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))))))) ZIndaGii ((((((((( - 30th June 2009, 03:57 PM
DostoN AadaaB.......

Ek adna si koshish kii hai Zindagi ko bayan karne kii..... Aapki nazar pesh kii hai apake replly's bahut zaruri hai...... Plz apni rai se nawaze........
Ke meri yeh koshish kahan tak sahi hai.........

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Mumkeen hii nahi hai karna, Aye Zindagi tafsira tera
Tu hi bata Aye Zindagi, Isper hai kya mashwara tera

Qaid e bamashakhat ki saza, Rooh ko hai jism mein
Samjha Nahi phir Zindagii, wafaat ka yun majra tera

Kehta hai dil bagawat se kabhi , Zindagii to fuzul hai
Rehta hai kyuN musalsal, jeene per maut khatra tera

Bad hawas si hai zindagi, Aye JaaN teri furkhat mein
Nazare pesh hai jo aaj, Aashiq hai woh ad-mara tera

Waqt e muddat hai kya, zindagi tu kabtalak mehdood
Befikhri hi ho jauN maiN, Bata kab talk hai sahara tera

Pucha Nahi kisine hal o hawal, the Hayat jab Kwahish
Hui jo jahaN se rukhsati phir, Nikal pada Tazkira tera

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30th June 2009, 04:22 PM
khwaish sahab...aadab

bahut hi seedhi aur saral baat karti hui bahut acchi ghazal likhi hai apne....
apki yeh koshish mujhe chu gayi...
meter ko madde nazar rakne ki koshish apne ki hai..yeh dikh raha hai mujhe..

ap to KAMAAL se bemisal hote ja rahe hai janab......

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khwaish sahab...aadab

bahut hi seedhi aur saral baat karti hui bahut acchi ghazal likhi hai apne....
apki yeh koshish mujhe chu gayi...
meter ko madde nazar rakne ki koshish apne ki hai..yeh dikh raha hai mujhe..

ap to KAMAAL se bemisal hote ja rahe hai janab......

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AadaaB Zidd sahaB...

Aapko meri koshish pasand aayi dil se shukriya........
Mujhe bher ka utna knowlege nahi hai.. but koshish karta hun meri gazal behr mein na bhi hui to achche flow mein ho....

Yeh to aapki zara nawazi hai sahab......... Hum koi kamal bhi nahi aur bemisal bhi nahi..

Khush rahiye aur apna saath banaye rakhiye...
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Smile Amazinggg .... - 23rd June 2010, 01:58 AM
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DostoN AadaaB.......

Ek adna si koshish kii hai Zindagi ko bayan karne kii..... Aapki nazar pesh kii hai apake replly's bahut zaruri hai...... Plz apni rai se nawaze........
Ke meri yeh koshish kahan tak sahi hai.........

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Mumkeen hii nahi hai karna, Aye Zindagi tafsira tera
Tu hi bata Aye Zindagi, Isper hai kya mashwara tera
Qaid e bamashakhat ki saza, Rooh ko hai jism mein
Samjha Nahi phir Zindagii, wafaat ka yun majra tera
Kehta hai dil bagawat se kabhi , Zindagii to fuzul hai
Rehta hai kyuN musalsal, jeene per maut khatra tera

Bad hawas si hai zindagi, Aye JaaN teri furkhat mein
Nazare pesh hai jo aaj, Aashiq hai woh ad-mara tera

Waqt e muddat hai kya, zindagi tu kabtalak mehdood
Befikhri hi ho jauN maiN, Bata kab talk hai sahara tera

Pucha Nahi kisine hal o hawal, the Hayat jab Kwahish
Hui jo jahaN se rukhsati phir, Nikal pada Tazkira tera
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Kwahish Ji ,,, aapki ek aur rachana padhi ... bahot hi pyaari ghazal hai .. bahot hi achchhe andaaz se aapne Zindagi kya hai ye bataane ki koshish bhi kud ki ..aur khud hi koshish mai kahe bhi diya ki .. zindagi kya hai ye bhala kaise samjhe yaa samjhaaye koi ... mind blowing.

