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MuhobatteN di tune! - 8th September 2006, 05:29 PM

Bata nahi sakti, agar puchhoge!
shayad kahungi kuch.. agar sataane pe aa gaye..!

jatana mumqin nahi k kya mila hai tumse..
likhungi kagaz pe kabhi..gar lafz kuch paakeezah...
bulaane pe aa gaye!


Ham-nasheen banke mujhko Hasraten di tune
kab na jane ye diwaareN, ye ChhateN di tune!
Mai teri baahoN mai aashiyaaN dekhti huN
Kon jaane kis aada se KurbateN di tune..!
Mai jinke daayroN mai, aazaad rehti huN
na jane kab mujhe esi SarhadeN di tune..!
Tere sath katne wali raahoN ki umr kam hai
in raaho ko kis shey ki RishwateN di tune!
jab se mila hai, tune, apna bana liya hai..
kab sochne samjhane ki MohlateN di tune!
Ye apne darimyaaN jo hai, raaz e rabt kya hai..
chup reh k kese itni, MuhobatteN di tune!!

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Hi - 8th September 2006, 10:25 PM

Hi komal ji

kesi hai aap ?

behot deno baad aap ka dekha aaj bhi vehi dar4d hai aap ki likhavat mey sach mey dard ko ko lafzo mey pirona tho koi aap se sikhe peta nehi aaj tak hum ku nehi likh paaye mager khush hai aap ke is kalaam ko padh kar ke ha dil ko chu ke geya har lafz aap ka behot khub

hamesha ki terh is baar bhi aap ka ye kalaam mere paas save kar reha hu ............... bye take care of ur self

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11th September 2006, 11:06 PM

Helllo...sumonly ji....THank U so much....for liking it!!...

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8th October 2006, 12:50 PM

komal ji bhaot hi achha likha hai bas aise hi likte rahiye aap

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Thankss a lott dhaval!

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Dear KOmal.. Aaj jaane kaise baahar se hi nazar padi is qalaam per... aur sach me.. agar aise kahu ki dil me utar gaya... bahut achha laga to i feel like m getting too formal... truely speaking i luved these feelings u wrote.. bina kisi banawat ke..
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Dear KOmal.. Aaj jaane kaise baahar se hi nazar padi is qalaam per... aur sach me.. agar aise kahu ki dil me utar gaya... bahut achha laga to i feel like m getting too formal... truely speaking i luved these feelings u wrote.. bina kisi banawat ke..
very sweet
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HI....Pallavi

I am very glad u liked it..
Thank you so much...formally nahi dil se!

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27th October 2006, 03:21 AM

its really gud
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"meri bhi jindgi me ye pal aaye dev
bas aankh kholu aur tu najar aaye"

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Bata nahi sakti, agar puchhoge!
shayad kahungi kuch.. agar sataane pe aa gaye..!

jatana mumqin nahi k kya mila hai tumse..
likhungi kagaz pe kabhi..gar lafz kuch paakeezah...
bulaane pe aa gaye!


Ham-nasheen banke mujhko Hasraten di tune
kab na jane ye diwaareN, ye ChhateN di tune!
Mai teri baahoN mai aashiyaaN dekhti huN
Kon jaane kis aada se KurbateN di tune..!
Mai jinke daayroN mai, aazaad rehti huN
na jane kab mujhe esi SarhadeN di tune..!
Tere sath katne wali raahoN ki umr kam hai
in raaho ko kis shey ki RishwateN di tune!
jab se mila hai, tune, apna bana liya hai..
kab sochne samjhane ki MohlateN di tune!
Ye apne darimyaaN jo hai, raaz e rabt kya hai..
chup reh k kese itni, MuhobatteN di tune!!

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funny - 10th November 2006, 07:01 PM

Ruth gya hai mujhko manane waala
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Per jaane kya sonchta hai
Yeh khula darwaaza
Shayad rasta bhool gaya, aaane waaala

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Gham ki khalish ko dil ki tamanna bana diya
Khuda kisi ko kis par fidaa na kare,
Agar kare to Qyamat tak judaa na kare

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