ho jo mujeh pata na cahlee ho ya ho sakta hai koyee khobee ho jise tum jan nahee paye but i like ke tum meree shayree dhyan se parhte ho aur jo dil kee awaz hotee hai use hee samne late ho
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thanks - 9th March 2006, 02:11 PM

farhana shukriya meree nazm ke pas aa ke rukne ke liye tumhara pyar meree shayree ke liye bahut achha lagata hai mujhe meree sabhee shayree parhee hain tum ne. rahee udasee kee baat to ye nazm 13 jan ko post kee thee nazm se udasee ka rishta nahee par ey sach hain udas hoon tabhee pichale 6-7 dino se kcuh post nahee kiya ab ye shikayat hai ua udasee khuda jane
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