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Ke Manzilein aur bhi hai -
18th July 2001, 11:28 PM
Har muqaam pe lagta hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai
Raasta abhi baaki hai bahut ke manzilein aur bhi hai Saahil se takarakar laut jaati hai har lehar Saahil uske aur bhi hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai Dhal jaata hai suraj bhi har shaam Subahe abhi aur bhi hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai Jindagi mana humne dhadkano ki mohtaaz hai Saanse abhi aur bhi hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai -Subodh Gupta I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?&threadid=104 |
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12th August 2001, 05:33 PM
wah saab waah!
Aapne to hamey sitaron ke aagey jahan aur bhi hai ki yaad dila di can u post that?please if u can. keep on writing such wonderful poems. |
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12th August 2001, 06:31 PM
hi subodh,
this was really nice one!!! keep it up man. you are doing very well. rahul. anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya |
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13th August 2001, 07:50 PM
Sitaron se aage Jahan Aur bhi hai
Abhi Ishq ke Imtehaan aur bhi hai Tahi zindagi se nayi yeh fizaa-e Yaha saikdo karwaan aur bhi hai Kinaat na kar alam-e rango bu par Chaman aur bhi, aashyaan aur bhi hai Agar kho gaya ek nasheman to kya gam Makamate aho faga aur bhi hai Tu Shaheen hai parwaaz hai kaam tera Tere saamne aasman aur bhi hai Isi roz shab mein ulaj kar na rehja Ke tere zamano makaan aur bhi hai Gaye din ke tanha tha mein anjuman mein Yaha ab mere razdaan aur bhi hai.." This is a Ghazal by Iqbal... I hope, this is what you wanted Uday... -Subodh Gupta I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?&threadid=104 |
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Beautiful Ghazal .... |
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Beautiful Ghazal .... -
15th August 2001, 08:06 PM
Hi Subodh,
This one was a beautiful ghazal... Keep posting...!! Adding something from my side... Thokar lagi hai par koi sapna toota nahi Sapne abhi aur bhi hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai Hope you like it.... Manu |
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17th August 2001, 06:28 PM
hey subodh thanks very much!
You know this sher has really given me a great hope! I had just failed in one subject everyone was cursing me. but your poetry has given me the hpoe i was in search of. thanks a lot! |
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Very true... |
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26th August 2001, 04:20 PM
Yes Uday, this sure is a very inspirational Ghazal, infact even I got something from it.
Subodh Gupta I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. I have learned, Joy is not in things, it is in us. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?&threadid=104 |
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really very inspirational |
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really very inspirational -
1st September 2001, 09:28 PM
Hi everyone
This post indeed is very inspirational. "Thokar lagi hai par koi sapna toota nahi Sapne abhi aur bhi hai ke manzilein aur bhi hai" these lines are also very beautiful n very true as well do keep writing such inspirational ghazals Molly |
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thats right!!!! |
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20th September 2001, 05:50 PM
you are right molly. i agree with u.
anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya |
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