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| View Poll Results: GTM BEST OF THE BEST GHAZAL IS | |||
| Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui |
   
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15 | 60.00% |
| Fana hoke apni qabaa chahta hu.n |
  
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4 | 16.00% |
| Yun pyaar ko apne amar banaa doongaa |
  
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1 | 4.00% |
| Aye Dile nadaaN tujhe hua kya hai |
  
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2 | 8.00% |
| MaiN apne Zuhuur* kay parakhchey* meiN bataa hua'a |
  
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3 | 12.00% |
| Voters: 25. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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Gtm .."Best of the best" ..GROUP A... -
17th July 2010, 07:57 AM
DostoN humne socha ke kyuN na GTM se kuch din ki chutti le li jaaye, arre arre!! ghabraiye mat, GTM band nahi ho raha hai, jab tak aap sab isme josh ke saath hissa lete rahenge yeh kabhi band nahi hoga,
Bas humne socha ke , yahaaN "Best of the Best" contest chale kuch din..jo ghazaleiN ab tak ki winner rahi haiN, unme contest kiya jaaye... Yahi sochker humne GTM ki winner ghazals ke 3 groups banaye haiN, aur har group ki 15 din ki polling hogi, Aur 45 days ke baad jo 3 ghazaleiN chuni jayengi unme phir se " The grand finale" contest hoga... Aur us contest ke winner ghazal ko "super ghazal of sdc" ka khitaab diya jayega, aur us ghazal ke shayer ko special reps bhi milenge... Ummid hai aap sab ko hamare yeh idea pasand aaya hoga... Lijiye haazir "group A" ki ghazaleiN Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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17th July 2010, 08:03 AM
Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui
Mere aduu ko mujhse shikayat nahi.n hui Jab tak kisi hasii.n se mohabbat nahi.n hui Hamko sitam uthane ki aadat nahi.n hui Hamne to unke naam pe bheje the khat pe khat Unko jawaab dene ki fursat nahi.n hui Chehre pe ik haseen ke thehri rahi nazar Ankho.n se aur koi shararat nahi.n hui Jisko hara diya tha woh apna hi bhai tha Hokar bhi fatha-yaab musarrat nahi.n hui Har ek ki zubaa.n pe hamara hi naam hai Badnaam jo huwe tou kya shohrat nahi.n hui Zaalim ka saath dene ko aaye tamaam log Mazloom par kisi ki inayat nahi.n hui Tashna-labi ke waqt jo yaad aayi karbala Mehsoos mujhko pyaas ki shiddat nahi.n hui Paisa na tha jahez mein dene ke waaste Beti ghariib baap ki rukhsat nahi.n hui Auro.n ko maarne ke liye khudkushi na kar Yeh buzdili ki maut shahadat nahi.n hui Mehnat ke sath-sath ibadat bhi kijiye Mehnat nahi.n hui tou ibadat nahi.n hui Fezan leke aa gaye is waste ghazal Kehte the log aapki shirkat nahi.n hui |
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17th July 2010, 08:09 AM
Fana hoke apni qabaa chahta hu.n
"Tere ishq ki inteha chahta hu.n" Tum meri ho tumhari aankho mai mein Iqraar e mohabbat ka nasha chahta hu.n Tere gaisuo.n ko jo choo kar ke aaye Mehekti wo baad e saba chahta hu.n sirf nazr ka hum par chalega na mantar jo qatil bhi ho, wo ada chahta hu.n Tere kapkapate labo.n par machal kar Wo lafz hun jo, bikharna chahta hu.n Gar ishq e ghar tujhko khabr ho bta de Bhatakta musafir hun pata chahta hu.n Batao ke kaise tumhay mein bhulao.n Tumhara bhi mein mashwara chahta hu.n Is dour mai umeed e wafa sahyad aslam Purani riwayaton ke naqsh pa chahta hu.n |
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17th July 2010, 08:14 AM
Yun pyaar ko apne amar banaa doongaa
Uski yaadon mein ek ped lagaa doongaa Jab hawaa se udegi pattiyaan uski Mujhe yaad aayegi harek baat uski Baithoongaa jab bhi main ped ki chhanv mein Sochoongaa hoon uski zulfon ki chhanv mein Main uske galon ko sahlaa rahaa hoon Dil apnaa patton se bahlaa rahaa hoon Main zindagi in yadon ki chhanv mein bitaa dungaa Yun pyaar ko apne amar banaa doongaa Koi shaakh bhi uski main katne naa doongaa Subah-shaam uski hifaazat karoongaa Sichoongaa usko ankhon ke paani se Tere ishq mein paayi is nishaani se Us ped ki shaakhon mein tere pyaar ko dekhungaa Apne khwaabon ke rangeen sansaar ko dekhungaa Ab tujhe mujhse koi chheen nahi paayegaa Meri yadon se koi kyaa le jaayegaa Mere is ped par bas meri hukumat hogi Chhune ki bhi na kisi ko mohlat hogi Yun pyaar ko apne amar banaa doongaa Uski yadon mein ek ped lagaa doongaa. |
