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GTM .."Best of the Best "..Group B" -
1st August 2010, 03:53 AM
DostoN,
Jaise ki aap sab jaante hi haiN yahaaN "Best of the Best" contest chal raha hai...
Group A ki winner ghazal "Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui" thi,
jiske shayer FEZAN SAHAB haiN...
Lijiye haazir hai "Group B" ki ghazaleiN....
Inhe padhiye aur apna kheemti vote dekar sahi ghazal ko jeetne me madad kijiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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1st August 2010, 03:58 AM
Abke ai dost tumhara yeh hunar dekhainge
kaise jeete ho leke dard-e-jigar dekhainge..
mo'ajije dekhe hain ham ne yooN to pehle bhii bahut
abke barish mein jhulastaa apna ghar dekhainge.....
pehle nazaron se zamaane ki bacha to le.n tujhe
phir yeh hoga ki tujhe ek nazar dekhainge.....
yun to raahon mein kati zindagi apni ab tak
hoga tai kaise tire dil ka safar dekhainge.....
gam ki taariikiyon se gar yeh huwaa bach paaye
tab kahin hoga sakoo.n ki bhii sehar dekhainge..
umr bhar fikr men jinke liye rahna hai huwaa
kyaa unheiN kuchh hai hamari bhii fikr dekhainge....
chal diye pyaar hamaaraa to yooN hi Thukraake
zindagi tanha karoge jo basar dekhainge.....
gair ki baahon mein jis roz wo soye honge
'veer' us roz tumhara bhii sabar dekhainge.....
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1st August 2010, 03:59 AM
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
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1st August 2010, 04:00 AM
Chala huN maiN, chale ho tum dheere dheere…
Nazar bhi hogi yuN hi, nam dheere dheere…
Diwaane gar hai tanhai ke dono hum..
Hoga mehsoos dard-o-gham Dheere dheere…
Adhoora ishq tera tohfa mujh ko..
Khushi se jaa mila, maatam dheere dheere…
Thehar kar jaam hoNtoN se lagaana tum..
Chadega sar nasha, jaanam dheere dheere…
Kahaani phir koi le maud mushkil saa,..
jidhar ye nikle mera dam dheere dheere
Nahi ghamgeeN, gar hai zindagi taawil …
Gham-e-furqat bhi hoga kam dheere dheere
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1st August 2010, 04:01 AM
Bheegi ankhon se usne pukaara hi to tha
Maine na jaana vo khamosh ishaara hi to tha
Main anjaan hi raha uske jazbaaton se
Woh nazar me Jhilmilata sitaara hi to tha
Uska kaandhe par sar rakh ke chalnaa
Milaa ulfat ko zaraa sahaara hi to tha
Kiya usne jab jab humse izhaar-e-mohabbat
Laa na paye nazdikiya kasoor hamaara hi to tha
Ab kisi aur ki bagia ko mehkaa rahi hai vo
Maine usse dil ke aaine me utaara hi to tha
Judaai ke palon me jaanaa mohabbat ko
Paane ki khwaish me baazi haara hi to tha
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1st August 2010, 04:02 AM
Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota
Mehboob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota
Shikwa kare na koi, na koi kare shikayat
Woh jaise huye mere, koi aisa nahi hota
Socha unhe bataye, woh meri zarurat hai
Apni ana ko lekin, hausla nahi hota
Uljhi rahe hamesha, uljhano me ghar ki
Jo na baste woh sath mere, basera nahi hota
Kabhi Mehboob kabhi Maa kabhi Beti kabhi Bahu
Har roop me haseen, ek chehra nahi hota
Na mutmaeen huuN maiN, Na aaye tum bezaar
Dhalti umar me humsa, koi jawaa.N nahi hota
Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota
Mehbob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota
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1st August 2010, 04:03 AM
Apne andar ke chupe insaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
JahaaN banaane waale bhagvaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
KyoN is khadr nafrat hai yahaaN sabhi ke diloN mein
DiloN meiN base haivaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
Majbur kar deta hai, apna jism bechne ke liye jisko
In pathar iNsaano ke jahaaN se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
Aakhir hum, kyoN cheente hai kisi se jeene ka haq
MaiN is mann, be-imaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi
Maut ka manzar, khoon ka dariya beh raha hai har taraf
HoNtoN par khili jhuthi muskaan se ladta huN kabhi-kabhi !!
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2nd August 2010, 12:39 PM
bhot achi gazals hai all the best to all of them but my vote goes to this gazal
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
pawan(shayari)
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4th August 2010, 03:03 PM
Vote zaruur karen!
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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4th August 2010, 03:10 PM
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Vote zaruur karen!
~Dhaval
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maine vote kar diya .............aapne kiya kya ????? (last time nahi kar paaye thi, esi liye es baar sabse pahle kar diya)
dosto vote jaroor kijiyega
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th August 2010, 09:00 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Abke ai dost tumhara yeh hunar dekhainge
kaise jeete ho leke dard-e-jigar dekhainge..
mo'ajije dekhe hain ham ne yooN to pehle bhii bahut
abke barish mein jhulastaa apna ghar dekhainge.....
pehle nazaron se zamaane ki bacha to le.n tujhe
phir yeh hoga ki tujhe ek nazar dekhainge.....
yun to raahon mein kati zindagi apni ab tak
hoga tai kaise tire dil ka safar dekhainge.....
gam ki taariikiyon se gar yeh huwaa bach paaye
tab kahin hoga sakoo.n ki bhii sehar dekhainge..
umr bhar fikr men jinke liye rahna hai huwaa
kyaa unheiN kuchh hai hamari bhii fikr dekhainge....
chal diye pyaar hamaaraa to yooN hi Thukraake
zindagi tanha karoge jo basar dekhainge.....
gair ki baahon mein jis roz wo soye honge
'veer' us roz tumhara bhii sabar dekhainge.....
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Mera vote Abke ai dost tumhara yeh hunar dekhainge is ghazal ke liye hai.
Ajay Nidaan (09630819356)
http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com
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Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi
par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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5th August 2010, 10:59 AM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
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my vote goes to dis gazal......
All the best
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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7th August 2010, 07:57 PM
plzzzzz vote.............................................. .................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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8th August 2010, 11:18 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
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is ghazal k liye mere paass word nahi hai..is ghazal likhne wale ko KKKHANTAHIR ka salaam..salaam...salaam.............
wakai'atan mere pass lavz nahi hai tareef kerne k liye..aur yeh toh toh bahut hi umda likha hai.
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ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
DIL se daad qabool ki jiye....bahut dino baad achcha qalaam padhne ko mila hai..
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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12th August 2010, 02:03 PM
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Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota
Mehboob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota
Shikwa kare na koi, na koi kare shikayat
Woh jaise huye mere, koi aisa nahi hota
Socha unhe bataye, woh meri zarurat hai
Apni ana ko lekin, hausla nahi hota
Uljhi rahe hamesha, uljhano me ghar ki
Jo na baste woh sath mere, basera nahi hota
Kabhi Mehboob kabhi Maa kabhi Beti kabhi Bahu
Har roop me haseen, ek chehra nahi hota
Na mutmaeen huuN maiN, Na aaye tum bezaar
Dhalti umar me humsa, koi jawaa.N nahi hota
Itna hua mushkil, ke ab aasaa.N nahi hota
Mehbob mera mujhse, bayaa.N nahi hota
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my vote goes to dis gazal..
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13th August 2010, 05:40 PM
Votes Plzzzzzzzzzz......................................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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15th August 2010, 03:43 PM
last day of voting friends..........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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