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Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno - 18th June 2006, 11:48 AM

Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno


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18th June 2006, 01:30 PM

shrdha dost

ek bohat khoobsurat ehsaas, ek nihayet pur-lutf aur haseen jazbe ko aap ne apni is ghazel mein kiyaa hai.
aap ke kalam ki khoobsurti is mein chupa jazbaa aur khud-supurdgi ka walwala hai jo aap ko bohat mumtaaz ker raha hai aur munfarid bana raha hai.
ajab si naghmagi, taazgi, aur yagaangat ka ehsaas jaga rahi hai aapki yeh ghazel.
shrdha aap ki tehreer aap ki zehni pukhtgi ki alaamat hai aur zindagi se aap ki mohabbat ki daleel hai.
isi tarah likhti rahein, aap ko bohat aage jaana hai , yeh yaad rakhein.
hamari duayein hamesha aap ke saath hongi. aap mehsoos karein.

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18th June 2006, 01:53 PM

Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno

beautifulll.....

Shraddha,

A very very very beautiful poem... Tumhaare aashaar ki saadgi dil chhoo jaati hai... jab bhi tum saada lafzon me likhti ho ek alag hi baat aati hai.... mujhe bahut pasand aayi yeh ghazal tumhaari....

yun hi likhti raho... and do TC


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hi - 18th June 2006, 02:43 PM

very well expressed and nice poetry shrddha
keep it up
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hi - 18th June 2006, 02:43 PM

very well expressed and nice poetry shrddha
keep it up
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Re: Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno - 18th June 2006, 07:17 PM

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Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno
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abhi kya kahun......shaayad shabdon ka gareeb mehsoos kar raha hoon aapki in himmat deti hui panktiyon ke aage.
Aapki yeh peshkash sach mein ek 'shabdon ka sangam' hai. Bahaut kuch kehgayi hai aapki har ek pankti aur bahaut kuch degayi hai prerna ke roop mein. Isi tarah likhtey rahiyega aur aapko parhney ka awsar detey rahiyega.

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18th June 2006, 09:49 PM

Wonderfully written shrdha di,

Keep writing ... take care
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18th June 2006, 11:46 PM

shraddhha
sach kaha hai vipin ji ne... shabdo ka akaal sa pad gaya ho jaise ,, ye bataane ke liye ki ye kitni saadgi se likhi gayi khoobsoorat peshkash hai
yu hi likhti raho dear
apna khayal rakhna


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Re: Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno - 19th June 2006, 11:31 AM

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Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno
Shraddha ji, namastey
ye sach mei bohat-bohat-bohat sunder hei. Jaise lafzo ne baandhliya ho or keh rahe ho ki humey pado or kho jao.

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19th June 2006, 11:47 AM

Priye Shraddha...

Tumhari iss rachnaa mein chahat aur jeene ka jazzbaa umadhta chala aa raha hai...ek geet kee tarah dil mein ghar kar gaye yeh ashaar...khaaskar

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

kyun nahin...duniya kee har adbhut kriti, har reet kuchh na kucch tau sikhaa hi rahi hai roz roz hamein...bus ham aankhein khol ke dekhein tau...


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19th June 2006, 05:20 PM

Sharda ji
bahut khoob,
good one. keep it continue.


Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno


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Thumbs up Hi - 20th June 2006, 01:17 AM

HI shard

bahote dino bade tume hara likha pada aacha laga bhoate hi aacha likha hia tumne simple laine truth of life. nice work keep it up

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Baarish ki boondo se uthta hai ek geet suno
Man mai ho kushi, to hai banta sangeet suno

Girna aur samhalna, zindgi ke pahloon hai
Ek chhot se na hona kabhi, bhay bheet suno

Suraj se seekho jalna,chand se milke chalna
Phool se hi nahi, karokaanton se v preet suno

Dhoop mai saya sang,andhere mai koi nahi
In sabse gila kya,hai ye duniya ki reet suno

Zindgi mai SHRDDHA ho,pyaar ka jazbha ho
Jine k liye aarzoo jaruri,mere man-meet suno


Wah di...

kitne dino baad aapko padha...
ek furti si bhar gai badan mein..

aapko padhkar energy milti hai... likhti rahiye aapke bache younhi phalte phoolte rahenge




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