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17th July 2010, 08:20 AM
Aye Dile nadaaN tujhe hua kya hai
Kehta Zainy se GTM me rakha kya hai Khud hi uljhe hai apni shayari me Kaha unhone deep, gehra kya hai Jab chidiya chung jati hai khet sara Mayank aake puchte hai hua kya hai karte shayari Baqs bhi aaj pata chala Jisne bawaloN ke siva kiya kya hai Hassan sunata hai pariyoN ki kahani Kwahish puchta hai parineeta kya hai phata nadaan sahab ki biwi ka sar bolti hai ye 12 12 ginta kya hai? Maikhash sahab jate hi rehte hai Ya ilahi bar bar yeh majra kya hai Yeh radiff hi itna bekar mila hume Samajh mein nahi aata kafiya kya hai |
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17th July 2010, 08:21 AM
MaiN apne Zuhuur* kay parakhchey* meiN bataa hua'a
Wujood mera MusafatoN* ki ghubaar meiN ataa hua'a Na AndhiyoN ki Khabar na Gard-o-Pesh* ka pataa mujhey MaiN Musas'sal Azaab meiN, duniya se Bilkul Kataa hua'a Kuch Adhorey khwaab aur Kuch Sulagti YaadeiN liye MaiN Gum gashtah* Ajnabi MudatonN se Thakaa Hua'a Yeh Gumnam Rastey aur yeh Anjaan manzileiN MaiN hooN Uryaan* Pa Libas mera Phatta Hua'a Zindagi nay haraaya mujhey DostoN ne diya Dhoke MaiN Haara Hua'a Khiladi Taqdeer se Pitaa hua'a Har Khadam apne hi aghlaat* se maiN Tanhaa hua'a Naajane kab mera jism meri Rooh se Judaa hua'a zuhuur=appearance, parakhchey=parts musafaton= Distances gard-o-pesh= Approaching Dust gum-gashtah=wandering,lost uryaan=naked,bare Aghlat=mistakes |
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18th July 2010, 01:11 PM
Ghazlo ka world Cup..........hmmmm
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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19th July 2010, 07:54 PM
Tough Competition....................................... .................
All the best to all ghazals. Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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21st July 2010, 11:45 AM
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21st July 2010, 09:05 PM
Zainy ji pyaar bhari namaskaar.
bahut hi achii lagi aap ki yeh " best of the best" gazal ki koshish.umeed hai hai isay sab ki tarf se bharpoor himayat bhii milegi.ek sujhav hai agar aap ko pasand aay tou theek na bhii pasand aay tou bhii theek. sujhav yeh hai k is bast of the bast competition k baad sdc ki tarf se ek gazal sangreh nikala jaay jis mein best of best gazal pehle pannay pe ho.or us ke baad 20-25 gazal baki un sab hastioN ki hoN jin ki gazleiN is competition mein shirkat kar rehi hein.or beshak us sangreh par lagne wala paisa un sabhi se le lia jaay jo is meiN publish ho rehay hoN.yeh meri personal rai hai koi aisi jaroori bhii nahi.baki aap ki marzi.......... aap ka apna rajinderseep |
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23rd July 2010, 11:13 PM
sabhee dost Vote zaruur kare.n................!!!
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Best of Luck -
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24th July 2010, 10:24 PM
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Best of luck to all... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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24th July 2010, 11:29 PM
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Vaise to poori gazal hi sunahri hai aur kabil e daad hai lekin ye do sheir bhut achhe nibhae gae hain, inke lie be-shumaar daad : Parveen Komal Jisko hara diya tha woh apna hi bhai tha Hokar bhi fatha-yaab musarrat nahi.n hui Auro.n ko maarne ke liye khudkushi na kar Yeh buzdili ki maut shahadat nahi.n hui |
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26th July 2010, 01:46 AM
my vote goes to apne pyaar ko amar bana doonga.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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27th July 2010, 04:13 PM
Please vote.............................................. .....
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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