Laga zindagi se jo Be-zubaan zakham mile hai shaayad har kisi ko kahi na kahi .. aapne un Bezubaan zakhamo ko Zubaan dene ki koshish kar di... and for me ..I feel ke aap usme kamyaab bhi rahe .. kyon ki un bezubaan zakhamo ko aapne khoob achchhe se bayaan kiya ..aur unki zubaan ne dil chhoo liya .. Puri ghazal hume bahot achchhi lagi ... par upar highlighted sher kuchh jyaada hi apne se lage..... Likhate rakhiye ... please.

Bhagwaan Ji aapko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe.

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23rd June 2010, 02:51 PM
Ek achchi koshish Khwaish Saheb..........daad kabool kare.

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Kwahish Ji ,,, aapki ek aur rachana padhi ... bahot hi pyaari ghazal hai .. bahot hi achchhe andaaz se aapne Zindagi kya hai ye bataane ki koshish bhi kud ki ..aur khud hi koshish mai kahe bhi diya ki .. zindagi kya hai ye bhala kaise samjhe yaa samjhaaye koi ... mind blowing.

Laga zindagi se jo Be-zubaan zakham mile hai shaayad har kisi ko kahi na kahi .. aapne un Bezubaan zakhamo ko Zubaan dene ki koshish kar di... and for me ..I feel ke aap usme kamyaab bhi rahe .. kyon ki un bezubaan zakhamo ko aapne khoob achchhe se bayaan kiya ..aur unki zubaan ne dil chhoo liya .. Puri ghazal hume bahot achchhi lagi ... par upar highlighted sher kuchh jyaada hi apne se lage..... Likhate rakhiye ... please.

Bhagwaan Ji aapko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe.
Gudiyaa jee aadaaB!

Maine aapke jitne reply's dekhe hai maiN us se kah sakta huN ke aap ek bahut bhavuk Vyaktimatv rakhne wali aur shayari ko gehrai se samjhne wali vyakti hai.......

Zindagii kya hia yeh main to kya shayad hi koi nahi bata sakta hai...... ke aakhir yeh zindagii hai kya...... iski tulna hi nahi kii ja sakti...... jaise koi mamtaa, pyaar aur ahsaasoN ki tulna nahi kar sakta waise hi zindagii ki tulna nahi kar sakta.......

Main aapka bahut bahut shukra guzaar huN jo aapne apna waqt mere likhe huye bekaar kalaamoN per diya.........

Aage bhi apna saat banaye rakhiye.......
Humesha khush rahiye.....
Khuda hafez........

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DostoN AadaaB.......

Ek adna si koshish kii hai Zindagi ko bayan karne kii..... Aapki nazar pesh kii hai apake replly's bahut zaruri hai...... Plz apni rai se nawaze........
Ke meri yeh koshish kahan tak sahi hai.........

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Mumkeen hii nahi hai karna, Aye Zindagi tafsira tera
Tu hi bata Aye Zindagi, Isper hai kya mashwara tera

Qaid e bamashakhat ki saza, Rooh ko hai jism mein
Samjha Nahi phir Zindagii, wafaat ka yun majra tera

Kehta hai dil bagawat se kabhi , Zindagii to fuzul hai
Rehta hai kyuN musalsal, jeene per maut khatra tera

Bad hawas si hai zindagi, Aye JaaN teri furkhat mein
Nazare pesh hai jo aaj, Aashiq hai woh ad-mara tera

Waqt e muddat hai kya, zindagi tu kabtalak mehdood
Befikhri hi ho jauN maiN, Bata kab talk hai sahara tera

Pucha Nahi kisine hal o hawal, the Hayat jab Kwahish
Hui jo jahaN se rukhsati phir, Nikal pada Tazkira tera

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Qaid e bamashakhat ki saza, Rooh ko hai jism mein
Samjha Nahi phir Zindagii, wafaat ka yun majra tera
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Ek achchi koshish Khwaish Saheb..........daad kabool kare.
Sajid Sahab AadaaB!

Janab ki daad dil se kabool hai...... per janab yeh kya baat huyi ke aapne mahine bhar ke liye moun rakha hai.....

Mujhe khushi huyi ke maine yahaaN NaqaaboN ki duniyaa meiN aap jaise dost bhi paye hai.......

Khush rahiye Apna khayaal rakhiye....
Khuda hafez......

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Qaid e bamashakhat ki saza, Rooh ko hai jism mein
Samjha Nahi phir Zindagii, wafaat ka yun majra tera

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