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| View Poll Results: GTM BEST OF THE BEST "GROUP B" GHAZAL IS | |||
| Abke ai dost tumhara yeh hunar dekhainge |
   
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2 | 15.38% |
| Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai |
  
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8 | 61.54% |
| Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere… |
  
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0 | 0% |
| Bheegi ankhon se usne pukaara hi to tha |
  
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1 | 7.69% |
| Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota |
  
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2 | 15.38% |
| Apne andar ke chupe insaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi |
  
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0 | 0% |
| Voters: 13. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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GTM .."Best of the Best "..Group B" -
1st August 2010, 03:53 AM
DostoN,
Jaise ki aap sab jaante hi haiN yahaaN "Best of the Best" contest chal raha hai... Group A ki winner ghazal "Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui" thi, jiske shayer FEZAN SAHAB haiN... Lijiye haazir hai "Group B" ki ghazaleiN.... Inhe padhiye aur apna kheemti vote dekar sahi ghazal ko jeetne me madad kijiye.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Aapki dost
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1st August 2010, 03:58 AM
Abke ai dost tumhara yeh hunar dekhainge kaise jeete ho leke dard-e-jigar dekhainge.. mo'ajije dekhe hain ham ne yooN to pehle bhii bahut abke barish mein jhulastaa apna ghar dekhainge..... pehle nazaron se zamaane ki bacha to le.n tujhe phir yeh hoga ki tujhe ek nazar dekhainge..... yun to raahon mein kati zindagi apni ab tak hoga tai kaise tire dil ka safar dekhainge..... gam ki taariikiyon se gar yeh huwaa bach paaye tab kahin hoga sakoo.n ki bhii sehar dekhainge.. umr bhar fikr men jinke liye rahna hai huwaa kyaa unheiN kuchh hai hamari bhii fikr dekhainge.... chal diye pyaar hamaaraa to yooN hi Thukraake zindagi tanha karoge jo basar dekhainge..... gair ki baahon mein jis roz wo soye honge 'veer' us roz tumhara bhii sabar dekhainge..... |
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1st August 2010, 03:59 AM
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai 'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine' Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai? dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai Sahra=desert,registan Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz Besood=unnessary,bina faida Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona |
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1st August 2010, 04:00 AM
Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere…
Nazar bhi hogi yuN hi, nam dheere dheere… Diwaane gar hai tanhai ke dono hum.. Hoga mehsoos dard-o-gham Dheere dheere… Adhoora ishq tera tohfa mujh ko.. Khushi se jaa mila, maatam dheere dheere… Thehar kar jaam hoNtoN se lagaana tum.. Chadega sar nasha, jaanam dheere dheere… Kahaani phir koi le maud mushkil saa,.. jidhar ye nikle mera dam dheere dheere Nahi ghamgeeN, gar hai zindagi taawil … Gham-e-furqat bhi hoga kam dheere dheere |
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1st August 2010, 04:01 AM
Bheegi ankhon se usne pukaara hi to tha
Maine na jaana vo khamosh ishaara hi to tha Main anjaan hi raha uske jazbaaton se Woh nazar me Jhilmilata sitaara hi to tha Uska kaandhe par sar rakh ke chalnaa Milaa ulfat ko zaraa sahaara hi to tha Kiya usne jab jab humse izhaar-e-mohabbat Laa na paye nazdikiya kasoor hamaara hi to tha Ab kisi aur ki bagia ko mehkaa rahi hai vo Maine usse dil ke aaine me utaara hi to tha Judaai ke palon me jaanaa mohabbat ko Paane ki khwaish me baazi haara hi to tha |
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1st August 2010, 04:02 AM
Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota
Mehboob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota Shikwa kare na koi, na koi kare shikayat Woh jaise huye mere, koi aisa nahi hota Socha unhe bataye, woh meri zarurat hai Apni ana ko lekin, hausla nahi hota Uljhi rahe hamesha, uljhano me ghar ki Jo na baste woh sath mere, basera nahi hota Kabhi Mehboob kabhi Maa kabhi Beti kabhi Bahu Har roop me haseen, ek chehra nahi hota Na mutmaeen huuN maiN, Na aaye tum bezaar Dhalti umar me humsa, koi jawaa.N nahi hota Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota Mehbob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota |
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1st August 2010, 04:03 AM
Apne andar ke chupe insaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
JahaaN banaane waale bhagvaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi KyoN is khadr nafrat hai yahaaN sabhi ke diloN mein DiloN meiN base haivaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi Majbur kar deta hai, apna jism bechne ke liye jisko In pathar iNsaano ke jahaaN se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi Aakhir hum, kyoN cheente hai kisi se jeene ka haq MaiN is mann, be-imaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi Maut ka manzar, khoon ka dariya beh raha hai har taraf HoNtoN par khili jhuthi muskaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi !! |
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2nd August 2010, 12:39 PM
bhot achi gazals hai all the best to all of them but my vote goes to this gazal
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai 'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine' Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai? dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai Sahra=desert,registan Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz Besood=unnessary,bina faida Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona  pawan(shayari) |
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4th August 2010, 03:03 PM
Vote zaruur karen!
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4th August 2010, 03:10 PM
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maine vote kar diya .............aapne kiya kya  ????? (last time nahi kar paaye thi, esi liye es baar sabse pahle kar diya)dosto vote jaroor kijiyega .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th August 2010, 09:00 PM
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http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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5th August 2010, 10:59 AM
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my vote goes to dis gazal...... All the best Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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7th August 2010, 07:57 PM
plzzzzz vote.............................................. .................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th August 2010, 11:18 PM
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is ghazal k liye mere paass word nahi hai..is ghazal likhne wale ko KKKHANTAHIR ka salaam..salaam...salaam............. wakai'atan mere pass lavz nahi hai tareef kerne k liye..aur yeh toh toh bahut hi umda likha hai. . ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai DIL se daad qabool ki jiye....bahut dino baad achcha qalaam padhne ko mila hai.. Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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12th August 2010, 02:03 PM
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13th August 2010, 05:40 PM
Votes Plzzzzzzzzzz......................................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th August 2010, 03:43 PM
last day of voting friends..........................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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