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shake me up-wake me up - 19th June 2010, 05:49 AM
Whenever i fall a deep, whenever i go asleep. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. Whenever my mind becomes a bin, whenever i think a sin, thee my god thou my conscious, shake me up- wake me up. Whenever i forget thee, whenever i just think of me. you my god you my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. whenever i leave my way, whenever i go stray. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up

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Whenever i fall a deep, whenever i go asleep. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. Whenever my mind becomes a bin, whenever i think a sin, thee my god thou my conscious, shake me up- wake me up. Whenever i forget thee, whenever i just think of me. you my god you my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. whenever i leave my way, whenever i go stray. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up

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Whenever i fall a deep, whenever i go asleep. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. Whenever my mind becomes a bin, whenever i think a sin, thee my god thou my conscious, shake me up- wake me up. Whenever i forget thee, whenever i just think of me. you my god you my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. whenever i leave my way, whenever i go stray. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up

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its realy a very nice poem ......god vl alwayas listen 2 u....
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its realy a very nice poem ......god vl alwayas listen 2 u....
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Whenever i fall a deep, whenever i go asleep. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. Whenever my mind becomes a bin, whenever i think a sin, thee my god thou my conscious, shake me up- wake me up. Whenever i forget thee, whenever i just think of me. you my god you my conscious, shake me up-wake me up. whenever i leave my way, whenever i go stray. thee my god, thou my conscious, shake me up-wake me up

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A very nice prayer in poetry form...!

Thank you, Rajinder Ji

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29th July 2010, 12:48 AM
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